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It is still Baiwen's market. It's really sad that there are so few people reading very good books.

This is my first time posting a comment. I have never read other novels except Dou Po. Let me briefly talk about my recent feelings. At the beginning of Chapter 201, when Bai Xiaoye was killed, he really felt so aggrieved, so he made the transition lightly. The inn part is remarkable and exciting. It has the same feeling as the blue sky. But the rhythm changed in the later period. I personally skipped it. I didn't feel like I wanted to read every word. I just knew the plot development. It may be caused by various pressures and lack of results, but I sincerely hope that we can produce a complete masterpiece and not end it hastily.

If you want to reward me, as long as it's not a one-time cuteness, you can go and give Yunji a gift! ! ! The fans have the same value, and the black profits are the same! Let's open up our own circle for Yunji first! !

I have been looking forward to it from the beginning of the year to the end of the year. It is finally out. Let's build a building first.

I have been reading the book until chapter 80. Every day, 6 recommendation votes will be cast and the style will remain unchanged. I have always had confidence in Heida's books and hope that the new ones will sell well.

Now that the author has the courage to overthrow and rewrite, I ask all readers to vote for it... Don't forget how much effort it took to write nearly 200,000 words. Please 🙏 everyone collect it and vote for recommendation. Finally, please spread the word 🙏🙏🙏🤝🤝🤝😭😭😭

I like Hei Xian so much. Both my dad and my mother like his works. One day I asked my dad if he had any good book recommendations, and my dad recommended One Word. The writing was really good, and it filled all the holes. It looked very enjoyable. Later I read Rebirth of Xiaoyao Dao. To be honest, Rebirth of Xiaoyao Dao can be said to be the pinnacle of Hei Xian. The plot is gripping and I really liked it. Then I seemed to stop writing books. I went to the Tieba forum to post and asked what happened to Xian Dada. People said that Xian Dada went to open a bar. I felt so bad in my heart. Isn't it misleading for a good author to open a bar? I downloaded Qidian today and couldn't wait to search for Xian Dada. I finally found it. Thank God, I love you Xian Dada. ! ! ! !

Advantages The protagonist has a decisive character, and the plot and foreshadowing are all attractive. It is very interesting to watch. The most uncomfortable part at the moment is killing thousands of miles of monsters and piling up mountains of monster bones, but struggling to kill a wild boar king. . No matter how you play the Wild Boar King, it feels very low-level. Can't it be written as the Tiger King, the Lion King, the Leopard King, and the Snake King? !

To all fellow Taoists who have failed in their investment. Because Hei Da has high demands on himself and was not satisfied with the previous chapters and the protagonist's character, all 200,000 words were deleted and rewritten. In the past seven days after the update was stopped, I tried to find ways to exploit loopholes and updated a notification chapter to avoid investment failure. But now that I'm starting over, the previous notification chapters have been deleted, which has resulted in a direct failure of the investment. I'm very sorry! ! ! I hope you guys will forgive me! ! ! [Bow] The new first chapter has been updated. Fellow Taoists are welcome to review again~

It feels strange that after the revision, the style is completely different from before. . The characterization of the supporting characters has no foreshadowing and is a bit far-fetched, the combat power system is a bit broken, and the protagonist is too invincible. . . In addition, the plot feels too fast and the amount of information is too large. It feels like it is busy explaining the background, with almost no plot details. At the same time, the rhetoric used for modification is too frequent... Instead of doing this, it is better to reduce the amount of information and write a small but beautiful story first.

With a few teammates who are online for a long time and a female protagonist, the protagonist can have a golden finger and defy the sky, but it is best not to be omniscient and omnipotent from a God's perspective. The protagonist is too serious, too majestic and upright Yiyan's early protagonist has less toxic thoughts, and the supporting characters of Xiaoyao Dao are there, allowing them to be online for a long time and grow together, plus Heida's story, I can't think of a reason why it is not popular.

Compared with the author's previous books, this one has improved a lot in terms of writing style and plot. In particular, there are some chapters that end with poems that are really good. Generally speaking, people with poor writing skills would not dare to use this technique.

To be honest, the more I read this book, the more disappointed I became. The first few dozen chapters felt good, but since the plot went to the desert, this book has become a different kind of Long Aotian. The author wants pig's feet to pretend to be bad but doesn't want you to know that he wants pig's feet to pretend to be bad. It becomes more and more boring to read. Long Aotian is more interesting to read than this kind of obscure pretending. Another point is that the layout of the book is too small, and everything he writes is related to pig's feet. This kind of book that builds the entire world around pig's feet is the most boring to read.

This year I want to support the author 1,000 times, and I'll post it to prove it!

I read the author Da Da's novels from Rebirth Xiaoyaodao, and I still remember Qingkong Lei. After reading it, I can tell everything, and the resume is very attractive. If it's too long, I won't type it all out. I read the new book before it was released, and it was about ten chapters into the book. It was not updated at that time, so I didn't follow it. I got to more than 70 chapters, but I didn't have the desire to continue reading. One day I browsed the table of contents and found that there were only a few chapters left. I thought it was because my phone was stuck. After reading the book review, I realized that the author had greatly rewritten it. I just read it with the intention of taking a look. After all, the author's previous books were quite good and I liked them very much. Fortunately, I re-watched it, and I feel that I have regained the feeling of watching Xiaoyao Dao and One Word Tongtian, and now I watch them basically every day. Thanks to the author. I hope the author can read this paragraph of mine and make a comment for the first time. I have always believed that writing a book is about showing the creator's own world for readers to see. Ordinary people are very tired in a day, but the author still has a small world in a day, thank you for your hard work. We read, update, and comment here, which shows that we are people in the author's world and in the same way. First look at Xiaoyao, secondly at Yiyan, and then at Yunxianjun. Looking forward to your world.

Why aren't there many people? I think this book is quite good. The writing is good, the plot is good, and the author is diligent in updating it. Why isn't it popular?

Hei Da's writing is very good. I started getting into the trap when I was reborn as a free and easy path. Why has it not become popular after so many years?

Chapter 107: It was considered a good grass before, but it will be considered a weed later.

It is recommended that the author write an outline before writing the book. If it is longer, I feel that the author is actually quite creative, but it is like writing a few chapters and then thinking about a few chapters, and the context is not coherent.

Tianyi Sword was broken into pieces, Yunji lost miserably.

This is a kind of eunuch in disguise...

Why is the author so anxious to finish it? Write more

I don't know why I want to create Ji Guxuan to disgust people. Still doing it from beginning to end

Why is it over? There are only over 400 chapters, which is a bit small, right?

I don't understand what the relationship is between Xu Yantian's Yi Sword and Xiaomu in One Word Tongtian

Lao Hei's writing has been very lively recently, but I still suggest that Lao Hei do other work, polish this work in his spare time, and don't rush to finish it. After all, this book has a good idea and structure. I can't bear to leave regrets in rushing to finish this book.

Why haven't you released a new book yet?

404? 😰

I came in by recommendation. Is there a female lead?

I usually work to support my family, one chapter a week. Or, just rush out and end it like Yiyan. Immediately start over with a new book. If you have to choose to draw a lottery, the flow this time is not even as good as the later period of Xiaoyao Dao. Without your old fans, are you sure your next book will be a hit? Why.