I Return from the Sea of ​​Stars

After seeing more than 280 chapters, both the writing ideas and the plot development are far below the level of previous works. First of all, the strangest thing about this work is that there is too much emphasis. Instead of relying on the actions and descriptions of the characters to tell what kind of person the male protagonist is, he directly says, "I have lived for more than a thousand years, so it is natural for me to do this." If the author is afraid that he will forget this setting, he might as well post the setting of the male protagonist next to it when typing, instead of torturing readers. Love boiled water is just water articles. I don't want to spend money to read a lot of this kind of content. The trend is also the same. The style between the two does not seem to be equal. They look more like secret lovers of both parties. They basically give gifts every time they meet, and then say some love words. The male protagonist also has that kind of description of his heart, which is too scary. I really don't understand the necessity of its content in the part about Maiguo. After reading it, I feel that the author is not writing a plot, but using the work as a means to vent his emotions. The behavior and purpose of the male protagonist are completely divorced from the plot. He also adds drama to passers-by and then writes it to death. I feel that this work has almost started to go downhill here.

The content is interesting and the length is short!

What's going on?

So far, the writing is very good. As long as it doesn't collapse, I will keep reading.

It is true that the male protagonist's current ability can be learned by self-study at home without going to school, but over time it will definitely attract the attention of relevant departments, not to mention that now that the male protagonist is considered a well-known figure, it is easier to be noticed. Also, I think the character of the heroine's uncle is a little inconsistent. Someone who has experienced so much can't be so superficial. He has already done the investigation, so why doesn't he doubt where the hero got so much money and act so calmly at the auction? Also, the scene where the heroine received a call from his father was a bit too urgent. Even if I were his father, I wouldn't be able to call him right away to ask for confirmation and say, hey, daughter, are you confessed to me again today? Isn't it normal to express your love? With such an outstanding daughter and such a wealthy family, who wouldn't want to be a quick son-in-law? Even if I want to ask again, I should just mention it casually when we have dinner together in the evening. After all, it is just a trivial matter. The above is my personal opinion, feel free to comment. I am still looking forward to the whole book, and I hope the author will write better and better

At present, it seems that the Zerg Queen is the protagonist.

It really sucked, but luckily I stopped subscribing before. The background is grand, but the author's layout is too small, and the plot becomes more and more clumsy. He also said that if you leave the sea of ​​​​stars, you won't even be able to get out of the earth.

Author Jun, I have a classmate who also writes novels. A few days ago, he was stabbed more than a hundred times because of a slow update. The knife avoided the vital part. He was sent to the hospital and received more than 2,000 stitches. The needle avoided the wound. I have no other intention, I just want to tell you 🤓

Pink and tender and cute

Some people understand an antimatter bomb with a yield of 10 trillion tons as such a heavy antimatter bomb! Haha, I failed in Chinese! And is that value very high? That's only 21 tons of TNT, which is only 30th power when converted into joules, and the total radiation power of the sun is as high as 27th power, haha... The same sentence, most authors don't pay attention to data logic at all, even if these data can be found with a little Baidu!

What I wrote before is quite innovative, and the way to deal with enemies is also very straightforward, but on the contrary, it was put on the shelves and poisoned me! It was written like a brainless article about a boss reborn in the city and pretending to be a slap in the face. Brother, I am willing to spend money on my horse. You wrote it like this after it was put on the shelves. How do you want me to spend money to read it?

When I saw Chapter 438, I suddenly didn't want to read it. You are more powerful than an army and you still need to make sacrifices with a few ordinary people. Just kill them and it's over. The country will not fight against the protagonist for a few dead people, especially the protagonist is not an ordinary person. After reading it now, I found that the various constraints in this book, even the return of the sea of ​​​​stars, are not as decisive as me, an ordinary person, grinding all day long, all kinds of unpleasant╯╰

It was really amazing at first, but then it didn't feel right.

