Konoha's Magical Power Is Invincible

I've read about a hundred chapters and expressed my thoughts. The author's plot is very good. The character settings, descriptions, and logical relationships are among the best among Naruto fanfics. It's worth a read. However, when watching it, it was really easy to skip the scene 😅. The names I gave and the words I spoke often came out as OOC. To be honest, if it weren't for the good plot, I would have been so addicted that I couldn't go on - the ice jade ointment and standing at attention, etc. Really broke my guard - I couldn't even think about it. For readers who have a strong brain-compensation ability to automatically round out the skipping parts, or who don't really care about the flavor of the novel, this book is still worth reading.

Killing is unusual, bad guys are not so easy to meet, they have to fight, and they may overturn. Just treat it as a side mission. Just do it when you encounter it without looking for it. But the protagonist treats the side mission as the main line. I feel that the whole book needs to be changed. Find a career that can continue to gain merit for a long time as the goal. The main line, the obstacles and bad guys encountered in the middle are treated as fighting side lines. I feel that this kind of novel that needs to collect something should be written according to the method of farming simulation management. I feel like the book lacks a main plot. It's been fighting all the time, and I just felt like giving soup in the capital of the Fire Country, but then it disappeared directly and was not mentioned again. You can take advantage of the opportunity of being blindly stabbed in the back to adjust and develop well.

This book is one of the best fan fictions I have ever seen in terms of writing, logic, and plot. . . Great, hope the author keeps up the good work. . .

After a week, I hope to have a lot of chapters to read.

The only one of the recent seedlings that can be seen! The title of the book is trivial, but the content is reliable. It is not childish and logical, and the dramatic conflicts are also integrated. Golden Finger has no awkwardness, and it is natural to integrate into the Naruto worldview. It can optimize the skills that the protagonist has learned and also gives people a sense of expectation to collect skills. The relationship between the characters is also worthy of praise. I really hate the kind of writing that is like playing a single-player game and writing an expository essay without details or dialogue between the characters. I also hate it when I deliberately want to write about characters but cannot make up specific events. In addition, the author did not force the readers to take advantage of the third generation and other high-level officials, but let the readers see for themselves through events and dialogues. Nowadays, many fan fictions "understand the king" as soon as they travel through time. They first have a high position and blackmail three generations of high-level officials, and use this as a routine to stimulate readers' emotions. In fact, the protagonist has not experienced anything, so he preemptively instills in the readers "what kind of person xxx is". Very low. In short, the author has no newcomer problems and feels more mature in writing. I am looking forward to the development of the protagonist, and hope that he can have more dramatic and tense plot performances with important characters such as Shisui and Itachi. Although the author is no longer writing stand-alone games. But when I read the novel, in addition to watching the tragedy of the protagonist changing the world through a different development, I also really want to watch the drama with the important characters in the original work.

The person is in Naruto, he is a cultivator of immortality, the relationship between the characters is similar to that of old fantasy, and the fighting scenes are like martial arts. To say that it is a refreshing article is not refreshing at the same time. As a reader, I have no motivation to read on. Author, you should either practice more or change your career directly.

This book is called Invincible Magical Powers! Where are the supernatural powers? Where is the invincibility? Why don't you change it to officialdom? What the hell is the whole palace fighting scene?

In Chapter 283, the protagonist uses his cultivation method to improve Sharingan and Kagerou in exchange for the Book of Sealings. Why does the protagonist help Fugaku step by step to reach the position of Hokage? He even lost a Sharingan, but even the condition of reading the Book of Sealings is not enough? You still need to exchange secret skills yourself, why should the protagonist help such a person?

The interaction with Shisui made my scalp tingle. . . I fucking thought I was seeing the gay Naruto fanfic I saw a few years ago again. (It made me so nauseous at the time that my scalp feels numb now when I think about it)

This book is also called 'Uchiha Fugaku's Dog after Time Travel'

There is also the thing of external incarnation. The clone actually has its own consciousness. The protagonist is really big-hearted. He is a restless rebel, so he is not afraid of the clone turning against the guest?

Uchiha Fugaku's number one kid, the ultimate wage earner, Uchiha Aozora! The clan leader Fugaku's! Naruto Fugaku's! If you want money, you have to ask Fugaku. To build a heavenly palace, you have to report to Fugaku. It used to be fine when the protagonist was weak, but now that he's so strong, it's still the same tone. Every time I click on this book, it's really hard to swallow when I think of the two titles of the protagonists above. The protagonist is afraid of trouble, wants so-called freedom, and does not want to hold any position. I don't agree with that. Seriously, whatever you gain, you lose. No money, no power, no power, no freedom! The writing style of this book is okay, but the subject matter later is a bit lame. The protagonist is afraid of trouble, wants so-called freedom, and does not want to hold any position. The result! The clan leader Fugaku's! Naruto Fugaku's! The protagonist, Uchiha Fugaku's number one horse boy and the ultimate wage earner! For his so-called fear of trouble and freedom, the protagonist wants funds and needs Fugaku's consent; if he wants to do something, he must report to Fugaku; he must also listen to the weak Fugaku's command and serve as his bodyguard, etc. Is this really hassle-free and free? Why should the protagonist listen to Fugaku? It's not because Fugaku is the clan leader and Hokage! So I really don't agree with the protagonist's practice of not being the clan leader and Hokage for his own so-called fear of trouble and so-called freedom! Everything you gain will be lost. No money, no power, no power, no freedom! The subject matter at the back of this book is a bit lame. The clan leader Fugaku's! Naruto Fugaku's! The protagonist's efforts are like working for others!

