Hey, King of Humans

This book tells the story of how a young dwarf who has just grown up and lives in a dwarf city that is lacking in supplies and self-isolating gradually realizes the backwardness of his own race, and tries to develop his own race while slowly becoming the common master of the world. Goldfinger is a dream grandfather who comes from the earth and teaches the protagonist various knowledge. The protagonist is not only the son of the previous city lord, but also a dragonborn. Let's talk about the advantages of this book first. Obviously, the non-travel aborigines + unpopular low-profile races + western fantasy themes are enough to dissuade most people, but the author still attracted many readers with his extremely amazing writing skills. Different from some young writers who only pile up adjectives endlessly and pursue gorgeous writing style, the writing style of this book is strong, simple, smooth and natural, and its level is considered to be extremely top-notch in the current online novel world. It is so strong that it makes people doubt that it is a high-level translated European and American fantasy work. When writing about people, the author mainly relies on dialogue and action to show his character traits, and creates many vivid characters without too much nonsense; when writing about scenery and battles, he uses exquisite and accurate words and detailed and orderly narrative to outline vivid pictures, which is enough to make people feel immersed in the scene. The second point that makes people feel comfortable reading is the treatment of characters. The protagonist is from the Lawful Good camp, thinks of others in everything, and sometimes even seems stubborn about sticking to the bottom line, which is rare in today's online environment. When the protagonist interacts with various types of characters (sincere, cautious, cunning, arrogant), the various interactions between the two parties are written very realistically, and there is nothing that makes people feel OOC. This is easier said than written. After all, too many authors keep repeating dull character templates, and each character reads like a blur. The rich accumulation of details in this book will make people feel that each character is a real person that can be seen around them, especially the warmth shown when the protagonist interacts with family/friends/gods, which is really well written. With such delicate writing, it can be seen that the author has rich observations on life, thoughts and experiences on interpersonal relationships. However, it is a pity that the flaws of this book are also relatively obvious, making the story appear to be on a high-end and low-end level. There are different opinions on whether this book is bad. I think the most fundamental problem is that the author didn't think clearly about how he wanted to write the main idea of ​​the story, and the result was a hodgepodge. The first part of the dwarf underground city talks about the protagonist's character/relationships/golden fingers/living environment. This part is very good and no problem. In the second part, the protagonist follows the caravan to the Elf Academy. This part is a typical sword and magic theme (the adventures and gains of the small adventure team and the protagonist becomes stronger). It is very well written, but the handling of a half-elf who suddenly starts to embrace the protagonist is very poor, and the emotional entanglement in the writing is too delayed. In the third part of the Elf Academy, the theme of the story changes from adventure to racial conflict. The author tried his best to use the protagonist's mouth to say that only some elves are bad, but at the same time, the school scene depicted was an all-round and systematic suppression of dwarves by elves. He also described elves stealing dwarven technology, using puppets to politically control dwarves, and suppressing dwarves' social status legally, economically, and culturally, leading readers to vent their emotions in the direction of hating elves. However, this is not in line with the common development direction of racial reconciliation that the author's protagonist strives for, so readers can only lament that the protagonist is a fool. There was basically no joy in this experience. What's worse is that this academy chapter seems to have controlled the author's thinking, causing weird changes in various settings throughout the book. So we saw the protagonist's grandfather spend several years teaching a stubborn dwarf from primary school to university level mathematics + physics and chemistry + struggle theory; then we saw a dwarf suddenly obsessed with "horse hair" and learned a set of ideas to transform the world, causing a story that was originally innovative to fall into the common routine of making red in other worlds. (The problem is that this subject is difficult to write about. The author can only write about the elf/dwarf issue as a confusing hodgepodge that is both a race issue, a class issue, and a clash of civilizations. It is as if the author suddenly wants to copy and paste the contents of the middle school politics textbook into a Western fantasy, which is quite a kind of under capitalism. The absurdity of engaging in GC in a segregated feudal theocratic society) In addition, we also see that while an elf civilization that can build huge cities, huge crossbows, and lasts for at least a thousand years does not have university-level mathematical abilities, a dwarf became capable of teaching advanced algebra after being taught by a time-traveling grandfather for a few years. And geometry tutor; I also saw the protagonist returning to his hometown to suddenly attack the city's ruler and his wife (his aunt and uncle), and after launching a failed coup, the whole family ran away and he was wanted; he also saw that the Elf Parliament, which passed bills based on contribution points, could revoke the bill at any time, for the sake of short-term public opinion The long-term self-destruction of the parliament has made the contribution value emphasized in the first half of the book a joke... The final solution to all this farce is to isolate the protagonist (put him in prison) and let the enemy self-destruct (the monster suddenly rushes out to destroy the elves' plan, and the elves' civilization is severely damaged), which makes people laugh and laugh. Now, the protagonist has used the golden finger to awaken in the past ten years after reaching adulthood at the age of sixty, and has become an undefeated master of super weapon combat; a dragonborn who can predict danger, scan terrain, and cross obstacles to know creatures; and has a perfect self-balancing cycle. A super-powerful spellcaster with an extraordinary magic system; the world's most powerful mathematician; a master of illusions who can destroy other people's minds and make them mad; a god who can heal wounds and control the magic of other priests of the church (yes, the protagonist is now a dwarf walking in the world with the power and authority of a true god). The degree of this hangup has reached the point where it feels like it is almost over. Summary: Western Fantasy is a fine book with excellent writing style, but it is good at writing at the micro level and neglects to write at the macro level, which makes the story structure lack of rationality and the hook is too big.

