I'm Trapped by Demons

This novel is really interesting. I want to find more female protagonists and find this book every day. At first I thought it was the kind of person who was just a free-for-all, with the heroine next to him being a boss and then getting promoted every day, but later I felt that I was too naive. When I read the middle part of Shanlan County, I felt that this novel was too high and too low. The protagonist was boring and had no outstanding personality. It was a waste of such a good setting and girl. After reading Shanlan County, I feel that the novel is self-explanatory, but I still feel that the setting is a waste. However, I already feel that the novel is excellent and I can feel the author's intentions. After reading Hejian Mansion, I felt that the world view of this novel is definitely not small, and the setting is attractive. The beginning of the Shanlan County section is not good enough. I was completely shocked when I saw the Buddhist temple. This novel has the qualifications of a great master. The feeling before and after this paragraph are two novels. It's not that the front is bad, it's that the back is very good. If the front is within the scope of an ordinary author, the back will feel like a great master. …………………… I immediately felt a pity. This novel is really good-looking, but it has two problems. One is that it is slow to warm up, and the other is that although the novel's setting and worldview are well established, the character creation and plot rhythm are not strong enough. Especially the last two, which led to the lack of excitement in the early stage, because the excitement can be written out. The plot of Shanlan County has quite a lot of excitement, but the author abandoned it, and the same happened later. The character creation is ambiguous and incomprehensible, the protagonist's personality is not outstanding enough, and the heroine's creation is also inexplicable (although the heroine is explained later in this paragraph, the character is really stiff when presented earlier). If the plot is quite satisfactory, the character creation can be said to be outstanding. Of course, I am mainly talking about the early stage, because the characters in the later stage are consistent with the world view setting. Although the characterization is not outstanding, it is self-explanatory and not abrupt. The plot is average but not worthy of the excellent setting for the foreshadowing. {"NickName":"North Sea Bamboo Dragon","UserId":370941225} The author's plot is actually not bad. The general trend of a plot is starting, foreshadowing, turning, and breaking out. If I rate the author, the beginning is good, the foreshadowing is excellent, the transition is average, and the climax breaks out. This section directly knocks down the previous excellent foreshadowing by two levels. The rhythm of the plot in the Buddhist temple is considered the best, and the emotions of the characters are well rendered. I approve of the overall rhythm of this episode. I hope the author gets better and better as he writes, because his upper limit can be quite high, but he is dragged down by the lower limit.

I hope the author will not overwhelm the heroine. This heroine is really in love. Don't be affected by those so-called dog-licking comments. Just look at how many more likes the character Kasuyan has than the hero. The heroine may feel sorry for others, but she definitely has not sorry for the hero. She has saved the hero many times and was killed by the hero once. Someone told me that this is called possessiveness. If it is really possessive, wouldn't it be more fun to imprison her directly? It's really outrageous. Those who commented on killing his wife to prove the truth, this book must be about the harem, but the status of the main palace must not be shaken, and it seems that the heroine suppressing her love rival is acceptable in terms of personality. After all, she is not jealous at all. This character cannot be established. The follow-up will depend on how the author promotes the emotional drama. In this wave of husband and wife quarrels, I support the heroine, but the harem is a matter of principle. Don't write it as a single heroine.

I have some feelings after seeing it now, It gives me a feeling, as if there is only one living person in the whole county, the protagonist, and except for monsters, everyone else is ghost. It's like it was specially designed.

