A Dragonkin at Hogwarts

How to clear the level when the protagonist is Harley? Looking for this teaching: Harry has been wandering around for half his life and has never met a famous teacher. If he never abandons this teaching, he is willing to be his adoptive father! Then just wait until he kills everyone

Hermione and Draconis fight on the train when the protagonist enters school. The scene where Scabbers removes Dracolis's clothes is quite disturbing. It would be fine if Scabbers were a real mouse, but he is an old and ugly old man. After all, Draco became a girl after the author's magic change. Is it really okay, author, to arrange the plot this way?

After looking at your pictures, they are really not as good as mine

Delaica Malfoy

The setting is very thoughtful and the writing is not bad, but the plot arrangement is extremely unreasonable and forced to reduce intelligence in order to advance the plot (for example, the mother inexplicably left the protagonist alone to go shopping while she went to get a beauty treatment, even though she had been assassinated before; for example, the protagonist who knew nothing suddenly ignored the parents and decided to take several other furheads to Knockturn Alley, please be reborn)

It is recommended not to set it as a time traveler... Your character design is completely separated from the plot. It is better to change it to aboriginal... Even your setting of aboriginal is unreasonable, such as the confusion spell. You really like to write plots by insulting the protagonist's intelligence...

It's so painful to read these twenty chapters. The author doesn't know how to create the protagonist. The previous page said that the protagonist is mature, and the next page starts to be stupid After being stupid, he starts to praise the protagonist's maturity. Does the protagonist's advantages only exist in the narration? And after so many chapters, write more about the Dragonborn. Let's try some old stuff to make it exciting! It's so painful to watch, Dragonborn my Dragonborn, magic my magic

This is the picture of Harley and Malfoy that Midnight Animals left in the comment area outside

The main character is so rubbish. He is said to be a dragon. His body is so weak. He can roar like a dragon. He has no other special abilities. His relationship with the female character is really fucking speechless. He is like a dead eunuch. Either accept them all or accept one. Otherwise, don't write any gender-swapped characters.

I don't see the psychological quality that a time traveler should have. You might as well write that the protagonist is a local, and you have decided to write a cheat using a scroll, so don't make the protagonist know nothing. The first ten chapters are very frustrating, and I don't know how the rest of the writing is, so I won't evaluate it. I will only evaluate the first ten chapters. I can guarantee that very few people can survive the first ten chapters. . . . I still endured the frustration and continued reading. I couldn't bear it anymore and only came to comment.