You're All My Wings!

The text is smooth The story is complete The most important emotional scene is written with a sense of immediateness as the protagonist is falling in love with the two-dimensional heroine across the screen.

I read it in one sitting, it is a good book, the plot is smooth and not anti-intellectual. Complain whether you, the blue-haired elf, moved it from Lance 😃

Beautiful Elise

Brita, the third saint, the agent of the gods

I thought it was a fantasy adventure, but it turned out to be a dead end. You should have thought of it when you saw the title of the book. 😄

So far, at least one of Liangcao's books is relatively fluent in writing and has no particularly bad points. Is it really the author's first book? It's very powerful. The subject matter reminds me of Nikgaru's "The Otome Game World is Very Unfriendly to Passerby Characters" The world view is not very clear at the moment, maybe because I want to follow the story.

Arrogant Maggie Lu

Is there any chance for that magician lady? 🙂 This kind of lady is really awesome xp

The author is really attentive to this book 🙂 It has a substantial setting, there is no overly brainless plot, the development is very natural, and the emotional line has not been left behind. I really enjoy watching the strategies for the heroines, Elise is really cute 😊 Now I am looking forward to seeing the saint and the princess being conquered, give me a hard win!

The style of this book has changed a lot, maybe it is too abstract and divergent? But in view of the points worth reading before and after, I can still give a comprehensive evaluation. Next, let's briefly talk about the style differences before and after, as well as the advantages and disadvantages. Needless to say in the early stage, it can be said that there are almost no shortcomings. Just like the introduction, it is a Japanese fantasy, a typical adventure story. The protagonist relies on his own resourcefulness to succeed in both directions. The relationship development with the previous heroines is also peaceful and smooth, allowing a considerable number of readers to recall some of the feelings of first love. No obvious poisonous points were found. Some numerical display descriptions that many book lovers don't like to see are close to zero in the later stage, so book friends who don't like this can rest assured. Then let's focus on the later stage. My understanding of the later stage starts with ascending to the gods and traveling through time and space. The style of the entire story in this part is completely different, closer to Chinese fantasy. The protagonist goes through various things, constantly looking back to the past nodes, and making some changes, and these changes just contribute to the current history. The author has a lot of imagination, but I feel that the writing power is a little lacking. The author really hopes to tell a story about constantly traveling through time and space, making friends with important heroines at various points in time, establishing good relationships with them, and finally achieving a happy ending. However, there are some logical contradictions in some places and cannot be studied in detail. The author really hopes to explain some key events in the character dialogue so that readers can understand, but in fact it is not very clear. Instead, the dialogue seems very mechanical, as if the NPCs except the protagonist are all spectators, or are admiring? What's more important is that there is almost no foreshadowing for other female protagonists in the subsequent strategies. But in all of this, the flaws do not hide the flaws. The later setting of time and space, the protagonist's unique ability as a time-space miraculous astrologer, and the various means obtained by the protagonist through fraud, make the protagonist's portrayal full and attractive, so that it will not be like many books, where you will not remember the character of the protagonist after reading it. Of course, some of the character relationships are handled very curiously. Yes, I should use the word "curious". Fortunately, I have always been very accepting of such things, so even if I don't think that the later writing will be better than the early stage, I still have inexhaustible motivation to read it. All in all, there are many advantages. As for the so-called bad points and poisonous points in the later period, these are shortcomings shared by many grand narratives and harem novels. How to balance the easy-to-understand and complex settings, how to distribute the pen and ink reasonably, so that every heroine has flesh and blood. If the author can handle these two points well, I think it should be able to reach a higher level.