At the end, all I can say is that in addition to Wan'er and Caiwei, the whole world is trying to match up Kong Ning and Liu Ruxue. The author originally planned to also have Kong Ning and Liu Ruxue as the male and female protagonists, but there are more people who hate Su Yan, and there should be more people who like it, at least more later on. Is it possible to stay and watch if you hate it so much? Are you looking for sin? I can't understand this kind of person~(￣▽￣~)~ This kind of crazy criticizing bad women is like Gu Xiaosang in this life, she is still very lovable, but Xiao Sang is the real heroine, and Su Yan is the vicious heroine (funny) In fact, as a Su Yan fan, it is also It's not that we can't accept that Kong Ning and Su Yan turned against each other in the end. After all, the fun at the beginning was that the two of them were fighting. If the mastermind in the end was Su Yan, then it would be good to kill Su Yan. After all, the Demon of Six Desires was born to cause trouble, and then let Kong Ning and Su Yan fight for the last time. , Let Kong Ning kill his wife to prove it, just like what Su Yan said when Kong Ning killed Su Yan for the first time, such a selfish and cruel Kong Ning is her husband. If the ending is surprisingly good, I don't know if the author has really changed the outline. If he has, I hope the author will not change the next book just because of readers' preferences. It should be dark and dark, and it should be written to death. A good book will make a few people who hate it leave, but more people who like it will stay.

I just finished reading Lanshan County. How should I put it? It was definitely the introduction that attracted me to it at the beginning. Halfway through, yesterday also laid out a lot of foreshadowings like a dog. I saw a reader saying that Lanshan County is a reincarnation dungeon with system tasks. Haha, it was still very interesting to guess. It still took me a while. I finished reading the first copy in the morning. The concept is quite good, but this kind of book is prone to start and end. I personally think that the best way to retain readers of this book is creativity. The author's head (hole) must be big enough so that the people who are attracted to you after reading the first copy will not be lost. Come on

Let me tell you something, I am fully subscribed ➕ follow-up subscription, but recently I really have no desire to read anymore. I hope the author can cheer up.

I am willing to give the author a good score in terms of plot rhythm, as some readers have said. There is no problem in removing the heroine and writing the plot alone. But in fact, it doesn't matter whether or not the heroine is removed, because the protagonist's own personality is not strong, and in the end it is reduced to a simple upgrade process. The boring plot process is doomed from the beginning. I always feel that the author is particularly restrained when describing the protagonist. In other words, the author is immature in character creation, and this is the key to the problem. The author does not know how to describe and create characters with significant personalities and combine them with the plot to produce chemical reactions, resulting in an excellent plot that does not have the excitement it deserves. …………………… A passive protagonist and a yandere and powerful heroine are theoretically bonus points and interesting, but the process of watching it always felt a bit awkward. I can only say that the author is biased

The protagonist and Su Yan have a core conflict, which is the difference between good and evil. Some people really think that Su Yan doesn't want the protagonist to have a harem? You can't use your brain to think about it. The Yinhuan Demon King is a demon, isn't he a group of wives and concubines? Moreover, Su Yan also said before that if the protagonist becomes a big devil, it is acceptable to marry one or two concubines, but this time the protagonist starts to talk about the problem of wives and concubines as soon as he acquires Buddhist and Taoist supernatural powers, twisting the difference between good and evil into a moral issue, which shows that the key point of the problem does not lie with Liu at all, but with Su Yan does not want the protagonist to have the right way, because even if the protagonist has been doing the right thing, but his cultivation is like a demon, and finally the right way really comes back, the protagonist may also be rejected, but if he has Buddhist magical powers, then the protagonist will really become a right gentleman in the future. You must know that although the protagonist refines the demonic form and cultivates demonic energy, he has been on the right path from the beginning, and is different from many mortal protagonists who live alone. In the current world, if you just don't do evil things, it is equivalent to collaborating with evil spirits, so the protagonist hopes to organize a wave of righteous forces to fight against the current demonic world. Moreover, the protagonist's current power is not a harem of n women and 0 men, but two women, one boy and one child. The reason for breaking into the temple this time was for Zhu Jianxian. The child has always been educated by Liu Lai. He will not teach the child Taoism before he enters the righteous path. Even the two girls and the protagonist have been very restrained and have not had any ambiguous relations. Currently, the main character's biggest request is to promote righteousness in this world instead of falling in love. Su Yan never cares whether the main character likes him or not, but rather hopes that the main character will become a big devil. The protagonist abides by human moral concepts, but Su Yan follows the devil's whims, and his values ​​are completely inconsistent. What's more important is that the protagonist is currently too weak, and the goodwill he can get from Su Yan is just charity. He can't get respect from Su Yan, and even if he falls in love, it's not equal. Even if he caters to Su Yan's requirements, he can only become a demon puppet at the mercy of Su Yan. Therefore, the only thing the protagonist can do is to make himself stronger, and then force Su Yan to fall into the trap of Shan and Zhen Fu Gang!

