This World Is in Danger

I think you forgot to show it to you again.

I still really like this style of writing. I can support it with a monthly pass, but I only give one because the updates are so slow! (Crazy)

Good books. I have finished very few books. I have not even finished Zhu Xian. It is a common problem that the more you write, the less interesting it becomes. The reason why you don't want to read the ending is that it is not beautiful. I have finished reading this one. Thank you, the author, for giving me a pleasant time!

I don't know how people read novels nowadays You want to say that he is a virgin. The title of his book is to save the world. If you like the dark flow, then why do you click in? Just search, murder, arson, burning, killing and looting, isn't it good? 😐😐😐

The author's writing is very good. I have also read the previous few books. I hope the author can cheer up and life is still very beautiful. Come on 😄

No, please tell me about the standby time. What are you busy with?

How to say it? Every character portrayed by the author is pure, but I personally feel that purity is a bit too much. Human nature should be complex and contradictory. It is not simply good or evil, pure black or flawless white. It should be a colorful picture decorated with various different colors. There may be some colors that are particularly prominent, or even account for the majority, but no matter what, there will be other colors in some corners, or occupy their place among the main colors.

The author used to write dark literature, which resulted in a lot of people who like reading dark literature. After reading this book, they were extremely disparaged, creating the illusion that the book seemed ugly. In addition, the author updated the book, and it took only a few chapters to be fully subscribed, so the book has never been popular. But in fact, this book ranks in the top five in the science fiction popularity category of Qidian.

After dancing and chasing, let's talk about your thoughts. First, consumable characters. No matter the good villains or even the male protagonist, there is no charm at all. What I have a slight impression of is that 11, the Five Demon Kings, X, the later system and the Time and Space Dominator are just a few of them that have some unique features, but their features are extremely limited and have basically no charm at all, and the others are not worth mentioning. The author likes to write people as clowns, and then paint the enemies to death and conquer women. It is simple and crude to the extreme, and the sexual flavor is almost overflowing. Second, there is a lack of ups and downs in rhythm. Xiaobai's writing also pays attention to a rhythm, starting from the beginning, turning around, and foreshadowing. The author's mastery of this rhythm is obviously insufficient. A huge and awesome enemy often appears out of nowhere, and then the protagonist uses two props, and then suddenly kills the enemy out of nowhere the next day. The main focus is an abruptness. As a novel with combat as the core clue, everything from the foreshadowing before the boss appears, to the sense of oppression brought to the protagonist after the appearance, to the frustration of the protagonist, his efforts to upgrade, and then the defeat of the boss, are all indispensable. But in this book, a boss suddenly pops up and speaks harsh words. The male protagonist escapes through the system, then opens two boxes, downloads several copies in seconds, and curses all at once. What is this? This is... The performance of the five demon kings in the parasitic dungeon, and X's first appearance, these are the only two scenes that I think were well written. But I don't know why the author likes to use the subsequent plot to write the villain as a clown. Does he think this will make readers happy or what? Third, the clichéd setting. "Thieves of Time and Space" draws on infinite horror, and the settings of "protagonist, time and space, children of planes, and the upper world" are even more vulgar. The vest system is the highlight, reminding me of the black ball in "Killing City". But it incorporated too many messy things, including all kinds of cheesy special effects guns, and Ultraman, which really made me laugh. I thought it was a science fiction system, but it turned out to be an online game system. I feel that the author has no imagination... Fourth, expanded combat power. I'm not sure if this is a shortcoming, but I don't like it because it makes many things that were precious at the beginning of the story lose value quickly. Take Eleven for example. When I first watched it, I thought this girl was very cute, very strong, and decisive in killing. However, she would only bicker and chat like an ordinary girl in front of the male protagonist, and she was afraid of exposing her weak side. But as the male protagonist gets stronger and stronger, in the Heiying copy, he can easily crush the enemy who almost killed Eleven. In the later chess game with the master of time and space, she even became something like a hostage used to threaten the male protagonist. I became less and less interested in Eleven. I felt that she was quite dispensable. I don't like this kind of plot, just like I don't like the author writing the Five Demon Kings and X as clowns. I feel that the author is destroying interesting characters one by one and turning them into appendages of the protagonist. But as the core protagonist, I didn't feel the charm of personality. He was just a giant chuunibyou who survived the infinitely expanding fictional combat power of the novel world.

Hello, I am your fan. I feel really uncomfortable when I see some people making fun of you. In my heart, you are a kind person who keeps working hard for your goals. I will always support you, so can you kowtow to me? I hope you will not be ignorant of praise. (Dog head)

My liver is gone. I originally wanted to hold it in until 5.20, But I couldn't hold it in anymore. 23333 The confidence of playing games with spicy sticks in his mouth is so cool! Right doge It turned out that I wanted to draw it as a curly hair! But I'm so good! (Don't ask, it means you don't know how to draw. Everyone is the same)

Take a look Author

Obviously your writing is very good, but this book has the potential to become a god halfway through. Why does it always end in an anticlimactic way? Why is the plot always rushed? The last book can be understood as a sign of poor performance. During its glory days, this book became less and less updated after thousands of monthly votes, and then it gradually became quiet. Why don't you cherish your own work?

