Sorry, I Am the Sixth Child

To be honest, I didn't explain the background clearly, the crystal energy battlefield, and the world environment halfway through watching it. Instead, I went straight into the plot. It's very strange. I'm used to this kind of unclear situation.

What the author wrote has the same feeling as Wang Linkai's concert speech, Thai pants are spicy.

It's too licking, it's like Lin Hua's style has changed.

This novel has been greatly revised. Chapter 6 [Li Ze immediately recalled the content of a page in the booklet Sevi gave him] Sevi appeared very suddenly here. I didn't know who it was. I went to the Internet and searched it before I understood it. The author did not change it well. Chapter 9 [The beating of Li Yingran the day before yesterday made Li Ze happily accept this pride] Here it is mentioned that the protagonist beat Li Yingran, and Li Yingran appeared very suddenly. Chapter 15 ["Do you know why you fell into the hands of that boy?"] Here it is described that Li Yingran suffered a loss in front of the protagonist. Then in Chapter 18, Li Yingran visited the protagonist, and then in Chapter 20, the protagonist beat Li Yingran. Time is disordered. The author didn't change it.

The writing is okay but I personally feel that there is a problem with the setting. The chicken-fighting setting does not match the warrior setting. In the later period, when the average combat power of the characters is increased, it will probably be written as an eternal disaster. The few scenes where the protagonist actually plays against the spy do not fit the setting of Lao Liu, and there are only a few scenes of eating chicken, which are also limited by Lao Liu.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but no one seems to be reading it.

Personally, I think it's good. The title may not be very good, and the actual content is different from the title.

Personal evaluation: The plot is good, but some details cannot withstand scrutiny.

The book is good, but few people find the title unappealing. There are too few books. I want to read more.

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It's pretty cool, and there aren't any riddles.

What article is this? War is not quite right, urban love is not right, science fiction is not, is it fantasy? It seems like there is a single heroine but also there are multiple heroines. The promised sixth child turned out to be 66

Ink marks, wordy, scholar sells donkey

Why do you feel that the strange chapters are incoherent? Did you delete it or correct it in the middle?

The plot was so ambiguous that I felt confused after watching it for a long time. I'm too lazy to guess

If it continues to this level, the dragon is going to eat him, and he is getting desperate. If the protagonist does not show off his power, capital in this society will not exceed 300% profit, but has exceeded everything, everyone wants him, and the plot is ambiguous again.

The writing is okay. Compared with the knight's breathing method or magic inherited by the traditional nobles, the nobles of this world rely on blood and crystal energy to play a game of chicken in the battlefield. It feels a bit ridiculous.

If I completely gave up eating chicken and directly wrote a political novel about traveling through another world, the whole transformation would be a bit interesting. Now this book is waiting for updates every day. Although I have basically guessed the ending according to the normal flow of another world, but the writing style is okay and it is quite fun.

Good guy, the main character's name is exactly the same as mine. .

I don't really like the surname Xu, but I always insert it in different ways. Wouldn't it be a free love game between nobles and commoners? After graduating from a school and serving as a soldier in the army, the hero saves the beauty or the beauty saves the hero. This type looks good if it is career-oriented.

Did you say that 2 chapters were reviewed, and then you continued writing regardless? ? ? Can this plot be connected? ? ?

What is the QQ group? Please tell me.