I Am a Forbidden Life

This female character is written inexplicably and she is force-fed with poison

What I wrote earlier was pretty good, but suddenly a disgusting woman came, named Qin Shishi. I read the comments and said that she ran away until the finale.

Update Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

I suggest you jump to chapter 100, because the protagonist will rise after chapter 100, because before chapter 100, the protagonist has no skills or power.

Ennn The will of this meow universe is male or female

Update quickly😁

This novel is currently very well written and very unique. I hope I can work hard to update it. After all, if it is not updated quickly, someone will imitate and surpass it. I hope the author can work hard to update it 😜😜

The author could consider letting the protagonist earn magic crystals by selling barbecued meats, low-level quick-acting healing potions, and mid-to-low-level conceptual clothing in the world store. The efficiency of hunting down imps to obtain magic crystals alone is too low, and then use the magic crystals to buy scarce raw materials such as gold and silver in the world store. 😃

The introduction says there is no heroine, but good guy, a woman appears from about 40 chapters onwards, and she eats and lives together and becomes the protagonist. Why change clothes in front of each other, a beautiful misunderstanding? The supporting role is written by the heroine, the key appearance is still very stiff, and the person is not familiar yet. The protagonist is completely capable of developing, but there are multiple women. You are not doing well at all by playing a side game. Ever since this woman appeared, Zhang Ping had fallen out. Originally, the setting seemed pretty good, and there were also delusional mountains and seas. It's almost time to reach chapter 50.

The idea is good. It would be nice if the book didn't denigrate women from time to time, and the protagonist didn't go into heat from time to time... Female readers feel sick to their stomachs when they read it... And almost all the characters they meet are female... The men are either cannon fodder or villains. The description is also disgusting. It should be written clearly that it hits someone else's chest, but it is written like this: hitting the old woman's plump chest... Please don't go into heat during the fight scene, okay...

The author has written 30 books, but ∝ The Peerless Priest of the God of Creation Super God Origami Man Creation Eternity The Strongest System to Become a God by Eating Chicken The Strongest Evolutionary Pupil Starts from picking up a black mobile phone Pregnant Mother Immortal Sutra Super Halo System Super Worlds Arrival The Strongest Tongtian Mobile Phone Super Martial Empire Super Muyang God Record The Divine Art of Rebirth The Era of Resurrection of Heaven and Earth Push all enemies ------------------------------------------------ (Starting Point Tai Shen) *Refining of Super Divine Creatures *Forbidden Reincarnator *My Taboo Left Hand *The Demonic Tang Monk Journey to the West The Super Tang Monk Journey to the West *How the God of Creation was made My attribute right hand *I am Becoming a great god in the last days *Forbidden God Mage *My grand hotel in the last days (Men are not chic) *I am a forbidden life (Yan Hong Yangshu) *My added abilities *Unlimited upgrade abilities *Forbidden Gods *My conceptual abilities

Keep writing, there are too few now and it's uncomfortable to read. The more you write, the better😁

The writing is very good😁, by the way, is there any brother or sister who can reply to the division of the strength of this novel? I can't find it, I forgot Thank you😊

Reading too much of this novel will affect your IQ

The people who wrote these books with similar themes seem to have no specific image of numbers and are unfamiliar with common sense of life. In another book, a few milliliters of water are exchanged for a lot of supplies. In this book, hundreds of logs are used to build a bonfire, and one log is burned per minute. It is really outrageous 🙂

666, There is no female protagonist, the pet in the back is female, a maid must be brought, the live broadcast girl must be accepted, the supporting characters are all female, you are still 6

The subject matter is very good, but I can't stand it. I don't know how to change it. I can only describe my feelings. From the beginning to when I was poisoned by the female co-star, every time I met a new character, it was the beginning of a new poison. If the subject matter was not interesting to me, I might have been unable to stand it. That's not to say that you can't 'learn' from the classic characters of the apocalypse genre, but at least don't be so far-fetched, it's as if you directly picked up someone from the apocalypse scene next door and threw it next to the protagonist. Of course, the book may have good results now, but if you really want to write it well, I think it's better to ask someone to polish the beginning.

Poison King

I haven't read the book, but I've been poisoned by the cover.

I really can't help but post a post, hoping that the author will change the 800 million magic crystals. It's too shabby. An old hamster who has been a collector since he was poor. He smashed 800 million magic crystals in anger because of a ban on a mere live broadcast... Wouldn't it be nice to use those 800 million magic crystals for lottery and to make equipment? And then in reality, the 100 square meters that were originally priced were exchanged for bird eggs... You were teased by others. You have nothing to do with it... Originally, I didn't think this was too poisonous. It's the Gou School. I can understand it if I'm a coward. But! ! ! Don't write about smashing 800 million magic crystals just to gamble. The contrast is too strong, okay? (The macho man sighs) I can tolerate all the problems, big and small, and I can understand the pressure on the protagonist's strength. But the character design is boring. An old hamster smashed 800 million magic crystals just to gamble. Just thinking about it makes me vomit blood.

