Those Years Farming on the Mountain

This book doesn't work. 1. There is no main line, it feels more like there is no outline, just write wherever you think. 2. The golden finger is very unclear. After dozens of chapters, it is not explained clearly what the so-called inspiration is! There are also three golden chapters, which are even more confusing. 3. Too bland, without ups and downs, just like a running account, and tasteless. 4. This is the Xianxia division. Is it really okay for your martial arts to take up so much space? 5. Forget it, I will give you two more recommendation votes. I hope your next book will be better, or at least straighten out what you want to write.

It's very good. There are very few farming articles. This kind of bland feeling is rare at this starting point. It is quite attractive to old bookworms.

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The pace is too slow and the plot is too draggy! Just like the clever liquid, it is obvious that experiments can be carried out simultaneously in many aspects and types, but if you insist on using forty or fifty chapters to drag out the plot one after another, you can just write three or four chapters for a while, and people will fall asleep watching it! This book must be cut, it must be unfinished, bookworms over fifteen years old will post it

It really feels like it's a bit bland, but it's just not enough to look at.

My personal guess is that readers who really appreciate this book must be over 10 years old! As someone who has been reading for 20 years, I think this is a masterpiece. There are more than a dozen books on the bookshelf, but in my opinion, they are not half as good as this book! Is the update a bit slow? It is indeed a bit slow, but I am not in a hurry and write slowly. I have long passed the age of being impatient.

Start high and go low. The beginning of this book is well written, very flavorful, and suitable for savoring. If the author can be patient and write slowly, it can be expected to be a hit. The writing is not lacking in creativity, but it needs to be savored carefully. Possibly why there was no fire? Because the author is a little impatient, always thinking about cheating on the protagonist, showing how awesome the protagonist is, and then adding new scenery to this different world, and then adding too many settings, such as interior scenes, strange scenes, and the outer world. Many, many are too complicated, and there is no difference in this, it is very confusing. Secondly, the author is anxious. The contrast between the protagonist's character and his character is too great. The protagonist's character was very well written, and he was an image of a worldly master with very low desires and a rural atmosphere. However, later he was too impatient and completely ruined this image. For example, what he said and what he did were completely different. He kept saying that the spiritual liquid was not precious, but it was not harmful to ordinary people, and the body could not help but want it. Then the author set it up step by step and later set it so that the soul cannot drink the spiritual liquid until the soul awakens, which means that the protagonist is forcibly prevented from preaching. But when the protagonist drank the spiritual liquid, he didn't awaken. It's just the first time I've seen this spiritual fluid of yours, so there's no harm in being unable to resist the urge to drink it. When you accept a disciple, you have to teach him how to cultivate immortality, and you must drink it. Then the protagonist will figure it out step by step, add settings, this won't work, that won't work, and then you must have your soul awakened before you can drink it and cultivate immortality. Then came the slap in the face, the protagonist just gave away the spiritual plants grown at home, and others relied on the spiritual plants to realize the cultivation of immortality on their own. Originally, there was a protagonist who gave away the exercises, but it turned out that they were not used. A group of Taoist priests got together, and then discovered the spiritual energy from the plants, and realized it themselves. Then there are a bunch of warriors who were given seeds by the protagonist, but did not teach the skills. They and their masters figured out the extraordinary martial arts. I know that the author meant to add strength to the protagonist, which means that he is also the preacher of martial arts, but they came up with it themselves. Then the protagonist originally wanted many people to learn, and then he learned from it, but this was not reflected, so he just stared at the old Taoist priest alone. Secondly, I originally wanted to pursue someone who could endure the slow pace, but then the author became impatient and the pace was too fast. In the background, Daliang perished in two years? Then it was extremely dramatic. The emperor was assassinated. Although you were writing about a martial arts world, being assassinated was too dramatic. There were no masters around the emperor? There were not that many emperors who were assassinated. If you want to say that the rebellion was successful, then I believe it, but the result was an assassination. There is also a protagonist who cannot stand the way of the world and kills people randomly. After calming down, he makes a magic weapon to control others. There are also ways to use spells to rush into other people's libraries to take a peek, and then go around grabbing treasures out of nowhere. There is no interaction with deer, fish, or chickens later on, it's just the deer eating it, and then the protagonist exaggerating about the lesson. The previous protagonist is indifferent to fame and fortune, has the style of a hermit, is friendly with others, and is diligent in learning and asking questions. The protagonist in the back does whatever he wants, has double standards, does whatever he wants, and becomes the big boss behind the scenes. There is almost no pleasure, and there are very few saints in front of people. The less is less, but you can't just care about your own lust. You can let the deer and others turn into human shapes to highlight it from the side. You can summarize it simply, create and cultivate immortals, be invincible in the world, hide behind the scenes and guide the cultivation of immortals, that's it. There was almost no pretense. I originally thought it would only be 500 chapters, which is a pity for such a good novel. Fortunately, it ended in 500 chapters. I know that slow-paced novels may not perform well and make the author anxious, but slow-paced novels have the highest fan stickiness, which can only be said to be a pity.

Good-looking, the only immortal in the world, slowly farming and cultivating to become an immortal, no female protagonist! ! ! Come on! ! !

Farming articles really cannot be purely stand-alone, they must at least communicate with people, otherwise it will become an experimental diary, which will become more and more boring. Although the process of farming is important, the harvest is equally important. Now every time I write a long paragraph about the farming experience, in the end the harvest in my eyes is only "the protagonist has become stronger again", which makes people numb after reading too much. The suggestion is to either speed up the pace and let the protagonist acquire some new and interesting abilities, or to describe the role that some of the protagonist's discoveries, techniques or products have in promoting changes in the world, and to provide more side descriptions to talk about what farming is.

The biggest feeling this book gave me was that it was trying to teach me how to become an immortal.