A dreamy start, forced love, and a complete rush

Fully ordered, please give me more cum My body needs to get better soon, don't end it carelessly like the big world, the order is always coming

After seeing Chapter 173, let me complain The previous chapters were all very good. When I went to Burma to save people, I felt that my writing skills had declined, but it was still acceptable. Now that we're done, let's talk about this section, which is a very confusing operation in my opinion. First of all, it seems to me that there is no problem in arranging the separation of the queen. After all, this character is indeed an important factor in the unfolding of the story. The problem in my opinion is that the strongest genes needed for separation are the rational thinking of the Zerg. Indeed, the genes of the male protagonist and the female lead are relatively good so far. The next operation is very confusing. You said that the queen changed Tiantian's genes to the male protagonist's mentality of fucking him. I can understand it. However, she also changed her own, becoming a direct bloodline of the male protagonist. I feel this is outrageous... Very outrageous! Queen of Zerg? I don't know about others, but my first image of Zerg Queen came from the game MV of StarCraft 2. So a cold-blooded Zerg queen, who once almost brought down the hero and their world, would do this kind of thing? Don't tell me any tricks like being affected by human genes and having feelings (I blindly guess that the author will most likely use this reason). That is the king of the Zerg! Only she assimilates others, and no one else assimilates her! Even if she is weak! It's not something that the protagonist's current level of genes can affect! Even if you write her directly as a tsundere girl number two, it would be better than writing her as a daughter. After all, there is already a Tiantian, and adding a daughter, not to mention the duplication of character attributes, but also sharing various roles about the daughter, resulting in a weak image. And I blindly guessed that there must be various queens and tsunderes in the back. The male protagonist started to take precautions, but after all kinds of things, the two tsunderes finally became a family that loves each other. If they couldn't keep it together, the queen would help the male protagonist fight against her mother. If you write it like this, it will be the plot of the Korean drama at 8 o'clock, so don't watch it. The image of the queen was completely gone, and it was replaced by a bloody plot of an old father teaching his rebellious daughter. Secondly, after the male protagonist's operation, I can't understand the current main plot. What does he want to do? You talk about daily life, he went abroad again and pretended to be a big dick and came back. You can talk about his daily life on campus, but he doesn't seem to write much about campus. You said he practiced with peace of mind to prepare for the development of the dog? I didn't realize that even though I went to school for three days and fished for three days and dried nets for two days, there was no improvement at home. After working on it for so long, I have built a few beetle robots, but they are still used for reconnaissance and have no attack power. Tiantian said that he had seen all kinds of storms in his previous life and thought about daily life. But you have a queen by your side, and you can still live your daily life so peacefully. All I can say is that the protagonist is really big-hearted... You might as well just write it, use your connections to take the college entrance examination that year, and then go straight to a top university, and then engage in scientific research on related projects, and slowly leak your skills to the country. Although writing like this is cliche, at least you know that the plot has a goal. You may write about daily life at one moment, pretending to be sexy in a fight at another, and you won't know what the protagonist wants to do. Thirdly, and the most serious point in the current pushback is this confession. How did you become one of the top leaders of the alliance? Don't fool people by saying they are front-line combatants. Anyone who can do the best in all walks of life. Those are not stupid people. Their EQ, IQ, and ability are definitely all good. When you're explaining to your girlfriend, you're actually using a story made up by someone else... Do you call this magnanimity? If you had the courage of the Alliance's number one general and confessed everything to her directly, including rebirth and the queen's affairs, that would be called magnanimity! Or you can just say that you think she looks cute and she was adopted. They are all more magnanimous than you who use a false story to fool people. Finally, writing this way puts the book into a dilemma. If you confess, will the female lead accept it? Is it better not to accept it? If you accept it, it is definitely a poisonous point. And even if she is a die-hard herself, she likes the male protagonist so much that she accepts it. Can such a large group of people in her family accept it? Isn't she a little princess at home? You can tell by looking at her older parents that they dote on her very much. And the heroine has such a family, must she and you be wronged? (The male protagonist is awesome. The male protagonist is at the top of the league, but people don't know it... No one would believe it if you told him). Not to mention that you have two children. To put it bluntly, you have two three-year-old children at the age of sixteen. Do you think normal parents don't understand your truth, which in the eyes of normal people requires hysteria to tell you the truth? Will I trust you to leave my daughter to you? Impossible! As long as a normal person, no matter male or female, has not seen his first love for a long time. You were thinking about meeting each other, but without saying a few words during the meeting, he told you that he had two children who had been separated for many years and had just found them yesterday. What would you think if it were you? Yuanfang, what do you think? I think it's more reliable to just slip away, but I won't accept this offer... Then if the female lead takes the normal route and chooses to break up, then how sweet the author wrote about the two before, how poisonous it is to break up now, there will definitely be a bunch of book friends abandoning the book. Even if you take the middle path, that is, break up first, then as the plot develops, the female lead will gradually understand the truth, and finally the two will get back together. That is because the cracks are still there after the reunion, and the gap in the plot can easily make the image of the female lead weak, without the original feeling, and it is impossible to go back to the past. The above, anyway, so far, I plan to change books first. Let's talk about it later, but let's see what the comment section says. One more thing, the book review area said that the author has made changes... I looked through it and it hasn't been changed, right? I saw it from free to now, and you changed your profile. Moreover, character cards have been added, and there is no female lead. It seems that the follow-up plan is to go straight to the knife? I don't understand if it's too late for you to change your profile now. At the beginning, it was written that the queen would become a daughter, so that everyone could be mentally prepared. 8 As I said, I have already gone out to watch "I Kidnapped the Timeline" and looked at the comments below. Is the author deleting the comments? Don't worry, I've already copied it. I'll post it once you delete it. And you said it didn't change anything. I haven't seen Chapter 174 yet. There are pictures to prove it

