I Turned Out to Be the Ancestor of Mankind

I understand behind enemy lines, I understand about raids, but I don't understand about raids behind enemy lines. How far can he push without supplies and support behind enemy lines? In addition to the enemy's obstruction, various early warning aircraft, reconnaissance aircraft, fighter jets and attack aircraft in the air. Let alone the future, even in modern times, mechas can be beaten out, and anything that goes behind enemy lines is basically special operations. Is it to blind the enemy to open a large mecha? If it is interspersed behind enemy lines, this tactic is only used when the disparity in strength between the enemy and ourselves is too great, because the interspersed tactic is an upgraded version of guerrilla warfare. Not only did those paragraphs fail to show the protagonist's talents, but they are self-defeating.

The protagonist devours the vampire gene man and upgrades. The vampire thinks he is the same kind, and the gene man thinks the protagonist is a gene man, but the protagonist is a human. Wouldn't it be more interesting to write like this? 😴 I don't want any garbage plots like Starship Mecha Sister!

Because of the title of the book, I hesitated for a long time before clicking in. But it seems pretty good so far, but the title of the book is a bit discouraging to passers-by on this channel. When I first saw the title of this book, I thought it was a no-brainer urban novel. I passed by it several times and didn't even click on it hahhhh

The narrative is very smooth and the writing is very comfortable to read. I have been following it until now and have voted for it a few times. But I feel a little tired these days. Does the protagonist have any clear goals from the beginning to now? If you want to become stronger, have you done anything? I don't feel that I have the will to become stronger. Lu Shengmon's dark blue hook is so big, but he has been practicing very hard. Strength depends entirely on genetics. Starting from the first chapter, the protagonist always encounters accidents and encounters whirlpools. The protagonist is passively involved and keeps getting involved, which is a bit tiring to watch. The protagonist played a key role in all events. Without the protagonist, it feels like other tool people would not be able to handle anything. The protagonist's relationship with both parties is now at the level of a thigh, and both women are at the top of the force. However, there are constant conspiracies and assassinations against the protagonist. The protagonist responds passively, accepts passively, and does not take any measures to actively change. In short, the feeling of frustration that has always been around cannot be diluted by one or two protagonists appearing in front of them. I will always support you and I can't help but complain.

There seems to be something wrong with the title of this book, so Lao Feng wants to change the title. Does anyone have any advice? No matter good or bad, Lao Feng sincerely thanks you!

What did you write after the protagonist woke up? Transformed into the urban soldier king from 10 years ago? After hugging a beauty, traveling to a foreign country, and pretending to be cool in front of others, the next step is to write about the country encountering difficulties and the protagonist saving the world, right? I'm really, is the author being stupid during the Chinese New Year?

This book is a bit confusing and I can't understand many parts.

I took a deep breath when I saw the nearly double-digit title of the book and the ridiculously long introduction to the mystery, as well as the same number of outrageous subject tags. This was simply an exaggeration to get sterilized with a ridiculous amount of money. It was so outrageous. More importantly, it was a masterpiece of daily poisoning. I didn't know for a moment whether I should open it or not and read it

How can a good book not contain idioms? Gloomy

The title and introduction of the book are simply shocking. The content is surprisingly good, but with such a novice and terrible introduction, what is the author thinking? . .

Is the earth the main line or the branch line? Looking back, there is a strong sense of tearing. . . . There's so much foreshadowing, it's all a blur.

Personally, I think the writing is too complicated, just a hodgepodge, especially the interactive branch with my sister is completely unnecessary. In addition, they are all vampires, how can they still have starships? It is completely unfair!

I feel like this book is on the wrong channel. . Should it be put into a light novel?

Think about the main plot carefully. The characters have not been established yet. You have to write it out. Don't think that the readers have thought of it just because you have thought of it.

The writing is quite good, but the insertion into the earth is too poisonous, incompatible with the whole, and too blunt.

How can I put it this way? The rhythm is a bit off. In fact, everything about the setting is good, and the world view is also right for my stomach. But the rhythm is quite inexplicable.

Don't be fooled by the title. The book is a good book, but it has nothing to do with the title.

The Na'vi must die! Rape must be tried! ! Glory belongs to mankind! ! !

Isn't the first sentence of this introduction a little inappropriate, saying that people's movies are money scams? Isn't this bad?

Is it possible to take revenge without spending the night? Looking for a little girl, I couldn't find it for dozens of days. Every time it was an afterthought, only to find out when something happened. How incompetent is the federation?

I had no interest in reading the first chapter...

Let me tell you that our ancestors did hunt, but at most they hunted large creatures.

Viscount Wannian😅

The world view of this book is actually very good and cannot be expanded enough. If we can work on it more deeply, it can become a masterpiece. The final ending, said to be the ending, is actually a bad ending.

After raising it for a few days, I came back and saw that the book was finished! To be honest, it's a pity that it's only 1 million words! In fact, the plot concept is quite good. I can write 4 million words, but if not, 2 million words will do! I hope the next book will be longer. Because I won't be reading every day, automatic subscription for new books has been enabled. Come on, author! In addition, the author should also work harder on promotion, and find more colleagues to PY!

Discuss a question: Can human beings enter the interstellar space era while retaining various social problems such as "class oppression, extreme polarization between rich and poor, educational monopoly, etc."

So far, although this book has a lot of flaws, it is worth reading. It is a must-read for those who are short of books. Today, a batch of exciting articles are still worth reading.

I really want an app for transferring money across the world.

Even if the author has finished thinking about the book, you still need to explain the ending! Is it all up to the readers to guess?

Introduction, since it's not for tickets, it's great to be free.