Mortals Start from Qixuanmen

Congratulations to the author on the successful signing, let me tell you some of my thoughts. First of all, let's comment on these pictures: 1. The setting of Ice Spirit Root is very good. It can make everyone feel more comfortable and increase the level without damaging future development (such as breaking through virtual training). It also allows you to have more space to play in the plot in the future, such as creating a new skill, creating some ice-attribute treasures, spells and spiritual herbs, so that you will have a lot of room for manipulation in future plots. For example, when you are in extreme yin, you can create a spell to restrain the corpse fire of Tiandu. When you break through, you can create an ice elixir, and then create a plot based on the search for the elixir. 2. It is very feasible to form a team with Han Li. In the protagonist's golden finger, two people can use the Sky Bottle without running out of resources, and the sum will be one plus one greater than two. I have a good relationship with Han Li and Han Li is not a repetitive person. It is very easy to form a team dungeon with Han Li. I will write here what I imagined about the protagonist and Han Li's bloody copy. First of all, you can use the golden finger of the protagonist to copy and strengthen magic weapons, such as the Black Iron Shield, Zimu Knife, etc. In the original work. The golden talisman that is about to be given away can not only be copied with unlimited charging, but also can be used to make infinite thunder. In the dungeon, you can use the Spirit Talisman to teleport two people together, and then Han Li will be the main character in the dark. In addition to the few NPS who died in the original work, you can also arrange for a few NPS to die, such as the pervert Feng Tianya, Zhong Wu, and then create some original skills and weapons after licking the bag. I remember that Feng Tianya seemed to have ice attributes in the description on the side. It can be said that as long as you don't run into Nangong Wan and Lao Xiang, you can basically finish the game very happily. It can be said that there is a lot of room for manipulation in dungeons and events after working with Han Li. For example, in Xutian Temple, Han Li is still with Jiyin. The protagonist follows Yuan Yao in the dark, and then kills Xuan Gu together with Huihe, or directly kills Xuan Gu at the beginning to get the Xuanyin Sutra and the residual map. The two of them follow Yuan Yao together, and secretly take the Xutian Cauldron. Let me write down my brief opinions on how to write mortal fan fiction: 1. First of all, I think the story of mortals is based on Han Li's path to immortality as a line, and each event and dungeon as a pearl. For convenience, I use events starting with s and copies starting with f Aura period: s lives in the hands of Dr. Mo, s golden light gives a gift package to novices, s Mo Mansion Qunjiao processing, s Tainan Xiaohui, s Ascending Immortal Conference, s shopping in Fang City, s Senior Brother Lu, f bloody trial, s foundation building. Foundation Building Period: s meets Qi Yunxiao in the black market, s obtains the Dayan Jue, s Yanjia Fort, f Blood Jade Spider, f participates in the border war, s crosses the capital city, f Yue Kingdom Palace, f kills the Formed Pill and obtains the strange insect list, s retreats from Yellow Maple Valley, s teleports to the Chaos Star Sea. S fights to form an elixir, s obtains a gold-eating insect, f hunts monsters, and s forms an elixir. After the elixir is formed, we can take care of it when we have time, or we can organize it together 😁. Some of these events and dungeons must be experienced. For example, if you want to build a foundation, you need a foundation building pill, and you must have tried one in the Immortal Ascension Conference and the Blood Trial. Some of them are not required to participate in the list of strange insects for the Killing Pill. The author can choose something for the protagonist to spend time with Han Li, such as the Yue Palace dungeon, or if necessary, the protagonist can not participate and let Han Li participate alone, such as obtaining the Dayan Jue. It all depends on how the author chooses and writes. 2. Description of the character's emotional line 1. Does the author write about the heroine? Who does the heroine write about? Original or original character? Let me give you a brief summary of how I wrote Chen Qiaoqian as the heroine. First, she appeared when Brother Lu was troubling Brother Murong, to stop Brother Lu, and then leave an impact on appearance, high magic power, or character and bearing. Then, in the incident of killing Brother Lu, I focused on using some coincidences to leave evidence or clues that the protagonist was the savior. Then, in the bloody copy, I met the hero by chance to save the beauty or fight side by side to deepen the emotion, and then create an original event. Let the two people get to know each other, and then have another hero save the beauty or fight side by side during the border battle to deepen their relationship. Then, the life and death line described in the battle of the imperial city can sublimate the relationship, and then reveal his true feelings. Then the protagonist explains that he is devoted to the Tao, so that Chen Qiaoqian can resonate with the Tao because of his feelings. Then the protagonist goes to the Chaos Star Sea and Chen Qiaoqian forms an elixir in Tainan. Then you can refer to Han Li and Nangong Wan. In the spirit world, you can create a new person to attract people or ascend to find a husband. 3 Description of the relationship with Han Li: Judging from the current situation, the protagonist should be hanging out with Han Li. This requires considering the description of the emotional issues between the two people, that is, how to describe the two people supporting each other and sharing the joys and sorrows. Here I would also like to introduce some ideas. After the two people retreated from Yellow Maple Valley, they repaired the teleportation array together. Due to an error, there were not enough materials for the teleportation array. Han Li went to buy it and then Nangong Wan absorbed his cultivation. Han Li entered the Qi training period. Then focus on describing Han Li's helplessness and response to the matter. Go to the protagonist but fear that the protagonist may be malicious and have trouble making a decision. Then carefully describe the protagonist's care for Han Li after seeing this, or directly express the brother's desire to pursue the right path. To the extreme, you can even tell the story of time travel to sublimate the friendship between the two. You should describe it very carefully here, otherwise it will be easy to explode. Of course, you can also deepen your feelings little by little from one thing. The above are my views and opinions, I hope it will inspire the author.

Hey, he is an eunuch after all. It is a disaster for all mortals.

😁Congratulations on signing the contract

Think about it and regain your composure. This book has such a good start. It's such a pity for eunuchs. If you have any questions, you can discuss them with us all. Come on＾0＾~

Are you having a good rest? Don't be a eunuch anymore😭

If you still can't write, please give me a letter of approval 😭

Let's talk about the original book. Others still don't know about this book. There is progress.

The author has a big question, do you write fan fiction directly? Will this be prosecuted for copyright infringement? Do I need to apply with the original author?

Congratulations, congratulations on signing the contract 🙂

The author just needs to be stable now, and the writing is very good. Among the mortal fanfics I have read so far, writing mortal fanfics is not a dead end, but the original work is too difficult to surpass, and some people do not have their own original content. The content is too homogenized, and most of them have the potential to develop like Xiaobai. Therefore, most of the mortal fanfics have been abandoned. So here I just suggest that the author can write some original or content that is not covered in the original work without destroying the balance of logic and combat power, instead of blindly following the rhythm of the original work.

😥Brother, I came here to check in, but suddenly I have to have a surgery. Don't give up just like that. It was not easy for us to sign the contract. I am also confused. I need to organize my thoughts carefully. Before writing a story, you must think of the ending and write an outline! Be sure to write an outline! Be sure to write an outline! Otherwise, it will be stuck! Take a break for two days, read similar novels, and look for inspiration. You are definitely a newcomer with good grades. Come on!

Ice attributes, skills, and magic weapons are not easy to choose.

No matter how good or bad the writing is, I will follow it.

Come on, it's rare to see a mortal fanfic, it's very well written.

The author doesn't need to care too much about whether it's good or bad. If ordinary people can write it down, it's considered a success.