Let's talk about whether Kong Ning is a scumbag in the eyes of female fans. First: the relationship between Su Yan and Kong Ning was deceived by the Demon of Six Desires. The novel says many times that Kong Ning loved not the Demon of Six Desires but the lonely girl from Jiang Yun Mansion. Kong Ning's feelings for the Demon of Six Desires are because the person he loves is pretended to be the Demon of Six Desires after all. Second: Do you think Su Yan has been helping him and being very kind to him, risking her life for him, right? All of this has a prerequisite, that is, Kong Ning falls into the devil and becomes the selfish devil emperor that Su Yan wants, who ignores everything and can kill others and trample on everything for his own sake. Are you happy to be this kind of person? Anyway, just being happy is enough, right? Third: Su Yan's feelings for Kong Ning are always high versus low, tough, and regardless of Kong Ning's thoughts. I would like to ask those who think Kong Ning is a scumbag, if your partner does not care about your thoughts and forcefully imposes on you what you hate, would you still be happy to be with him? In reality, it's a good thing if they don't have a huge quarrel. Besides, Su Yan and Kong Ning don't really love each other. 😥

I really like bad women, but I feel sorry for the male protagonist, especially the tears I didn't realize at the end of the first volume. Tearing an already incomplete heart into pieces. What kind of hatred or resentment 😅

What the heck was written after it was released? I really thought I wanted to watch an emotional drama like an assembly line. It goes on endlessly, dozens of chapters, and the main plot is not advanced at all. It is all about remembering my wife. The highlight of the book is to fight monsters and upgrade, and it is not an emotional drama.

Alas, after writing and deleting what I wrote, I can only say that Su Yan in Scorpion Spirit and Saint Maiden is perfect, and the character development is very strong, especially the part where she refuses to go on the dragon boat. The biggest thing is that she is heartbroken. The portrayal is very good , but the rest of it is really just... A pure soy sauce feeling. In the first half of the movie, I was thinking about when the TV series will be released. In the second half, I was thinking that there might not be a third season😄

Uncle is very satisfied with what you write; Unsatisfied with the speed of your writing;

It was mentioned in the previous book that after attaining the Dao of the Zifu, they will be infected by evil spirits and gradually be replaced. However, the body of the Zifu is almost immortal, so where did the masters of the Zifu who were replaced by the evil spirits go? Not to mention there are immortals. Since Zifu can be replaced, the immortals must not be able to resist. Otherwise, the first choice of those Zifu geniuses who realize something is wrong must be to improve themselves to the realm of immortals, instead of looking for messy ways to avoid it! If you think about it this way, the number of mountains above Zifu that have been replaced over the years is definitely a terrifying number! With this kind of strength comparison, I can't figure out why this world hasn't been occupied by the dead country yet. Is there any other reason?

Su Yan is obviously acting, why do many people think he likes the protagonist? Moreover, in this world, humans are being slaughtered by demons and are about to be exterminated. This is a real sworn hatred. Do you think the protagonist will be with an enemy demon? Moreover, this monster has been teasing the protagonist, and the protagonist is very transparent in this regard and has a firm mind. Even if he encounters her later, it will be a cat and mouse game. In the end or in a certain copy, the protagonist will actually kill her.

It's no longer a problem with the appendix. The author didn't even have an outline for the future of Hejian Mansion. He just wrote it in random order, and finally couldn't hold it back and ended it directly.

I hope it will be written as a bad girl with a single heroine. Don't have a harem

Yo yo yo, isn't this the July Brewmaster? We haven't seen each other for a few months, why did we hang out at the starting point 🐶

I've read more than 150 chapters and can't stand it anymore. It's a good subject, but why is it repeatedly about lying on a woman's belly, and the description is also quite embarrassing, not natural at all, and it makes me laugh every time I see it. The author's level is not suitable for writing these. It feels better to write the main story without a good woman, so I gave up.