I don't quite understand why so many people don't like the dwarf protagonist. This is a novel, not a movie. Does the appearance of the protagonist have any impact? And even in movies, the appearance of halflings and dwarves did not affect the results of The Lord of the Rings and The Hobbit. This is a fantasy world, what's the highlight? It's another world, it's people's living conditions, it's the customs and habits of this world, it's everything that is different from the real earth, and it's not about how beautiful and handsome the protagonist is. He is worshiped by enemies and leads the aborigines to learn earth technology... Hiss, maybe most readers actually want to see the latter? In my opinion, this work is very good. The plain and simple description makes the world truly appear before my eyes. If Tolkien's works opened a door to the Western fantasy world for me, allowing me to roughly see the entire world of Middle-earth, see the majestic scenery, and feel shocked, then this book can be said to be a room in that door: the dwarves. Walking in, I can see the details of dwarf life, which are different from others but full of life and make people feel comfortable. If I were to use one word to evaluate this book, I would choose the word "orthodox Western fantasy". It may also be that I am old-fashioned and stubborn, and like this book, I am no longer suitable for the "trend".

It's a very traditional Western fantasy novel, unlike those modern Western fantasies with various settings, but I personally feel that the author didn't write the flavor of a traditional Western fantasy. The writing is relatively stable, there are no big explosive points, but there are no obvious poisonous points. Personally speaking, it is the kind of book that can be read all the way after being fattened, but once dropped, it can never be picked up again. The author's dialogue skills are a bit weak, some dialogues are a bit stiff, not like daily conversations, and there is no random translation accent.

The book is a good book, but if the audience is too small, it is destined not to become popular. 1. Western fantasy novels have a small audience. 2. It is more serious and has a small audience. 3. The indigenous protagonist has a small audience. With the three debuffs added up, if anyone can read it, it's because of the author's personal fans.

