Mage Story: False Dragon Eternal Life

Some time ago, someone questioned whether the book "False Dragon Eternal Life" was written by AI? While I retorted, I also felt a little emotional: Times have changed. South is a writer familiar to many long-time fantasy readers. "Mage's Story", "Sword and Sorcery and Taxi", "Twenty-Sided Dice"... I started with DND themes, and then started to write my own stuff. "Hey, Human King" (homophone for Dwarf King), including the current book "Mage Story: Fake Dragon Eternal Life"... In fact, he has been writing, and he has even become more sophisticated, and his writing is more delicate and proficient. However, times have indeed changed. It makes no sense to say that he is like AI. The AI ​​is almost like him. The style and taste of translation and detailed description are how Soth wrote his books twenty years ago, and he is even stronger now. His story is deeper and his techniques are less mainstream. It feels better if he doesn't do it. He just keeps telling stories, telling the story of a mage's pursuit of eternal life. There are not many people who write stories like this nowadays; there are almost only one person who can tell a solid fantasy, sword and magic, or DND flavor story. Look and cherish.

A good book, full of picturesque details. The protagonist has the qualities and demeanor of a mage. The characters all perform their duties like actors. It is neither a bad joke nor a frivolous one. It is a narrated travelogue.

It has been emphasized that the protagonist has been "mentally retarded" for more than ten years and is over 40 years old, which does not give readers any sense of empathy. I just feel that these "labels" are not pleasing. In addition, the nonsense about the protagonist's aristocratic family does not reflect how detached the protagonist is, and the allusions to "eldest brother", "mother" and "liar", or the output of personal values, also make people feel quite greasy. Obviously the writing is great, but when used in the scenes mentioned above, it is quite frustrating.

In his own territory, he directly executed the people in his territory because of their cowardice and incompetence. Outside, he faced off against the gods in order to save a little girl. The Mage Association in their base camp had their apprentices cut off their heads because they were blocking the way, and they worked as nannies for two selfish giant babies at the Magic Temple outside. There is also the latest chapter of the time traveler plot. I really don't understand the protagonist's motivation to work as a nanny in the time traveler base camp. What are you trying to do? Can these high school teachers and high school students help you? Or do you enjoy the feeling of being domineering in a different world and begging for mercy in front of your fellow villagers? The fellow said, "I hope you won't disappoint us" (Chapter 536). To put it bluntly, what qualifications do these time-travelers have to say this? Is zzzq in the brain or is it ptsd? Are you born a bitch? I lived a total of 14 years in my previous life. I was a patient with ALS for half of my life. The protagonist still wants to "go home". Brother, you have lived in a different world for more than forty years. You have parents and younger brothers who love you and are getting older, and you have a master who does his best for you. Which is your home? Are you thinking this way because your brain has been kicked? Does the author think that forcibly adding a main line of "going home" to the protagonist is particularly easy for readers to buy into it? You lived ten years ago, right? ? The protagonist I write is becoming more and more like a nc and a scumbag. Please don't disgust me, okay?

It's all God's perspective and useless descriptions

You're such a thick-eyed guy, you're actually opening a new book behind your back!

After writing for so many years, I still specialize in fantasy... As a result, there is no one that is out of the ordinary, and it can perfectly avoid all the cool points. It is also the only one.

It felt like it was very boring at 400 chapters. In fact, the best part was the adventure part before transforming into a dragon. It was boring after transforming into a dragon. This book is really not as good as the similar novel Stormwind. That book was close to 4 million words before it made me feel a bit bored.

In Chestnut Tree Village, the protagonist killed the person who had accepted the gold coins but did nothing. Later, when there were rumors, he cut their tongues and whipped them, and then hanged the person who spread the rumors. To be honest, when I saw this, although I didn't teach him and called him cruel, that's how Internet literature is, and the protagonist can be considered "decided in killing". But it gets a little funny later. When the protagonist wanted to save the little aristocratic girl who was in a vegetative state, he thought the gods would kindly let her go. It felt funny at the time, and the character of the protagonist was a bit fragmented.

You may want to pay attention to it in the future. The dragon with pig's feet is stitched together, which may not please both sides. Readers of Western fantasy dragon fiction and readers of Eastern dragon fiction have different preferences. Your stitched monster may not please both sides.

