A Dragonkin at Hogwarts

How do I beat the game if Harley Quinn is the main character? Find Stratholme: "Harley has spent half her life adrift, without a true mentor. If Stratholme doesn't abandon her, she's willing to become his godfather!" Then just let him rampage through the game.

The scene where Hermione and Dracolis fight on the train during the main character's enrollment, and Scabbers falls into Dracolis's clothes, is quite jarring. If Scabbers were a real rat, it would be one thing, but he's an old and ugly man. After all, the author made Draco a girl after the major changes. Author, is it really okay to arrange the plot like this?

Looking at your pictures, mine is really not as good.

Deracolys Malfoy

The setting is quite well-thought-out, and the writing isn't bad either, but the plot is extremely illogical. The characters' intelligence is forcibly lowered to advance the story (for example, the mother inexplicably leaves the protagonist alone to go to a beauty salon while she's just been assassinated; or the protagonist, who knows nothing, suddenly ignores his parents and decides to take the other kids to the alley—forget it, he's a reincarnated character!).

I suggest you don't make her a time traveler... Your character design and plot are completely disconnected. You might as well change her to a native... Even if you make her a native, there are some illogical aspects, such as not being able to think of a confusion spell. You seem to really enjoy writing plots by insulting the protagonist's intelligence...

These twenty-odd chapters were so painful to read. Does the author not know how to create a protagonist? The previous page described the protagonist as mature, while the next page he starts acting foolish. After making a foolish mistake, they started praising the protagonist's maturity. Does the protagonist's virtue only exist in the narration?

This is a Harley Quinn and Malfoy picture posted in the comments section by Midnight Animals.

The protagonist's overpowered abilities are terrible. He's supposed to be a dragonborn, yet his body is so weak; all he can do is roar, he has no other special abilities. His romantic subplot with the female characters is utterly ridiculous, like a dead eunuch. Either collect them all or just one; otherwise, don't write about gender-swapped characters.

I don't see the mental fortitude a transmigrator should have. You might as well have written the protagonist as a local. And if you've already decided on a protagonist with a scroll-based cheat system, then don't make it seem like the protagonist knows nothing. The first ten chapters were incredibly frustrating. I don't know how the later chapters are, so I won't comment on them.