My Family Cultivates Immortality, My Mobile Phone Has Traveled Through Time

The foreshadowing was gone in the end, the medicine was gone, it was just the tree

After reading about 20 chapters, I feel that the author's control of the plot is relatively stable and the pace is okay. But some of the author's data settings are outrageous. For example: 1. The time required to practice the 9th level of Qi training is actually the same at the beginning (according to the protagonist's mother). As long as the external conditions remain unchanged, it should become increasingly difficult to practice, and the time required should gradually increase. 2. The price setting is very unreasonable. A flying boat that can carry 500 people at a speed of 100 meters per second costs 10 spirit stones. Later, when the protagonist tests the civilian qualifications and meets Erya, the Trojan he takes out also costs 10 spirit stones. I asked if this was outrageous? In addition, there are a few typos in this book, and the words "layers" and "individuals" have appeared several times. Occasionally the author will mention the content or characters of other novels, which is also very funny and can be said to be a low-level mistake. Excluding the above shortcomings, it is still quite readable. I hope the author will work on it more carefully.

I feel very good. "Broken and then established" is stable. Maybe I have read too many cool articles and I am immune to cool articles. I occasionally look at such mediocre protagonists and feel that I have the patience to read on. Hahaha😄

The protagonist is too kind, hesitant to do things, lets nature take its course, has a holy heart, and never does anything to hurt others. The Demonic Cultivation Speed ​​is the fastest. The White Bone Demon King has Tianlinggen. He builds the foundation at the age of fifteen, the Purple Mansion at the age of thirty, the golden elixir at the age of fifty, and the Nascent Soul at the age of eighty. The reincarnation emperor has five spiritual roots, building the foundation at the age of seventy-five, the purple mansion at the age of a hundred, the golden elixir at the age of two hundred, and the Nascent Soul at the age of three hundred and fifty. The protagonist's three spiritual roots, with the help of a golden finger mobile phone, can be cultivated slower than the righteous two spiritual roots. The advantage is: ignoring the bottleneck of cultivation, he broke through the Zi Mansion at almost two hundred years old. He only started to exert his strength in the later part of the book, and the finale broke out. He is the only one who dominates, becoming one of the top strong ones, and having the last laugh!

This is more mortal than a mortal cultivating immortality

Personally, I feel that the writing is pretty good. Cultivation of immortality is inherently difficult. You cannot say that if you are the protagonist, the people around you will not die. When the family is big, there will always be some black sheep. Come on, author, don't care what others say. I am very optimistic about you.

This golden finger looks very powerful, but in fact it is rubbish. It can't even keep up with the Heavenly Spiritual Root. How dare you become a time traveler? Do you know what a time traveler is? One day of practicing Qi, three months of foundation building, ten years of golden elixir, and one hundred years of becoming an immortal. Do you understand? 🙂

The author is too abusive. He was killed at home, chased when he went out. He went to buy medicine at home and was beaten. He went out to practice magic and went to see the golden elixir and was beaten again. He was chased and beaten everywhere because he didn't know how to do anything. He lived by luck.

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I actually spent an hour reading this book. It was a waste of my life and I was pretending to be a family cultivator. What the hell did I end up writing? In order to survive, the ancestor of the family actually wanted to take away the children of his own family. I don't deny that there are such things, and there are more. But the pen is in your hand, not for you to feed the readers with poison. The ancestor wrote so righteously and awe-inspiring in the past, and then he took the lives of his descendants... I reluctantly endured here, and then they gave me poison again, and the family was actually wiped out! I'll fuck you! Farewell!

This golden finger is of no use. It is written that the golden finger is missing. Wrote a bunch of passers-by. It's so boring and boring. Bye bye

Has this family broken up? The family has come out to seize the body. Where can the family cohesion come from? It's still my ancestor! If the upper beam is not straight and the lower beam is crooked, what is there to write about this kind of family essay? Is it not good to just write a prose essay?

I read a hundred chapters despite the poison, and it made me angry. My family cultivated immortality, and then the family was destroyed. All kinds of enemies hated me, and I suppressed them for various reasons. The family cultivated immortality but did not develop the family. They each practiced their own way. They did not join other sect colleges, nor upgraded to fight monsters. Even a bunch of clan members died. It can inspire the protagonist to work hard, always go with the flow, and sigh when he sees difficulties in breaking through. It makes me feel tired. It is better for the protagonist to find a deserted place to practice slowly. Anyway, it is the same, there is no opportunity, and he has to rely on himself. This is one of the most poisonous mortal romance novels I have ever read.

I can't say that the author's writing is not good, after all, everyone likes it differently, but I still want to say that it was a bit disappointing. I feel that the protagonist has no mentality of getting stronger at all, and has always been passively growing.

Alas, he is an old author after all. The content he wrote is too strange. It neither highlights the protagonist nor the family nor the golden finger. After reading the first thirty chapters, I can't even remember the name of the protagonist.

The hook is the same as the lack of hook. The narrative is uneven here and there. The idea is good, but the writing is so poor that it looks quite messy.

Who can play the most low-end operations with a mobile phone that has the potential of a civilized artifact and unlimited master god!

I have never understood what Liu Shui Wen is, but I have learned a lot today.

The content does not match the cover. This phone looks powerful, but in fact it is of no use. The family cultivates immortality and the family is gone.

The main character has the worst qualifications, right? 😰, all the supporting characters are better than the main character.

I don't understand. Chapter 7 is called Father's Sacrifice. I thought the protagonist's father died, but he didn't. It's a ridiculous chapter name.

I heard that it gets better and better later on, and I couldn't hold on after reading about 100 chapters. My childhood sweetheart, Tian Linggen, didn't want it anymore, so I went to deceive myself into accepting a forced marriage, and gave birth to a second child. I am also a big mother, and a broken mobile phone is of no use in the early stage. No matter how good the writing is in the later stage, there are only a few people who can resist this wave of poison in the early stage. Well! I feel sorry for the author. No matter how good the work is, no one will read it if it doesn't make money. What's the point of writing it?

When I saw Tianlinggen Erya suddenly appeared in Chapter 18, I knew I could quit, let's go, let's go, the author started to slap himself in the face.

In the end, if you are concerned about the family flow, you still play the Lone Ranger. Only when you play Qinglian Peak can you reflect the family flow.

Finished reading, rating: junk novel

It's boring. I wonder if there's something wrong with the protagonist's mentality. The author's writing is too poor.

The battle plot and growth plot are very good and well written. I just don't understand why the protagonist's growth is only mentioned so much because of fate. Well. It's a pity to see. The family tradition focuses more on the Lone Ranger again

Pig's feet, I have my own path Slapped to death on the beach

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I want to see the rise of the Immortal Emperor of Creation in the Immortal Realm