I'm really annoyed by this kind of setting that says it's strong and good, but in fact it's a batch of low! Talking about the first sequence of the protagonist's awakening super talent, in my opinion, the real number one is all-round strength, rather than talking about the early stage. Even in the early stage, you shouldn't be outdone by cats and dogs that pop up out of nowhere. Looking at the talents of the first sequence of the protagonist's trinity, I didn't realize how awesome they were!

Why do I feel like this book is getting worse and worse. Anyone else feel the same way?

What follows is a pure urban soldier plot, with pretense and a slap in the face. The worst part is that even the data is inaccurate. The annual profit of cancer detection reagents is one billion and then billions. I really can't understand it. As I said at the beginning, the selling price is 199, 80% profit, the annual output of 10 million is 2 billion, the annual output of 100 million is 20 billion, it is just a math problem for elementary school students, and they have to change it all day long. There are also Big Macs with annual output values ​​ranging from 2 billion to 30 to 40 billion. They say they have a market value of 10 billion every day. What the hell is this? If you don't know how to write about business, don't write about it. You can either do research on technology and cooperate with the country to get money, or you can just be a cannon fodder tool. It's that simple.

I laughed. I came back from the sea of ​​​​stars to go to school? The author is talented

Some time ago, I complained about the changes in pig's feet. It seems that I am not the only one who feels really sad. When I opened this book, it had more than 150,000 words, and I finished reading it in two days. I felt so strong. From a big boss who sacrificed his life for mankind and civilization, to a person with such a big heart, he dared to fight to the death with the Queen of Insects when he was just reborn. How heroic it is. I really like this style, but after reading the last twenty or thirty chapters, I have become more and more disappointed. There is no opponent, no pressure, and no sense of tension. The pig's feet do nothing except show off. The difference between before and after is too big. To be honest, I can't stand it anymore. I haven't watched more than ten new ones. It's just the bar show-off and the game that made me feel uncomfortable. Sigh Come on, author, I also know that writing a book is not easy, but the premise of saying this is that I really think the previous writing is good.

Every time the author gets bad grades and wants to run away, he says he is not in good health. . .

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What should I do if I don't see enough? I'm dizzy. How many times a day do you update it now? When will the update be released, I will buy my monthly ticket! The climax is coming!

I saw the author running for the fifth time. Time flies so fast. I was in junior high school. When I was in the first year of junior high school, my classmates rented a pirated copy of one of the online games called Night Visitor. You were the first novel and online game I read. I saw you write about your daughter in a book review. Not long after she was born, I saw TV saying that there was a problem with milk powder. In the blink of an eye, more than ten years have passed. Time flies so fast 😭

Hello author, I don't know where I got this book from, but the setting is very good, and I'm following it. I feel like the world view is quite big, and I can write 2 million words no matter what. Your sudden ending made me uncomfortable. It's frustrating💩💩💩

It's so boring to follow. I encourage the author to write quickly and it won't collapse. I'll give it a monthly ticket and give it a try. Book friends who have all kinds of tickets don't hide it!

The eunuch is unfinished, newbies should not order.

Why again... I feel that according to the previous plot, it is okay to write three million, right? This ended so suddenly😰

Regardless of the plot, the books written by Pacific are as good as ever