The protagonist is a mage, maybe because of the author's detailed description, I don't think he is like a mage More like a warrior who uses a two-handed staff and knows a few magics The mage goes out bytaking a boat and walking The mage fights with two-handed staffs and some nodules with no special effects of unknown meaning, well, to make crabs delicious To eat in the wild, you need to cook them in pots and pans, uh, and make a fire. . . For such a mage, I always feel that he will be slapped to death by the giant dragon's paw. His strength is a bit ridiculous. This world with gods should theoretically belong to the world of high magic. A mage in a world of high magic relies entirely on his body to fight, and his legs and legs to travel. Take a boat, eat pots and pans outdoors Netheril's 11th-level senior mage (not to mention the 21st-level legendary mage who can destroy the country with a forbidden spell) can have his own mage tower. In aerial combat, one person can defeat a city. Isn't your mage a bit too weak?

Is it a data problem? Why doesn't it even have an introduction and tags?

I watched a little bit and it was okay, but there was a lot of nonsense. No wonder no one watched it.

The old author has a good attitude and never locks the comment area no matter how much the readers complain. Although the more I read the book, the more boring it becomes. But this must be liked 👍. Those who are petty these days and lock the comments are directly sentenced to death. There's no need to get upset. The more you write, the less grounded you become. I'm looking forward to your next book. Forget this one.

How do you compare the more than ten years of your previous life as a child with the more than forty years that followed? Even if you were confused for the rest of the life, you are still a native there. You don't understand, how can you have so many feelings and recognitions? It's hard not to complain! ! !

At first glance, I feel that the background setting is very rich. I wonder if it draws on any existing information. It feels very comfortable to read as the world view is revealed bit by bit. I feel that the pace is quite gentle. I have already entered the main plot in Chapter 33.

The five-clawed dragon refers to five fingers, not five claws 😅😅😅

The author really believes in the world he created, so detailed and thoughtful, so true to his feelings, and so eloquent...

The labyrinth chapter is really shit. The three pig teammates did nothing. Not only did they drag the fight and couldn't help, they also stood on the moral high ground and pointed. In the end, they were able to share more than half of the loot. They didn't prepare anything, so they asked the protagonist for help, which also delayed the protagonist's research on spells. The protagonist is quite young, right? How come he has three fathers?

Maybe my brain is stored, but I really feel very healthy. I feel that the rhythm of adventuring and territory building, defending the city and farming is quite comfortable.

South's last two books made the same mistake, "resetting the story and undervaluing the story". They spent too much energy describing how magic works and how the elements move and form, and ignored the promotion of the storyline. The result is that it is interesting when adventuring and farming, but boring once you start learning and researching. I myself always turn the pages quickly when I read about the principles of magic, because I know it is fake, and there is no point in spending my energy to understand and memorize it carefully. If Soth can see it, I hope he can notice that he should write an interesting story instead of spending a lot of energy to create a logical, self-consistent, real and perfect world. Come on

After scrolling through the comment area, I felt that it was boring to reply one by one, so I just said what I wanted to say. I personally like the writing style and rhythm. This book really picks readers. Those who are dissatisfied in the comment section can go find some bad writing on the street. And taking a step back, the author has written a book for so long, and if he changes his writing style, it will be completely different.

Reading the book reviews, many people criticized this book, but I didn't plan to read it! However, after seeing that the author is Suosi, I still think this book is worth reading.

Among Soda's books, the first one I read was Magical Chronicles, followed by Twenty-Sided Dice and Magic Taxi, but I didn't finish them all until The Dwarf King. I felt that I had made a lot of progress and finished reading it (although it seemed to be unfinished). After that comes the Cybernecromancer, which is even better and is my fairy grass. I didn't expect that the new book Fake Dragon Eternal Life could improve (personal feeling). I read the latest chapter today. I'm not educated. I can only say it's so good.

I wish everyone good luck in 2026 🐉!

Suo Da, it's all over. It's really exciting and I don't want to give it to the readers. After the small team adventure was completed, the subsequent stories were far less exciting. As a reader, it's a bit boring.

In fact, the content is not bad, but what age are you guys? This paragraph is too juicy. Are you tired of reading it? 😵😵

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To put it bluntly, the earth and the protagonist are *not* equal. One is that the description of the earth seems a bit weak in order to forcefully fit *reality*, but it should not be so weak in connection with the previous books. Secondly, the protagonist is too powerful. Controlling time and space is equivalent to being able to control infinite mass and energy. What then? An individual who can easily crush the sun has to wait for a long time to apply for ID cards for his wife and children. He also has to think about it for a long time when sending home a few old friends.

I only wrote that all the other legendary mages died, but didn't tell me how they died? I don't think the legendary mage can be killed by ordinary gods, right? Can the Moon God deceive the Legend before he attacks the Creator God?