Immortality Begins with the Great Destiny Technique

The subject matter is good, but the author's writing is not good and the chapters are poisonous.

Don't brag about eternal life. Crazy stacking of boxes is of no use. Those who live in eternal life haven't even gotten rid of the three thousand avenues spit out by the gate of eternal life. I really didn't expect that there are still people who use the Golden Immortal Immortal to touch the Porcelain Perfect Immortal Emperor. The description of the Immortal Emperor in the special code is that it is the end of the road of cultivation, the end of the Tao and the Dharma, and it will never fall. It is no longer just a stack of boxes that can touch porcelain, right? It was only the failure of the Holy Ruins that gave them the idea of ​​immortality. Which Immortal Emperor of the Perfect World did not arrive by opening up a new path of cultivation?

Chen Bai: My destiny is up to me, Deep Blue! Um... Great destiny spell, extra points!

Chapter 1: He was exchanged for blood by his biological father. If his biological father wanted to kill him, he would not be saved. If he did not want to kill him, he would not send people to hunt him down. The second point is that Governor Meng only needs to say that he is a poor child picked up on the road, and neither he nor the protagonist will be affected. However, he made the worst choice. The protagonist still feels that it is not good for him. Does he have no ability to think for himself? I don't even know what to complain about anymore

What's going on? Author, your recent writing has been very unsatisfactory. How was your previous momentum? What about the invincible momentum of the gods?

After reading the first chapter, the setting of illegitimate children is amazing. Still in a world of cultivation. It would be magical and outrageous for an illegitimate child to be deprived of all kinds of rights.

The anti-theft is so good, but don't you want to protect the rights of readers? I subscribed to many books, Eunuch, and I vomited. I really want to say rnm and refund my money.

When you look at the worldview of illegitimate children in the beginning, you know that the book's IQ is not very high. How much hatred does Governor Meng have to have with the protagonist before he admits that pig's feet are illegitimate and is so detrimental to others and self-interested? Is the man named Meng still a Governor with this little IQ? The key point is that Pig Trotter also thinks Governor Meng is quite good😊, showing a strong sense of retardation...

It's extremely poisonous, the illegitimate child setting is disgusting, and it's still a brainless routine... Pretend with a crooked mouth, beat the outer disciples, come to the inner sect, and then come to the true disciples, elders, family... Every time you hit someone and pretend to offend a powerful enemy and cause trouble, there has to be a brainless person to wipe the butt... I'm laughing so hard 😆, I can't stand this kind of brainless poison.

The setting is too poisonous. It is set that illegitimate children are not tolerated by the law. As a result, you are not your biological illegitimate child, but someone else's son. There is obviously a better way, but you choose to use such a poisonous method. Isn't it good to adopt an adopted son instead of a godson?

Zhutianyandao's single stream is good-looking, but the leader has a push-pull oil bottle and it's not interesting. I hope it will be written in the direction of acting.

I died of poison after reading the first chapter. The author should find a factory to fix the screws.

Jue, he has been practicing martial arts despite the loss of energy and blood. It is no surprise that the protagonist dies in training one day.

The writing is very good, the writing is clear, the thinking is quick, the literary talent is outstanding, the article is full of wisdom, a short article wrote about fantasy cultivation, and also brought the martial arts. I admire you very much, I believe you can become another platinum writer! Come on! Come on! There is another thing I want to tell you. If you publish a book, it will be troublesome on other platforms, because I have been reading on this platform, and I don't want to be blind in my youth.

Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, I thought it was the kind of great destiny magic similar to eternal life. In the end, it was still the system, so I accepted it. Take eternal life as an example. A small destiny spell can achieve the level of a god. Isn't this better than the system? You can write a great destiny spell, Krypton Fate + Disruption, to control the world's destiny. You can upgrade directly by rocket. Then you can take the destiny route and overcome all the ways. In the mid-term, you will be exposed to all the worlds and multiverses. If you want to write something original, write something original, if you want to write a fanfic, write a fanfic, how cool it is. The system has its own fate, so why do we still try to sell it on someone else's head? Isn't this better than your system?

Studio work? The protagonist's intelligence is a bit unacceptable.

This author is the same as Ninth Destiny. He has strength and skill, but he always does some poisonous plots to test readers.

The author still likes to feed poison at the beginning. He really makes me cry to death.

Did Shen Nong test poison? ? ?

I suggest you go directly to the factory to tighten the screws.

This is how the level 5 author number is written? ? After reading more than ten chapters, I felt that Shen Nong was enough to leave me alone. I bought the account 😰.

The author might as well write about unlimited streaming! Transformation stories are not good at writing. If the author is still like this in his small books, you might as well continue writing the original world of Infinite Flow. Reorganize the outline of your books about eunuchs and change them to have the protagonists travel into these worlds, and write them like the Great Chronicles.

Does this author stop writing books?

He died while trying poison, could you please stop licking his B-face to take advantage of Yongsheng's popularity, and wrote something about J8?

Is the account sold? What have you written in the last two books?

The combat power of the immortal world basically collapsed in the later stage, and it is completely invisible. The protagonist is completely invincible in leapfrog battles without any opponent. The combat power is too serious. The key is that no one can live forever in that world. The end of the road is the door of eternal life.

Lao Lu's Sanqing setting is too strong. The past is eternal, reality is eternal, and the future is eternal. In other novels, they are just trash who only throw innate spiritual treasures into fights. Is there such an awesome Sanqing novel? Sanqing can be a super supporting role.

You are always a eunuch, so why are you writing a book? Several books in a row. . .

It's so fake. Even if the governor's son is an illegitimate son, he won't be so bad.

The characters are vividly created, 😃