The Liu Clan of Peach Blossom Mountain: Rise to Immortality

To test the spiritual roots, the sect must come to test them. Those with good spiritual roots have been accepted into the sect. How can we develop a family? Everyone in the family knows their spiritual roots clearly. Also, if you want to break through the golden elixir and become a sect elder, how can you develop your family? I'm afraid that the sect will quietly destroy you before you reach the level of Nascent Soul or above. It's better to write about the sect directly.

I am a lover of online literature and have read many novels about cultivating immortals. However, I do not agree with the protagonist's journey of cultivating immortals. So, I came up with the idea of ​​writing a novel about cultivating immortals. What is the greatest motivation for cultivating immortality? Just immortality? I feel that if it is just to live alone for a long time. Cultivation of immortality is not worth pursuing. Just like many people pursue money and power, not only to strengthen themselves, but also to live a better life for their families. Just like me, the biggest motivation for writing this novel is to create better learning conditions for my daughter! Therefore, I hope that all book friends can provide more valuable opinions! Thank you all!

I feel that the author is still young, has too little experience, and the characters are stereotyped, so he cannot write a profound and sinister article about ordinary people. Many places seem awkward. I hope I think more about it when I write it, otherwise it will be like writing a diary, which is dry and has no sense of substitution.

This book lacks too much. It was written wrong from the beginning. At the beginning, you told everyone in advance that the planet has the highest transformation god on this planet. Why is it not ascending? It is a planet. When you first started practicing Qi, you mentioned transformation. You should maintain a sense of awe for higher realms. And you should not talk about transformation. If you can reach the golden elixir, you should say that you don't know. You are too amazing. You know the planet from the beginning???

Nice article, but many aspects were not handled well. First, the various arts of cultivation are not difficult for the protagonist, and he can learn whatever he wants. Second, opportunities are given openly, and luck is all in the protagonist's hands. What luck is, it is luck that is achieved by multi-faceted bonuses. Third, after reading more than 300 chapters, the protagonist's team has never lost. You think the other teams are fools. Fourth, many aspects are purely descriptive, and this needs to be changed. Fifth, the protagonist breaks through very quickly in the early stage. This is a bit deliberate. The Yuanying family can't cultivate it even if they train it with all their strength. How can your Qi training family cultivate it? The sky-level skills also require a lot of resources for breakthrough. Sixth, regarding sects, forces that like to expand outward will be fully suppressed by other sects, just like Qin and the Six Kingdoms. The rating is five points, I give it three points.

Originally, the writing was okay in all aspects, but as a result, you, the author, wrote endlessly about the romance. You don't know if it's too much or not enough, you are not cultivating immortality. If Liu Changxu hadn't been the protagonist, he would have been killed long ago for being such a slut, indecisive, and lacking in courage. Normally, such a character is just a salty fish The more poisonous you write, the more poisonous you become. See for yourself whether the writing is reasonable. You might as well write urban romances, why bother writing about cultivating immortals?? Even inner demons have to show up from time to time, and women have to please from time to time, including the master's family and so on. Don't please too many people, you can't control everything, and he is still the protagonist.

It's really disgusting. I keep saying that I have a wife and can't be tempted, while driving forcefully.

How can you get good reviews if you turn a fairy tale into a harem novel?

I looked at the character list and found that except for the main character, who is male, the rest of the supporting characters are all female. This book has obvious ingredients. Can I still read it?

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]