My Left Eye Has Demonic Energy

The writing is quite good, that's the way it is written. The whole text is just one awkward word, and it has not changed. The supporting character's eyes must be in the sky, and the protagonist must be as wise as a fool, that is, a three-year-old child. I don't think there are many people who like reading this kind of book. Seeing too much can make people look stupid.

Why do you have to write about how girls are doing paragraph by paragraph? I have to hear words like "girls have pretty faces and beautiful eyes" dozens of times every day. I don't understand what the current authors are doing. Writing about harem stallions is better than what you write about girls.

That world is quite novel, but the process of showing off is a bit embarrassing. Apart from experience, I guess the NPCs in it have lower brains than our six-year-old children. You can watch it without brains, but if you want to be more serious, don't watch it.

I'm sick of seeing this kind of opening. I'm bragging about how dangerous the environment is, but I'm not surprised by the appearance of an ordinary person. Is this what it is? Don't get me wrong, I'm not talking about this book, I'm talking about the entire starting point

Chapter 1, the appearance of the divine book! This book is so scary! Chapter 2, foundation building, golden elixir? Intermediate monster? Farewell!

This plot is so awkward. The characters are portrayed as if they have no brains. It's amazing.

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This pretense is so embarrassing. If you don't know how to write, you might as well not write.

It's been almost two years since I retired. I wonder if you will continue writing in the future. I wish you a smooth and comfortable life.

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What outsiders think is a treasure of heaven and earth is sold to the other party by the protagonist's behavior of almost giving it away. I still feel that I have made a profit and contributed the most, but the credit has been robbed. I just give it away with a small favor. I still feel good about it. If you are not disgusted by these plots, you can watch it.

I just read Chapter 76 I am an old bookworm Chapter 1-20: It's okay, the author is powerful Chapter 20-70: Daily Poison is well-deserved, and the book is so short that I read it as a novice (I almost died of poison due to my invulnerable physique) Aren't you always thinking about your b-boy Ma Zhiyuan? Isn't this just a five-minute slap in the face template of a studio shooter? Chapter 76: Well written, the author is a waste~ Go back and re-read Ma Zhiyuan, you will find that all the unreasonable intelligence-destroying behaviors you saw the first time are reasonable, and it's scary to think about it, believe me.

It seems like no one is watching. Isn't this super poisonous chicken soup?

This. . . . I can't stand it

The previous chapters of the book are fine, but the handling of the Night King may be a bit overwhelming. It would be too inconsistent to make a prince weak and highlight the strength of the protagonist. At least give him a certain degree of strength.

To be honest, the more I read it, the more I feel that this and The Legend of the Shepherd follow the same route.

It was released today, but Hei Da said the results were dismal. Post a post to help new readers clear up their doubts: This article is definitely not a beginner's article. After reading the first 80 chapters, most of the early doubts and most of the places that you don't think are unreasonable will be answered! ! ! As a bookworm for more than ten years, in my opinion the beginning of this book is very good. Please feel free to read it.

Curious whether he is an indigenous person or a time traveler? . Everyone obviously knows that the result of gravity is the same knowledge as the indigenous people. . .

This book is slowly gaining steam and is a good fairy grass

Occasionally I read that the author has quit the online literary world. I wonder how the author is doing now? Hope it gets better and better

In the end, I went crazy. I was a late-coming cute host. I haven't been on the cute list since I said it. Every time I rewarded a little, Heida would send me a WeChat message to ask me not to reward him. I felt very sad when I saw those messages. I only blamed myself for not being able to really help Heida. Heida's book has been unable to get started. Since the beginning of Ji Dou Tian, ​​the old readers left one by one, including Dachuan, Sister Ling'er, and many, many more. Almost every day, people left the group. I watched with my own eyes as the lively group gradually became deserted. Every time I open a new book, I am full of hope. I just feel that with Heida's ability, I will reach the top. However, in fact, I fall down again and again. All I can say is that this was probably the wrong time. If it had been a few years earlier, back to that less impetuous era, when everyone could calm down and write, and Black University could calm down and create, maybe things would be better than now. However, reality is cruel. It is not like in fairy tales. If you have a dream, you will definitely realize it. How many people have chosen reality between dreams and reality. After all, people still have to eat, and people cannot live by their dreams alone. I admire Hei Daneng for still remembering his dream when he is almost 40 years old, and still wants to fight for his dream. This is something that many people cannot do. I am very lucky to have met Hei Da 7 years ago and have been with him all the way to this day. I can see that the light in Hei Da has not extinguished yet. I believe that one day, Heida will be able to balance reality and dreams and embark on this path again. I will always wait for you and accompany you on this journey.

The main plot was not sorted out, and it was vague at the beginning. Later it was made clear, but the description was too little to motivate the readers. The storyline could be developed more to allow readers to get more involved in the characters. The background and character descriptions in this book are very good.

Has the author quit the world or changed his vest?

It's a pity, the first few chapters are very good, but I can't read them after leaving the village. Is it that the later chapters are good? Ah, that would be even more of a pity...

Add to bookshelf for a while. After seeing this scene, come on. Life will be fine. New year, new beginning. I look forward to the day when you write like a god.

Happy New Year to everyone! Good luck in the Year of the Tiger! Happy family! Full of beauty! Don't worry when the wind is going well, don't panic when the wind is going against you

I came late to this Hei Da book. Thank you Heida for giving us Xiaoyao and Yiyan. I wish you health and happiness.

I'll go. If my grades are too bad, there's nothing I can do about it. I can only finish reading this book.

At least there is a relatively complete ending, which is a bit of a pity, but it's okay.

You can write well. Why don't you have a book with over a million words?