The novel is very unique. The protagonist is a SB. His brain is abnormal. He is seen vomiting blood. He has no brain at all. He does not think like a normal person. Such a good ability will not be used at all. Others will take away the benefits. I am speechless.

How should I put it... It's okay if you don't use your brain to watch it, but unfortunately people have brains... But the setting needle doesn't poke!

Many authors don't know where the licking dog is. Think about it: you go to a clothing store to buy a dress, and a very beautiful girl greets you. Then you forget about it after you buy it and go out. This is normal. For example, in those survival articles, you are given something in exchange, and you immediately want to help others, or help others in the future. If you write it like this, it would be strange not to be called a dog licker. Under normal circumstances, you will not have any feelings due to occasional exchanges? Because this is an exchange of equal value, I paid, so I have to gain something, this is not a favor

First of all, the cover is really ugly. This book is very creative and average in writing, but the author has very poor theoretical knowledge. What is "hidden decimal point"? Generally speaking, doesn't a number only have one decimal point? For example: 1.82, 3.71 And the protagonistwith the physical fitness of an ordinary person, was washed hundreds of meters into the sky by underground water After coming down, he just vomited blood, but in the subsequent plot, he was still able to move normally! Look at this, does it look like an injured person! Brother, even if the water pressure is really strong enough to push a person up to less than ten meters into the sky, there will be no bones left of the person! And the protagonist only has the physical fitness of an ordinary person! Also, in the first nine chapters, he inexplicably became enemies with the flame superpowers. At that time, the other party already knew that the protagonist was a very rare and awesome conceptual superpower, and they just found a monster for the newcomer to practice. The protagonist robs the monster and then becomes a life-or-death enemy! ? Ah this! It's just a very common and common monster used to train newcomers! Why did he become a life-and-death enemy! ! The protagonist robbed the opponent of a very common prey used for practicing skills. The opponent thought that he had offended the protagonist and decided to eradicate it. Inexplicable, I can only say that the plot is inexplicable. The same goes for this paragraph. They became enemies out of nowhere. Everyone, I'll take my leave first!

The author let himself go in the early stage, but couldn't write any more in the later stage. He forcibly opened up the protagonist's awakening and jumped from level 70 to more than 10,000 levels in the finale It was cut, and what else should I write to summarize and finish the book? It's so disgusting at the same time Of course, if you can't control it at this level, I will apologize to you.

This setting is good, but it's so uncomfortable to suppress the male protagonist all the time! A magical object actually changed the male protagonist's physique from ten to sixty. According to the realm, it only took the early stage of the acute transformation state to its peak! And that luck originally had a hundred points, but you suppressed it so that it could only absorb a little, and you kept saying that there was no technique. You can also suppress your cultivation, and you can also suppress your combat power. In this case, it is better to let the male protagonist upgrade slower! Forget about doubling the experience. In ancient times, people who were incompetent in culture and military affairs were useless. . You're a level 41 guy who probably won't even be able to beat level 30 without a sneak attack, right? The pressure in the battle was so severe that I felt that the hero's ability was almost useless except for upgrading.

If you don't vomit, you won't be happy! This book was obviously broken at the end. Just like the author said, it could have been written with three million words, but it suddenly accelerated and ended at the speed of light! →The ending gives readers a "larger" world view and a good example of "Huang Liang Yi Meng". What makes me a little speechless is that the nine super beings are all trapped in the world view. It seems that they have not worked together to open up the world? ! In the end, the only way to relieve loneliness was to commit suicide and reincarnate. In the realm of eternal life, they live their lives as masks of pain, which is really sad. The author's writing style is relatively immature, the character description is not adequate, there is no emotional drama, and the protagonist's character is not very likable. Personally, I prefer this golden finger setting. I originally wanted to read the author's other works, but when I looked at them I realized that they were all "short and thin dogs". How could I have the nerve to publish a novel without 4 million words? With such a huge world view, you can finish it with only 2 million. Isn't this just a matter of leveling up dozens of levels a day? Is there still consciousness? !

The protagonist said before that he didn't trust anyone, but then he got together with a man named Qin, and he didn't shy away from anything. I couldn't stand it anymore.

Jimei people, who understands? I can't stand it anymore. How come magic crystals are missing when you leave a store? A healing pill that is not of a high level can make people bankrupt. How can it be sold so cheaply and there is no shortage of people to buy it? Jimei people, who knows?

I read that each of the author's books has less than a million words, so you can really make money 😢