Rebirth and Freedom

This is the posture that a strong man should have when he is reborn. He has a strong mind and looks down on all living beings indifferently! Rather than forcefully pretending to be pretentious at every turn, like a nouveau riche!

After watching it, the biggest highlight is that there are no big logical problems in the plot, the foreshadowing is well connected, and the story becomes more interesting as it goes on. The male protagonist's character is both decent and smooth, and his worldliness is relatively comfortable to watch. These are the reasons why I can keep reading. There are several main disadvantages. Although he was reborn, in the early and middle stages, he emphasized that he was a loose immortal too many times. Readers have a sense of involvement and can read the rest. This kind of words do not need any explanation at all, just write the mature actions directly. There are too many explanatory texts. Although it is not nonsense, it is obviously inappropriate to write a chapter on one exercise in the middle of the plot. There is a problem with the detailed distribution. It is basically equivalent to high-quality water, and the main focus should be to advance the plot. The above two points are writing problems. In terms of plot, as the protagonist is a reborn person, the normal rhythm should be for the protagonist to make a quick transition based on experience in the early stage, treating many of the early experiences as a quick and easy transition, and then focus on writing in detail in the middle stage to portray various flesh-and-blood characters in depth. However, the pace in the early stage is too slow, and there are not many elements that readers can remember. Although the world view in the later period is well controlled and not too big, many exciting features before the ending are not unfolded, and many details that readers are really curious about are brushed aside. It is also these main problems that make this book with the potential to become a god unsatisfactory. Creation is a gamble, either to please the sinking market, or at least to be a multilateral warrior, or to write a masterpiece. It is also a pity. The shortcomings of this book are too obvious. Most people are more likely to abandon the book in the early stage, not because of the poisonous points, but because of the creative structure. I hope the author will be able to write a truly masterpiece in the future

I don't know how to express what I mean: the description of this protagonist doesn't look like someone reincarnated by a great person, trying to use some spiritual energy to practice, but the result is constant trouble. It seems that he can refine elixirs and weapons, but he always has to run here and there to collect the things he refines. I don't know if it is the best, but it is definitely very troublesome. This is still Qi training and foundation building. If he makes the so-called golden elixir to refine gods, doesn't he have to turn the plane world upside down? The so-called fast cultivation means that the author repeatedly emphasizes that it is incredible how long it takes for the protagonist to practice foundation building. But no matter how you look at it, you feel that the protagonist is doing very meaningless things.

Put yourself in a desperate situation and then live. The story layout is also wonderful. It's never easy to guess, which is the biggest attraction of this book. Come on! I personally don't like Wudiwen's books. The opponents in the books are always like pigs. So I really like and appreciate the book "Rebirth of the Path". I look forward to your future new works reaching a higher level. Come on 🤭🌹

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I can't stand it after reading the first few chapters. The whole world is full of bad guys and courageous little people, haha

Xiaohei has published a new book, Master Shishu is invincible, everyone should go support him.

It's been several years. At that time, I was still a big-ass primary school student. They are all high school students now. I have been reading Brother Hei's novels. Very missed. Thank you, Brother Hei.

After reading hundreds of chapters, it started on Hell difficulty, the whole process was dark, and there was almost no friend group. I was tortured from the beginning to the end. It was so depressing.

There is a certain level to what is said to be ugly. This book is so much better than those novices haha

This is the second brush, I hope Hei Da can come back

In fact, speaking of it, Immortal Xiaoyao and Demon Emperor Beitian also have many similarities. If Bai Yi is the Demon Emperor, then the eldest disciple Dan Wang Tengfei is Shentu Bingxiang who has an emperor's heart but is not an emperor, the third disciple Baili Qinsheng is Shentu Liancheng who rebelled against the demon clan, the star island master Ji Honglian is a sincere Rakshasa, and the cold and ruthless Xianfu Wei is the iron-hearted general. (It's just similar, don't take it too seriously)

Looking back now, I still think it's a magical enough work, but it's still too short.

Fairy tale or fantasy 😄

The protagonist has spiritual roots, but he really doesn't want to become an inner disciple directly, but instead becomes an outer disciple to compete for the position of inner disciple? And the protagonist dares to go back when he sees hundreds of base-building enemies coming?

A good novel with first-class writing and careful story structure. It is worth recommending.

The title of the book should be called Rebirth and Being Hammered into a Dog

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This novel is a bit strange. It seems that sometimes it seems to be a lowly person, but in fact most of the time it is crazy. Let's put it this way, in novels where the villain's IQ is on the line, every 🈷️ will die once And many of them are self-praising in their hearts, talking about their past selves. . . 🐮'S

Collected. After 12 o'clock, 5 recommendation votes will be cast 😄

Not too poisonous, not too bright, just as plain as running water, lacking some dramatic conflicts. In addition, the qualifications were not tested when entering the Immortal Sect, but the exam was something I did not expect.

I have read a lot of rebirth novels, but the one that impressed me the most was Rebirth Xiaoyaodao. Many of the passages are often touching and exciting. From Xiaoyao to Yiyan, you can feel the author's persistence and rigor in describing the story in his heart. Although it is not as "quick and ruthless" as Shuangwen, the unique story style will make readers who like to read stories with connotation and a certain depth endless aftertaste. Come on! ✊

Very few reviews, but it's a really good book! Spend money to see what you are willing to do! However, I have some suggestions. It would be better for every cultivator to have spiritual roots. It would be better to make the storage pocket monster bag cheaper so that everyone can have it. Mainly because everyone is used to these traditional settings.

It's obviously well written, but it's a pity that it's not popular...

Four brushes, how is Heixian doing recently? Remember to update the official account when you have time, and tell everyone about your recent life. So many years have passed, and everything has changed. Here to catch up with everyone, it can be regarded as proof that I was young. Black blood raincoat clothes, Qingkong Lei, thank Heida for creating this utopia for us. Although there are imperfections, life is also the same. I hope everything goes well after Heida stops writing. I wish you all the best.

Green peak bamboo, blood raincoat. So exciting! One of Xiaoyao Dao classics! One of my favorite plots. I hope my uncle Wudi can also gradually improve,,,

Why is it that the Immortal Lord is not reincarnated, but the remaining soul is attached to the baby, and he is also taking away the body, which makes people feel unhappy. .

Fellow Taoist, please stay! Do you have any similar novels that you can recommend 🤔

Fellow Taoist, please stay! May I ask if any Taoist friends have similar novels? Recommend a few 😃

If Bai Yi hadn't suppressed Yang Yifan's ghostly aura, Yang would have died. Then how could that elixir elder take Mao's Five Elements?