New book for newcomers. . . . . . As a result, the protagonist is so awesome, but he doesn't have any serious ninjutsu, just fire escape and flying knife, and other ninjutsu. Are they really Chinese? Why don't they even know how to try the five elements? The five elements unite and yin and yang manifest themselves. As a result, he kept fighting flying knives, and there was only one special one. He also said that this was the result of his large amount of chakra. He said that he liked long-range, and in the end he learned a few fire escapes. There is no other ninjutsu, let alone Uchiha, there are no other ninjutsu.

Let's put it this way, it's not impossible for the protagonist to fail, but at this time, we must update more and get over this paragraph quickly, otherwise, even if readers know that there will be a comeback later, they will be wasted by the grinding updates. Readers may feel uncomfortable when they first read it, but updating immediately will also make many people read the subsequent content due to inertia, and their senses of this plot will be overwritten. If readers are asked to wait for you to update, they will not want to read it. The final sense is: SB The protagonist is dead and I leave.

The more I watch it, the more familiar it becomes. Isn't this the Naruto version of The Legend of Zhen Huan, The Legend of the Golden Branch and other palace dramas. . . No wonder I can't read the novel

Uchiha Aozora

Can you write less about political struggles and more about the collision between magical powers and ninjutsu? Your book is called The Invincible Magical Powers, not the Invincible Politicians. What I want to see is the collision between different power systems, not the drama about palace battles you write. I see that many chapters in the back are often about political struggles, which is very boring.

After reading 400 chapters, I can't stand it any longer. He is organizing the Heavenly Court again and calling himself the Emperor of Heaven. It's so embarrassing. Later, I traveled through the dragon vein again. Alas, I can't stand it after reading Chapter 400. It's a pity. The later chapters are not to my taste.

Come on, watching the author evolve from the first update beast to the second update beast, it is easy for the author to continue writing naked, and now there is finally some improvement, author, come on. The story is good, if you write it patiently, you will be able to discover the Chollima horse 😁

Let's change the merits. Killing has merits, helping Konoha has merits. So what are these merits? Changing the world and creating a new one, I admit that there are merits and virtues, why not change it to killing people and getting more luck, otherwise what is the difference between having merits and virtues while sleeping with a girl?

Regarding the loopholes in framing the blame in these chapters (personal opinion, all book friends are welcome to discuss and correct) 1. In terms of timing, Uchiha has just returned from the front line, especially when the protagonist has made a major sacrifice on the surface (blindness in one eye). While the conflict between the senior Sarutobi department and Uchiha has become more and more intense, it has basically been put on the bright side of all the middle and high-level groups in Konoha. Choosing to play a conspiracy at this time, even if the conspiracy itself has no loopholes or flaws at all, for those with certain political sensitivities, if something happens to the Uchiha people, it is difficult not to think of you Sarutobi; 2. The framed target, Matt Kai, as a victim of disaster, was a victim in the eyes of the third generation. His father was a war hero who kicked Kirigakure's seven people into three people at the cost of his life. In addition to having ninja companions of the same age like Kakashi, Shiranui Genma, and Ebisu, he often A figure in the Konoha Village who openly carries out various Iron Man-style training and is well-known to the common people of the Konoha Village. Compared with a cold and cold character like Itachi who graduated from school early and basically only interacts with his own people, I want to smear him as a black evil who wantonly slaughters the civilians of his country. The characters have to be convincing, but the difficulty is a bit too high; 3. As for the method of framing, although the author has not yet deciphered it in the text, but from a rough look, it is basically an ANBU who used transformation techniques to look like the three protagonists, and then set fire to the protagonists. A village on the road to the group's mission target, and then released red smoke for help to lure them there to accuse them. Considering that Yamato was specially arranged to appear in this plot, it cannot be ruled out that Yamato used a wooden clone that is more deceptive than ordinary clone techniques to perform the above operations. Yes... But for ordinary civilians, or even a few retired ninjas in the burned market, without knowing any eye skills, how can they definitely tell whether the person who set the fire is himself or someone else pretending to be using various transformation techniques; 4. When choosing a partner, the Third Hokage was arranged to cooperate with the guardian ninja under the daimyo. Although there is a saying that "the enemy of my enemy is a friend", from the daimyo's point of view, between the Hokage and Uchiha, who both belong to Konoha, it should be Sarutobi's Hokage strength. To be stronger, if the daimyo wants to have only one jade, he should also take down the Hokage as the main strategy. There is no need for any confrontation with the Uchiha. Cooperating with Sarutobi and cutting off the Uchiha's strength will on the contrary consolidate the Hokage's single-core influence in Konoha.

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In the original work, Itachi defeated Orochimaru in one fell swoop. In this film, the side effects of the kaleidoscope were reduced, and the protagonist taught him magical powers, but the fight turned out to be difficult. Can the gap between the two be bridged by vigilance? ? ?

The current few chapters look good. If the subsequent chapters are well written, it will be a good book among Naruto fans. Come on

I'm very curious. Obviously some books can only be rated 8 points on tomato. The starting point has hundreds of stickers.

Is this a Naruto political article? But Naruto anime and politics don't go together well, and Goldfinger doesn't really fit into Naruto, and it doesn't look like they go together well.

I don't understand what's the use of writing an "s" compared to the heroine, that's called a dog breed? It's really annoying to look at

Not bad, not bad, it's already considered a masterpiece among fans.

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