I skimmed the first chapter, but it's not my cup of tea. I've followed the author before, and I've also read a little bit of Chronicles of Magic, but I didn't stick with it. Let me talk about my own point of view. Why do everyone say that Xihuan has become lonely these years? I think there is a reason. It is not fun enough. Originally, Western Fantasy has a famous feature, the names of the characters are difficult to remember (of course, this is not difficult for people who often watch Western Fantasy or play games like The Witcher), so if the writing is more uncomfortable, it is destined to be difficult to get out of the circle. If coupled with the author's unique ideas, for example, he took a different approach when setting the protagonist's race, setting it as a dwarf, troll, naga, murloc, goblin, ratman, etc. This can certainly attract some authors with unique tastes, but I think that at least now people are relatively superficial and generally like handsome and cool people. That's why the mainstream races of Western fantasy protagonists are still humans, elves, and half-elves. Without it, just one word, handsome is enough. So why is Western fantasy so niche now? Some authors who write Western fantasy don't submit to the Western Fantasy section but choose the light novel section. I think most authors should find out why.

Has the author ever considered writing an alien fantasy novel? It's not the usual dragon novels, but more exotic creatures. Anyway, there are quite a lot of strange animals in DND. I think it would be quite interesting if there was a fantasy novel about exotic beasts where the main character was not a dragon, coupled with the author's writing style. 👍👍👍

I know why this book is not popular. In the final analysis, it is a matter of sense of substitution. The author's writing style is good. First, this book uses an indigenous person as the protagonist, and he is also a dwarf. It's not that a dwarf cannot be the protagonist. It's just that after reading this book, I would rather read The Hobbit. I, a novice reader who likes to read time travel stories, have no sense of involvement at all, and I am confused when I read it. The second point,,,, forget it, there is no point in talking too much now. The beginning is doomed and cannot be changed. I can only say that I wish the author to write better and better. It is best to produce movies and books, which can also be considered as out of his own characteristics. I was confused when I watched it, except that it was interesting at the beginning, but I lost all desire at the end. Goodbye

What can I say? Every time I read a book by this author, I feel like it's good, but it makes me feel bored as I read it. The plot always progresses so blandly. It's really not to my taste

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The writing has always been good, but the oppression brought by the elves is getting heavier and heavier, but the protagonist has always been unhurried. It cannot be said that he has not made progress, nor that he has not grown. But under this long-term depression, I can't find many reasons to continue reading. Especially when I don't like the female protagonist. Their romance may be regarded as an adjustment, but under the huge contradiction, these are not important.

Writing and writing turns into a red revolution in another world. . ==It makes people numb. . In the past, friends around me who were crazy about Amway in the circle of friends read this book. From now on, I will only finish the novels I have read.

Some fans of the author in this book review section have an inexplicable arrogance. The indigenous protagonist has strange senses - "Novel with time travellers are all white novels" The dwarf protagonist is very different from humans, which makes it strange to read. It's not as thorough and domineering as the Alien Beast style - "If you don't like reading, don't read. If you can do it, go ahead." Some people really like to quarrel, quarrel, label, and map the atmosphere, which can lead to bad and distorted atmosphere in a book review area, and turn good gatherings into mutual attacks and prejudices. In the end, the subscription was dropped, and ordinary readers ran away disappointed. Gonghuo still thinks that he has done a good job in protecting him.

Political dramas written by young literary authors really make people feel sick to their stomachs

First of all, let me say that I am not a wizard. Elves can be arrogant, even to the point of being arrogant, stupid and arrogant. But are you sure the author is writing about elves and not drow? Good guy, in order to kill the Chimera, he used humans and deceived the dwarves. If you want to write a story about intrigue, you don't have to pretend to be a multi-racial Western fantasy.

This book, on the surface, is a classic Western fantasy, but it is actually about the revival of an ancient nation.

The cramped college setting finally derails the book in its long chapters. After all, I didn't see what the dwarf king did. The adventure was good, but the details and composition of the world view were relatively simple. This way of writing led to the theme of the writing becoming more and more scattered. Sous's previous books had this problem to some extent.

Why does the author have to come up with an unconventional title every time? The title alone turns away a lot of people. Qingguang, who is a bit literary, sighed when he saw the name.