The character design of Scorpion Spirit is very good, I like it very much. But how to clear your name must be well planned, otherwise no matter how amazing you are at the beginning, you will be ordinary in the later stage.

I couldn't stand watching 185. To be honest, the main reason is that the male protagonist is too intellectual. Su Yan's intelligence is that of a normal person, the male protagonist is a primary school student, and the other villains are paramecia. Secondly, when the male protagonist killed Su Yan for the first time, I really didn't feel anything. I couldn't feel any deep-rooted hatred or love. It was a bit out of place to read a book review. Alas, is it my problem? I really don't find any of these female characters attractive.

This novel is getting worse and worse No matter when I come back, my parents are always under the locust tree. They are still there when I come back in the middle of the night. I don't care why they don't sleep. They just say a few words occasionally like neighbors. Su Yan disappears and his parents don't even think about cooking for him? You cook and eat by yourself, but your parents just sit at the door and never think about eating together? I didn't even ask. The key point in the previous chapters was that I stayed here for my parents. Otherwise, I would have run away. I didn't see any feelings. It was obvious that my parents were just like passers-by. My father also gave me a hint. Even if my mother always said there was no problem, as long as a normal person in this weird world should be cautious, for example, think about why my father said that, how did my father know that there would be a problem? Even if he never doubted his parents, he never thought about protecting them? There are monsters everywhere in the city. Except for the fact that he was afraid that the scorpion spirit would hurt his parents at first, it was impossible to tell that he was worried about his parents. Every time he came back, he would occasionally say a few words to his parents. The scorpion spirit was stunned when he first heard that he had parents, but that was the first thing he said. His parents were sitting at his door every day. Even if only he could see them, he had never asked about his parents? During the holidays, I never thought of asking my parents to eat together. I don't know what the point of writing about his parents is. I might as well write about a neighbor who treats him well.

I don't understand those people who say they want to keep this scorpion spirit. Isn't this scorpion spirit destined to die? Just because the author wrote a few sentences and the scorpion spirit humanoid is pretty, you can't just orgasm.

So although it is said that demons have the upper hand in this world, yin and yang are both balanced. This is the master of Shangyang, and so is the protagonist. Heaven and earth have not really given up on human beings. It can only be said that most geniuses are growing up.

In fact, I have a guess that the protagonist is the real Yinhuan Demon Lord, but his body was taken away by other time-travelers, and he became a big ✘✘, and his soul lost his memory and was reincarnated (I suspect that the protagonist should have become the destined son and leader of the world, but he took the evil path and became the devil). I always feel that the female cultivator is the incarnation of the way of heaven, killed the person who took the body, and the protagonist was brought back by the way of heaven.

I don't think there is anything wrong with the author's writing. They basically follow the characters. The settings are buried one by one and revealed one by one. The plots are basically upward. Some are even amazing. I don't understand why they go high and low. The plot must be connected with the plot. I'm sure There must be some buffering. The original tone is very depressing and dark, and it definitely needs other things to adjust it. According to the opinions of you guys, you should read another urban weird book. I won't say what it is. The setting and scene creation of that book are very good. Go read that book 🙂

