A Witcher at Hogwarts

After reading twenty or thirty chapters, I can't help but feel unhappy First of all, regarding the setting of the witcher, it doesn't feel like a witcher at all. It's better not to add the character of the witcher. There was nothing like a witcher in his words or actions. After looking around, he saw that apart from a bag of materials and physique from another world, he was just a local wizard. As an old demon hunter, I don't know why I instantly abandoned all my demon hunter abilities and skills that I have used for so many years, and threw myself into the embrace of magic The setting of "I pretended to be an ordinary time traveler, and I can't let Old Deng see that I know the plot" is also sparsely written. Two different worlds will produce many points of conflict about common sense and cognition, and a lot of interesting content can be written, but they were all ruthlessly taken away. Dumbledore was also pitiful. He was forcibly reduced to intelligence by a mysterious higher-dimensional force and could not see anything. The most frightening thing is that the author realizes this and thinks "I can't let readers see that Dumbledore is so stupid", and then forcibly arranges some plots. In general, after reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the author originally had an article about earthlings traveling to HP. Thinking that there was nothing new, he added a witcher character and the beginning, and then interspersed some narration and content about the witcher. He mixed it up, smoothed out the burrs, and served it on the table. Finally, how should I put it, look forward to the author's next book.

It's better not to popularize the Trial of Grass. I feel like it's a completely different system just because it has a similar name, and the Witcher's potion is too buggy. You can consider setting the effect that can be used by people in the Harry Potter world to weaken it. After all, a powerful effect must have powerful side effects, and only the Witcher can resist it.

(This is a post from a frustrated author) First, let me talk about my personal feelings. It is very to my liking. I was sitting in front of the computer and planning to type words. I finished reading 15 chapters in one go. Then when I clicked back, I found that there were so many updates... The writing is very good. In addition, I really like the sword and magic style of The Witcher 3 (although the world and characters of The Witcher 3 are very open). It feels very attractive. It seems that the author has intention, uh, to make Professor McGonagall as the heroine? This taste is a bit scary (of course I know you are joking, author, I am just trying to make fun of it). There is no Gwent card in the world of Harry Potter. If the protagonist wants to make some extra money, it is recommended to promote this thing. In short, I personally feel that this book is worth reading and quite interesting. I hope the author can keep updating it and I will reward it when it is on the shelves. But I hope the author will not fail in writing in the end. "Ashes in Hogwarts" and "Bloodborne in Hogwarts" are lessons from the past. (I invested 30 yuan in Ashes, and all of it was gone...) Finally, I would like to shamelessly promote my own book here: "The Periodic Table of Word Spirits in Hogwarts" (it will probably be changed to Dragon Team meets Hogwarts soon), the single heroine of the Snake House, neither knife nor abuse (even if she is knifed, she will be sweet again immediately), the plot is gradually reaching its climax. I tried to sign a contract today and failed. In order to make the data look better and make the next signing successful, I decided to do this. I hope someone can help me.

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Although it is not a master-level masterpiece, it is still a rare good book. Out of 5 stars, it should be at least 4 stars. I feel it ranks high among Hogwarts fan fiction. This type of novel is prone to collapse, either due to the collapse of combat power or the collapse of characters. Currently, there are no problems with this book. In addition, Tonks is doing well at the moment. I hope that Hermione and Luna will not be the heroines in the future, especially Luna. I have read the novel several times and watched the movie. Other Hogwarts fans decisively left as soon as I saw that Luna was the heroine. I really can't stand the eye-opening setting of the novel or the actress in the movie (little hope, I can't help it if the outline of the book is written like this). A few other suggestions: 1. I feel that the current novel is in the style of fighting for hegemony (taking over the Ministry of Magic), and I am bald. As mentioned before, because of the intersection of the celestial and celestial spheres, there are seniors who have come to this world, so I hope that some monsters in the wizarding world can be brought to justice. Join forces with magical animals, and then write a demon hunting line (adventure and rescue, etc.), And write out the subsequent effects of the intersection of the heaven and earth. This will also extend the life of the novel and prevent it from being run out of work in the later stages. After all, having a bald little boss is really a stretch, isn't it? 2. The world of Hogwarts where the witcher enters is definitely a good setting. Not to mention the integration of magic, it is very good. What's more important is that the world view is harmonious. All Hogwarts fan fiction (that I've read) is actually a village-level novel. Some of the novels that can go out are not well written. The main reason is that there is no good opportunity to combine the magic world view with the real society. But the intersection of the celestial sphere gives the author an opportunity to let the real society passively but quickly realize the existence of the magical side of the world, and then the Ministry of Magic, under the leadership of the protagonist, saves the world (or assists ordinary people to fight against monsters, etc.). In this case, the combination of the magical side and reality is not so abrupt. The degree of intrusion must be determined by the author. 3. The more objective the better! The more objective the better! It's hard to agree with everyone. I think it's not easy to write a good fanfic of a children's book. After all, most of the characters in it are children with immature outlooks. Don't look at these children with too many colored eyes (the author has done a pretty good job at this. I've seen too many brainless Harry and Ron). , Novels about Draco, Patsy, etc.), Treating his current self as a teacher and his future self as the leader of the Ministry of Magic. He is objective and smooth with selfishness, and depicts normal human relations and sophistication (it would be better if Patsy could be given some more roles later on, I have always liked this character). Finally, I wish you a great box office success!

