The Narration System That Began in Konoha

This narration is a huge plot hole. Everyone can see it, all the secrets are known to each other, there's no reasonable conflict between people, and the story can't continue... This kind of setup is inappropriate.

It's quite interesting, kind of a spoiler-filled piece. But unlike some Q&A or live streams that reveal everything too thoroughly and easily lead to viewer fatigue, the narration is quite amusing. However, with the narration, there probably won't be much action description. The fact that the protagonist is Sasuke's younger brother is actually quite good; after all, it's entertaining to see the tsundere Sasuke putting on airs in front of his brother.

It's very interesting to read; I laughed out loud while reading. The concept is really excellent. However, I personally feel that the entry point regarding the protagonist's identity is not very good. Sasuke's twin brother, Sora, is so lame. I really hope the author can maintain the level of the beginning. Many books that rely half on creativity have their peak in the first fifty chapters, but start to weaken after the hundredth chapter, and then that's it. 🤔... Keep it up, author!

This book doesn't change the plot at all. The author is a complete idiot. They added one character and made a huge change to the entire world with a narrator, but the plot remains completely unchanged. Author, you should at least have some creative ability! I'm here to read a novel, not to watch Naruto. In short, it's a mediocre book.

Aren't you annoyed by all the smoke bombs and poop/pee stuff?

To be honest, the protagonist is useless. The addition of narrators to the ninja world only reveals some secrets; nothing changes. Rock Lee still broke his bone, Hayate still died, Team 7 continues on the same path, and Sasuke is still marked with a cursed seal. The protagonist's existence, like the narrators, is just padding the word count, offering nothing more than a few more scenes of annoying enemies.

This kind of book is only interesting at first glance. Without any changes, readers will get tired of it after a few dozen chapters. The author seems to have made this kind of unconventional spoiler the only highlight of the novel, but readers don't get any enjoyment from reading the whole thing. However, the essence of Naruto fanfiction is still that strength reigns supreme.

The beginning was alright, but it started to decline around chapter sixteen. The Third Hokage conspiracy theory seems to be a staple of every fanfic. After watching the anime several times, I felt the Third Hokage was somewhat inactive in handling Naruto's situation. What other problems were there?

This book is a flop... Beyond saving.

After reading a few chapters, it suddenly dawned on me that this narration system is exactly what the comics are all about—mutual understanding between people. Isn't that way much cooler than Eye of the Moon?