Although it was the same before, the feeling is stronger now. . Check out the current history of Kong Ning: The soul passed through the three corpses of Ning xx, and the original owner decided to follow the path of self-destruction, split into three corpses and turned into demons to return. At the time, it seemed fine. . But we now know that people in this world can feel the corrosion of the Kingdom of Death when they reach the realm of disgust. The higher the cultivation level, the more obvious it is, and they will be completely replaced later. . And this corrosive perception of the ashes is not only known to Zifu, but also to the lowest level, Yuanshen. . The original owner met the Nvzhen Fairy not long ago before his death, and then somehow chose to kill the three corpses and become a demon. . What's interesting is that the war between good and evil did not break out before the death of the original owner. It only took about a few decades before the war broke out. . It can be seen that the original owner died not long ago, and Jiang Choyun also sent him off in Kyoto not long ago. At this time, judging from the original world cultivation time, Zifu monks and even higher-level true immortals should have been corrupted or replaced a lot by weirdness. Then what happened when the original owner met a true immortal? True fairy or weird? If he is a true immortal, how can he resist corrosion and replacement? You said she is not from this world. There is a person from the Immortal World in the Imperial City who only suppresses and corrupts her. The Immortal World in his hometown has been completely corroded by the Kingdom of Death. Therefore, it is also a false proposition that immortals are immune to corrosion. . Unless what the old man in Huangcheng said was some lie. . Because what the old man said misled us and Kong Ning into thinking that the perception of corrosion started at least in Zifu, the dialogue with the ash altar mentioned that it can be perceived in earlier realms. . Which one of the two people is more right? Is it really just the elderly who don't know enough? I am more inclined to The old man concealed some of the facts. . Kong Ning is weird. This book has already hinted at it, so I won't give examples. The original owner of Yanju met an unknown being, whether it was a real immortal or a substitute, and then took a strange path. . So this road is really the return of the three corpses that we knew before and turned into demons? Instead of the original owner's idea or the intervention of the immortal, it turned into a strange path? Even if Kong Ning interfered with the entire plan, was he not part of the plan? Because this world has been corrupted by the Kingdom of Death, it is impossible for both body and soul to escape the corrosion. . This is true even for the body transformed from the three corpses. . The only way to test it is to summon beings who are not in this world and the fairy world in the hope that he will be immune to corrosion, and then use the body converted from the three corpses to carry it. . Maybe this can create a living weapon to fight against the weird? At the same time, adapt to the world changed by heaven? After all, killing all the weird ones can't solve the fact that the way of heaven is corroded, and practicing cultivation will only make them weird. . But there is a problem here. Such an existence has to start from scratch, and there is no growth. So Jar was born. . Is it really weird to transform into a body? If there is no growth potential, then use the Imperial City one instead? Or to put it more simply and directly, neither Kong Ning nor the original owner's plan can be realized at all, and they cannot escape corrosion. . This can also be seen from the fact that Kong Ning doesn't even know what he has done recently, which is a typical symptom of being corrupted by the dead country. . And a certain existence from a dead country has possessed Kong Ning from the beginning and started planning. The final plan is to possess the body of a true immortal in the imperial city and descend? This seems to be the right thing about a group of evil spirits, as well as the weird ability of the jar. . Is the strangeness of the Kingdom of Death really monolithic in the end? Do they have their own purposes? Like the two true immortals and the possessed Kong Ning?

Looking at the depressing world described by the author, I suddenly remembered the Dark Blood Age in The World Piaohuo. There are two passages that impressed me deeply. He picked up the paste, but he heard the timid but hopeful voice of a thin little girl of five or six years old: "Uncle, is the paste delicious?" In the sea of ​​​​fire, a weak voice of a girl who was seriously injured and on the verge of death stopped him: "Uncle, hurry up, they are coming!" The world is also on fire. I started watching it when I was in elementary school. I'm almost at work now, and it hasn't been updated yet.

I feel that the problem with this book that is a bit difficult to deal with is that the previous map was too high, and the human words were too complete and done too well. As a result, it is difficult to grasp the connection after the map change and the development of the plot. Slow it down a little bit and readers will be unhappy, saying that you are demoralizing the protagonist, weakening the character in all aspects, and dragging out the plot. However, maintaining a fast pace and maintaining the writing level of the first chapter will cause the author to become more stressed in writing, and even suffer from glitches. To be honest, in the books I have read, there are countless articles about authors and eunuchs who have been scolded for this situation. I think the best solution is to zoom in and out, and appropriately insert daily descriptions to slow down the speed while maintaining the rapid advancement of the key plot. At the same time, sort out the emotional lines, add details, and prepare for the next fast-paced point. Fast and slow can attract readers far more than always fast or always slow.

The time traveler is determined to follow the right path? I don't know what the hell setting is