Why not have a blacklisting function? After being blocked, it will no longer appear on this account. There are many books that are really disgusting. I was so disgusted at the time that they appeared after a while. Just looking at the book titles and introductions, sometimes I can't remember that I have read them, and then I am given a lot of olis. . .

Logically speaking, Ethan should not be afraid of heights. Geralt was fine even after jumping from a height of 20 meters before his leg was broken by Wizfortego. For an ordinary demon hunter like Ethan who has not experienced a second mutation, it should be no problem to jump from a height of 10 meters without being injured.

Maybe it's because Harry Potter's outlook on life is different? Or is the author a reincarnation of a saint? I've only seen the first part of the movie so I don't really know. The protagonist reveals his origin when he meets someone, so he almost has his memory stolen. He is very quick on his feet, and they immediately start drinking happily together. He agrees to be a professor and exposes his ability. Is this a lick? My poison resistance is quite high, but this is really hard to resist. Perhaps it was designed this way because Harry Potter's maps are limited and the plot is basically in the academy? I came here for the Witcher. I glanced at the comments and thought I found some food.

After reading about ten chapters, I feel that the writing is okay The character creation is average, I don't see any shortcomings, but I also don't see any outstanding points It's just that the plot design has too many tricks, so I bought a copy of Beginner's Charms that day, and it was the first day I came into contact with Harry's world. He learned seven or eight spells in one night and was able to cast them skillfully~~ It was quite powerful. Those spells required Harry and his group of students to learn them for two whole semesters. Compared with the protagonist, these students were as stupid as pigs Then I thought the most was the above question. The title, but the flaws are not to be concealed, the writing is still very good, the story reads very smoothly, but if it is not good, let's just think that the protagonist is a born magic master with extraordinary talents and natural talents. But I was wrong. It didn't take long before the protagonist cheated again. Yes, he I cheated again. I bought something like a Wolf Fang UFO from the Diagonal Chapter. I think it's similar to an elf, so I made some magical props and biological transformations at night~~~ Could you please ask the protagonist, where did you learn this? It's a gifted, self-taught, and self-understood magic prop that was made into an EX? Now comes the teaching part~~~As mentioned above, the Spike UFO bought by the protagonist is no different from an elf in my opinion. Then the students were divided into two groups to deal with this thing. What is the difference between this and Lockhart's elf teaching? Of course there is a difference, but the difference is that the protagonist is cheating again~~ He can control the Wolf Fang UFO at will, stop when he says, and run when he says, without causing any trouble like Lockhart, which is gratifying. The protagonist has won the title of self-taught magic item creature controller after the magic genius and magic item creature transformation EX. It took the protagonist no more than three days to visually test the above abilities. With the protagonist's talent, who is Dumbledore? Who is Voldemort? There is also this teaching problem~~ Just let the students practice without teaching anything at the beginning. It is a genius teaching, and it is also called training teamwork ability. As a teacher, you can teach anything, a set of boxing skills, fighting skills, or swordsmanship skills. If it is not enough, physical exercise will do! If you ask others to practice teamwork without teaching anything, what will their students know? What kind of teamwork do you practice? As for the teamwork ability, this kind of thing requires long-term cooperation to develop a tacit understanding, right? The protagonist should at least let the students have a fixed team first, and they can just divide them into two groups and work together? Have you ever seen a football team and a basketball team that formed a temporary team and then randomly divided them up when the players were replaced next time? What teamwork can be practiced? Furthermore, to practice teamwork skills, the protagonist should at least explain teamwork first, how to collaborate, how to cooperate, and the necessity of collaboration. There is no need to explain anything. The students can understand it themselves? What is a teacher? Teachers teach students, and you, the teacher, are just cheating. I feel that the protagonist treats all students as geniuses like him It has only been ten chapters to create so many problems~~~ The author's story design ability is also a gift from God.

It's nonsense for witchers to go to wizards. Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry was originally established to avoid being persecuted by the church and to escape. If the church persecutes wizards, there are witchers.