Soth is always limited to one area by himself. Swords and magic should belong to its theme. Just like the protagonist, any existence that is classified as a foreign object cannot normally become his real main force. Just like Sauron, the guy who became the Lord of Death, he always regards his sister and his few women as more important than anything else. Necessarily, when his sister is in danger, he can use the Golem Legion and many dependents as cannon fodder. Anyway, after death, he will most likely become his heroic spirit, holy spirit, and his waiter, nothing more. An old author I like said that Soth is a person who writes more rigorous books, but I think he is also bad in this. There is no larger book. Looking at the overall situation, South feels that he is always reluctant to waste words on the power system and power levels in his books, but every time he pushes the protagonist to a larger range, he never expected that giving the protagonist enough power always feels like a level 50 brave, like a five-person team, trying to forcefully push a level 100 demon king. Although he overthrows it, it always feels like there is They are incomplete and boring. In general, they lack passion and the emotions they should have. Just like the monster bloodline of the protagonist, it would be better if you simply set it as a Balor Demon. Then go to the abyss to kill a Balor Demon, advance to the Balor Balor Demon, and then find a way to become a secondary demon lord. In terms of strength, for example, what can easily blow up a mountain range? It gives people a concrete power, isn't it a good description? After that, he will slowly manage the abyss until he unifies one level and becomes an abyss giant. Then he will conquer other levels and find a way to become a demon prince. . . . . . Anyway, you have the final say in the settings here?

I'm a little angry when I see so many people saying that this book is not good to read. It requires brains, the dialogue is logical and the plot is rounded. It really seems like a new world is slowly opening up in my mind, and such a story is really happening in this world. This kind of fun is what I want most when reading novels, not just "refreshing". In fact, I never feel that those mindless "refreshing" can bring me the pleasure of reading novels. This book is definitely a fine product, and the author is also an old author. He may not need my praise, but I still want to send it out for all the book friends who like this book to see. 🪖

I hope that the next book will not be literary or ambitious, but just a road novel for an individual or a small team.

It's fully booked, and I've basically voted for the recommendation votes every day. I voted for three monthly votes this month. I have no other intention. I just want to say that there are still a lot of people who like it. I hope the author can stick to it.

Why is it still being serialized even though it's finished? It almost scared me to death.

There is a plot in the middle where the heroine manipulates the illusion to have sex with others and betray the hero to obtain information. It's really disgusting🤢. It's okay if you hypnotize others into making fun of you. What's the difference between knitting it yourself and having your wife cut it out with someone else to make money for you? Be more ruthless, others will know the feeling of deep love.

I've started a new book but I haven't posted a single chapter to say so 😅

The progress is currently 45%. The biggest shortcoming of this book for me is that the protagonist is too tall. 😞

I finished reading this book in the middle of the night, and it's really hard for me to handle the ending. It's so humorous, man. Not to mention the faders, it's at least as bad as Kaguya's. The light-speed jump plot is over. I just want to ask the author if he still remembers that there was a character named Lanli in the early plot.

Is Hilo Ai 10cm taller than the male lead? Is this appropriate and will girls like it?

Hey, I won't talk about the good stuff. I only read books that I like to read if I approve of the author's books. Coming to complain, this Jiangu City coup really cracked me up. Isn't this coup a joke? A coup on the forehead, then the news leaked, and then the lord was killed. In a mass killing, a group of people flew from the southern part of the continent to the northern part of the continent, which is equivalent to crossing the world? ? ? ? I don't even know what to complain about after watching it. Moreover, the lord and his wife have completely split personalities. In the past, they were focused on developing the territory, but later they became greedy and wanted to kill the protagonist? ? ? Good Guy is such a villain. The protagonist has such a dark heart. He killed the protagonist long ago when he was a child. There is no need to kill him when he grows up. Messy, very messy. Now I feel that the author should write about farming and put aside the fighting scenes.

Not bad, not bad, self-recommended, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, multiple female protagonists, and has now entered the world of Inuyasha. There are some pictures to see

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!