I Have a Temple of the Dead

This one is quite special and a bit interesting... Come on Heida

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Come on, come on, I really like your story "One Word to the Sky" and "Unzen-kun". "Unzen-kun" is too short and not enjoyable at all. I hope it can be longer this time.

Love it, love it, it's a large black book, it must be a masterpiece!

It's over like this, I still have more to say! Tell me about your feelings: The subject matter of this book is novel, and the protagonist is a corpse. I have read every book by Lao Hei. The writing is very good and the story is strong, but there are also limitations. For example, the most criticized issue is the issue of heroines and female characters. First of all, the male and female protagonists of a book must be clear and complement each other. The heroine cannot be either in trouble or die early in every book. It is even unclear who the heroine is, and as long as it is a female character, there will be no good ending... This makes people inevitably feel uncomfortable. Furthermore, there are too few cultivation realms, just a few realms, and the world background setting is so grand. Often, the previous realm is just no more powerful than a mortal warrior, and the next realm destroys the world, creates worlds and creations, and collapses because the power system crosses too much! Finally, I hope Lao Hei's next book will be more exciting!

Similar to a Liaozhai novel, the story is a bit spooky and scary after reaching chapter 12. You can imagine that the protagonist travels to a corpse at night without needing to stay overnight, keep warm, or eat. It is really sad and helpless. How a dead body survives is now a big question. There is nothing but the Hall of the Dead. Fortunately, after soaking in the dead wood juice, my body is still quite strong. I hope the protagonist will embark on an alternative spiritual path and turn corpses into human bodies haha😄.

Fellow Taoists, rush to make your first order~

I saw that the author's name looked familiar, so I clicked on it and it turned out to be the author of Rebirth of Happy Path. I couldn't remember much of the character's name, but Jiang Dachuan could never forget it.

This book is really great to read here! I'm really looking forward to the next plot, come on Heixian!

The investment in another book failed, and it started to go downhill after a disagreement. This is already the third book. Speaking of the author, won't you finish the book? 😰

In fact, the setting of each of the several books since Yi Yan is very good. From the beginning, I think it is a good story, and Lao Hei's writing skills are also very stable. There is no problem with this. But the next few books were too hasty and progressed too fast. A big scene was written in just a few strokes, which left a feeling of emptiness, a sense of logical inconsistency, and too much jumpiness. Overall, it also felt like it started before it ended, and the protagonist continued to advance. Looking back, I was still amazed: how many chapters had it gone, and the protagonist was still in the first realm! But I don't feel disgusted, because each story is very delicate, and each small scene is also written in detail without being redundant, because in the author's view (from the overall perspective) it is a small scene, but for the protagonist at that time, it is about the fate of the future, and for readers who follow the progress of the story, this is also an important plot. Each story shapes the character's personality and image, and arouses the reader's nerves; Then there is the issue of the IQ of the supporting characters. On the one hand, the rapid progress causes a violation of logic, which makes people feel that the supporting characters are stupid and stupid. On the other hand, the portrayal is a bit rough, which makes the supporting characters' IQs not very online. (There may be a small part of the plot structure that needs to be improved, but overall it is the above two reasons). Some characters can be stupid and stereotyped, such as Brother Okawa in Xiaoyao, a classic character! But it's not good that every character is not that special, especially some of the sinister old silver coins (the Demon King, Thunder Emperor, etc., Have aloofness and viciousness, but lack a bit of high-end conspiracy and high IQ), and Xiao Qianfu and Hongzhi (the two elders of the Earth Sword Sect) were just that. At first glance, they seemed to be difficult characters, but after a second look, they turned out to be even more difficult than they thought! This kind of villain is very nice. To sum up: the progress of the big and small scenes is fast, the overall progress is fast, a bit anticlimactic, the logic is slightly inconsistent, the description is a bit rough, and there are IQ problems. (We don't know the specific situation of the author. The author considers it at his own discretion, which is also his personal opinion. Also, as a student party, my ability is limited. I made up for it at the beginning and ordered it all later. The next few books are all for free. The reason why I still have to beep is also a pity😔. Please subscribe to the new book. If it is not suitable, it doesn't matter if the management deletes the post. The new book will still support it, but the above is really a heartfelt statement.)

——New book launched on November 1——

OK! At least the blue and white flowers can be resurrected!

Work hard on downloading the book, save it and revise the outline.

It ended so quickly. Wait for the next one.

Are you planning to speed up the process and finish it?

The new book "My Left Eye Has Demonic Qi" is now online. It is a very heartwarming book, highly recommended 😏