Mortal: Copy the Little Green Bottle at the Beginning

Did the author not know the situation of Senior Brother Lu in the original novel, or did he just come to it after watching an anime? Senior Brother Lu is equivalent to a son-in-law. How dare you run away in front of him? The family doesn't want it anymore? You dare to stroke the beard of the Jiedan family like this, your opening two games are really shocking.

Most of the fans are ruthless at the beginning and become a money-splitting boy when they meet Han Li. The reason is easy to understand, that is, some authors are limited by their writing skills and it is difficult to deal with it. The former with better writing seems to be a fair deal, while the latter is almost like Han Li's licking dog... As for the protagonist of this book who has a sky bottle, Han Li should be treated more rigorously, and never describe him as the latter or a follower. If you really want to become Han Li's love dog or follower, I actually have a way, which is to describe the protagonist as Quhun No. 2. In this way, Han Li will not only give you the Sky Palm Vase, but also try his best to help the protagonist form elixirs 😜

This timeline is a bit confusing! In the original work, Han Li only entered the Yellow Maple Valley to practice Qi at the eighth level. He spent several years in the Yellow Maple Valley Medicine Garden, and only then entered the Bloody Forbidden Land when he reached the level of perfect Qi training. As for this article, the protagonist is a single-type alien spirit root, with hundreds of blocks of high qualifications in Han Li. He starts with the twelfth level of Qi training, has a copied gold finger, and has no shortage of elixirs. He directly builds the foundation. When it comes to the plot of the Bloody Forbidden Land, the middle stage of the foundation building is barely reasonable. But when it comes to the Yanjiabao plot, the timeline is so messed up that it's nonsense. Han Li left the Scarlet Forbidden Land, but stayed there for several years. After the sect issued the Foundation Establishment Pill, he cultivated the Foundation Establishment Elixir himself, refined the pills himself, and refined dozens of them before building the Foundation. How long did it take? After Han Li established the foundation, he had to become a disciple, revise the Qingyuan Sword Technique, find the Fountain of Spiritual Eyes, and obtain the Inverted Five Elements Formation. The protagonist detonated the Yan Family and Ten Thousand Beast Mountains in advance. How could Han Li follow the story of Yan Family Castle? ? He probably hasn't built a foundation yet!

Han Li bought equipment more than a year in advance and got the market wrong. Qi Yunxiao and Xin Ruyin also appeared six years in advance. At that time, you were probably still a minor. What does the invasion of the demonic path have to do with you, a foundation-building miscellaneous fish? That is the worry of the Yuanying boss. The Nascent Soul boss of the Six Kingdoms of Demonic Dao lost the battle, so the Yuanying Stage cannot attack the Golden Core Foundation Establishment Period. The Demonic Dao invasion will not be possible unless the seven sects of the Yue Kingdom have late Yuanying monks. They have been preparing for decades. After the demons destroyed several Dao countries, they had to allocate and digest several countries before the Tiandao Alliance was established.

Haha, I just want to know if the author has read the novel Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. I don't even remember the plot time. What novel are you writing?

The writing on my forehead says I am a fat sheep. Am I a fool?

It doesn't matter whose path you take. If there is a shortcut, why not take it? If there is a shortcut, you would be a fool if you don't use it. Go further on this basis.

🎭 Personality: He is a gentle person, not particularly toxic; 🎬 Plot: A bit boring. In the early stage, I followed the Moon-Sealing Sect route, which was a bit innovative but not much. Now I have advanced to Chaotic Star Sea, and I am going to separate from Han Li and go to Tianxing City. ✒️Writing: Smooth, not surprising 👏The overall evaluation is between grain and poisonous weeds, partial to grain and grass 🔨Disclaimer: Personal evaluation is based on your own perception! ! !

All fellow Taoists are welcome to read!

Come on, update, you can feel more comfortable, such as magic weapons, upgrades to be stronger, leapfrogging battles, etc.

If it's not enough, it's just following Han Li's path, nothing new.

The origin of the protagonist still needs to be optimized. It's only 110,000 words, and there's not much foreshadowing. It's best to change it.