The Narration System That Began in Konoha
从木叶开始的旁白系统
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 935k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Interesting Souls
A lot of really fun novels never get much attention and then suddenly get abandoned. It's a shame. I tend to clear out my bookshelf, so I'm saving them here as keepsakes. Overall, they're lighthearted comedies. After all, I read to relax. (I personally prefer novels with no heroine or just one heroine.)
Books I've Read
Call me Shennong. I've been reading for ten years, and I have pretty eclectic tastes.
Books I Loved That Were Overlooked, Guaranteed by Five Years of Reading
Good reads, creative ideas, science, no harems, smart characters, and no overpowered protagonists.
Promising New Reads Library
This list is for novels that haven't been released as paid books yet, or have only just gone on sale. The descriptions are copied from the books themselves because I can't think of a better way to describe them. I've finished reading every book before posting it. I'm pretty tolerant of flaws, so my tastes may differ from the mainstream. Feel free to share your own opinions about the books on this list. Please favorite the list.
A Snack Bar of Intriguing Premises (Might Not Fill You Up If You're Out of Books, but Come Take a Look)
I tend to prefer simple, easy-to-read stories. What matters most to me is whether the premise is fun and whether the story is entertaining. (I'll update this list from time to time.)
【A Grab Bag of Great Books】
A one-stop collection of all kinds of great books
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This narration is so buggy, everyone can see it, all the secrets are known to each other, there will be no reasonable conflicts between people, and the story will not continue. . . . The hanging range is not suitable.
It's quite interesting, it's a kind of spoiler article. But unlike some Q&A and live broadcasts that are very thorough and prone to aesthetic fatigue, the narration is quite enjoyable. But with the presence of narration, there may not be much combat description. As for the protagonist being Sasuke's younger brother, it's actually not bad. After all, it's interesting to see the tsundere Erzhu show off in front of his younger brother.
The writing is very interesting, and I laughed out loud just reading it. The creativity is really good, but I personally feel that the entry point of the protagonist's identity is not very good. Sasuke's twin brother Sora is too bad. I really hope the author can maintain the level he started at. Many books that rely half on creativity are at their peak in the first fifty chapters, then start to weaken after a hundred chapters, and then there is no more 🤔... Come on, author!
This book does not change the plot, the author is pure water, there is one more person, the whole world has a narration, such a big change, the plot remains the same, the author at least has some creative ability, I came to read the novel, not to see the Naruto anime, in short, it is an ordinary book
Aren't you tired of having to poop and pee again and again with smoke bombs?
To be honest, the protagonist is useless. After the narration in the ninja world, nothing has changed except for revealing some secrets. Li's fracture is still broken, and Hayate is dead as well. Team 7 is still following the original trajectory, not much has changed. Sasuke is also cursed. The existence of the protagonist is the same as the narration, just a few words, except for the addition of some disgusting enemies.
This kind of book is just fresh to read at the beginning. Without any changes, readers will get tired after reading dozens of chapters. The author seems to regard this kind of alternative spoilers as the only highlight of the whole novel, but readers will not feel any pleasure after reading the whole novel. But the essence of Naruto fandom is that strength is king. The Hatake Yasuo allocated the words very well and used gags as spices. The results of this novel are basically the same. .
It felt okay in the beginning, but when I read Chapter 16, I felt like it wasn't quite so good. The Third Generation conspiracy theory should really be written in every fanfic. After watching the anime a few times, I felt that the Third Generation was a little ineffective in dealing with Naruto's problem. What other problems are there?
This book was a hit. . . . Not saved
After reading a few chapters, I suddenly realized that this narration system is the pursuit of mutual understanding between people in comics. Isn't this more awesome than Eye of the Moon?