A book is not directed at one person. As a cultural work, it exports its worldview and even values ​​to the outside world. Therefore he should have upward values. If you like ruthlessness, you can find those who cater to your values. But I think everyone should at least realize that this is not right, that it is not right to be cold-blooded, and that this is not cool behavior. We should pursue a higher pursuit, and online novels should also have a higher pursuit. To put it simply, some literary masterpieces criticize the evil of human nature, but if they are promoting this evil, then they should be included in the banned books. If everyone pursues this evil, then our social system will collapse, and human civilization will be a joke.

After reading about 100 chapters, I found it quite good to read the novel, but the fairy grass is too much, and the plot progression is a bit stiff. The eleventh part is particularly obvious.

Do you know why you are not popular even though your writing style is very good and your imagination is wide-ranging? Because you are rebellious! I used to write about dark things and ask questions (although I also like to read them), but now it is short and weak, and you can still accept it if you are not a full-time author. But if you want to be popular, show some fighting spirit, young man!

Fortunately, I gave up the book a month or two ago. As long as I give up the book early, the discontinued update will not appear in front of me😏

The case was solved. This is the author's autobiography. I lost the final game, so I can't update it.

It's a photo secretly taken during the National Day——╭☞(￣▽￣)╭☞ (It turned out to be a detailed coloring, but the software crashed before the National Day, so I just copied the draft according to the lazy batch.

Don't mess it up, you are too impatient and the plot is written too fast. Either just get it right to the end, or just keep writing. When the new book first came out, I obviously put in a lot of hard work. I thought it would make it to the top, but as a result, the writing got worse and worse. Don't you want to write a book that can earn you money? Write!

Based on my experience of reading many books by the author, the protagonist's system and time and space master are both bad guys. When the protagonist is tricked until he is about to die, at the last moment, he will kill them both and then directly end the story. This is not nonsense. If you read the author's previous books, you will know that the protagonist is always the worst one, and everyone is lying to him.

I have read more than 200,000 words. It is at the top level in the online literature circle and has the potential to become a god. But I don't know why the results are not good and it is short.

I haven't read this book yet. I've always liked this author. Alas, it's a bit sad to see the latest update date. . . Nowadays, the era of online writing has changed a lot. This kind of writing is limited by the subject matter and may not be able to become a god. But I think there is absolutely nothing wrong with this author's talent becoming V5, and his writing is very distinctive. He is an author who can condense his divine personality, and has great reader stickiness, unlike some wireless-style novice writers who only recognize their works but not their pen names. The three new books I'm looking forward to now are the one by the author of "Wudao", "No Man Is Perfect", and this one. . . . Every time I think a book is updated slowly enough, the other books always surprise me. . . . .

The beginning is good, with a sci-fi feel. Later it became more and more vulgar and the writing was poor. It was just a novel written by a novice. Really bad work

Lao Wen, your writing is very good. I have read nearly three of your books. I have listened to all the complaints and complaints I feel that your books are full of food, but that is too dry. The protagonist is a person who is so wise that he is almost a monster, and he is invincible in terms of IQ I think it is very right for me. Appetite, but I want to give a suggestion, whether the author accepts it or not, I want to say that, except for the book "In Danger", my two favorite books are, The Self-cultivation of the Male Protagonist, and I Really Can't Reason Okay, let's start with the suggestion You can try to have more life clips, Or have an extra heroine in your life, because the old novel, the pace of your book is too tight. If you are a little lost, or if you read ten lines at a glance, you will probably have to turn the page and read it carefully to understand the logic If the pace is relaxed, for example, the beginning of the layout is three days ago, and the protagonists in these three days are Live a little life, don't just sleep for three days, and don't suddenly sleep three days later, right? After being nervous, relax a little, and suddenly capture the audience's heart at the critical moment. This is definitely the best plot Then the heroine is the protagonist's weakness, but the protagonist who is so smart and almost evil can't think of this? It is said that cleverness leads to cleverness, and enemies will do the same. As long as the heroine is gentle and smart, and knows how to cooperate with the hero to show that she will be killed at any time, when the hero becomes invincible and gets married in the later stage, what will the enemy say? Your brain is buzzing, right?

It's really short. You're so short that one-third of your chapters have no income.

Good guy, I'm just good guy! This time there is no introduction at all.

This novel is really good. What a pity.

Brothers! Release new book! ! ! Speed! ! Super sensory player! !

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