Mark the Year with Magic

，， However, my personal experience is limited and my opinions are for reference only. The story is exquisite and the characters are brilliant. Judging from the quality of the entire book, it is close to a high-quality product. However, I personally think there are some reasons that prevent this book from becoming a masterpiece.        —— For example, being wary of everything related to the goddess in the early stage, the death of the blue dragon in the middle stage, etc. Reading along the way, when I reached these points, I felt a strong sense of disharmony that made me break away from the book in an instant. Specifically, as a reader, I feel that there is at least another way to deal with things, but the protagonist does not choose and there is no reason. It's not that these plots are completely unreasonable, but the information that the author and I have is asymmetric. In the author's imagination, these things are reasonable and even should happen. But what was shown to me, at least the foreshadowing when these things happened, was far from enough. There was neither a straightforward explanation nor a steady stream of step-by-step advancement. When I was immersed in the world of the book, the author kicked me out. If I hadn't started reading it when I finished the book, I might have given up on it. This kind of damage cannot be cured in later chapters, especially if we have to wait for updates. You have laid the groundwork in front of me. After a beating and then revealing the reason, I will understand. This sudden realization will make me ignore other things. Instead, give me a severe beating first, let me guess the reason and then reveal it slowly, without even explaining it clearly. This will make me continue to deepen the memory of being beaten while thinking about it.        ——， In general, wherever the protagonist is, things happen. For example, when the protagonist is in hell, nothing worth mentioning seems to happen in the human world, and the same is true in the second world, and vice versa. When the magic empire was established, the goddess' kingdom was brushed aside and had no relevance, even though this character was so wonderful. The scenes are almost always changed when the protagonist is free, which is so leisurely.       ，， However, while reading, I am always forced to let go when my good feelings continue to accumulate. I sincerely hope that Suo Da's next book can overcome its shortcomings and write a masterpiece.

Soth feeds him poison every time he writes a chapter, and he wastes his time chasing it to chapter 215. Wait until you finish this book before continuing.

The production produced by Soth has maintained a consistent level and can be regarded as the benchmark for Western fantasy. Although it's a bit slow to warm up, and it's not what we call "refreshing" nowadays, it looks very comfortable. The logic is strict, the world view is well established and self-consistent. The writing is exquisite and the story progresses smoothly. If you like Western fantasy, it will be a big loss if you miss it. I hope everyone will support me and not let this book die like a white flag. Also, Sos, when are you going to make an update? I can reward you if you make an update.

I haven't seen such a comfortable Western Fantasy for a long time! Although I haven't read much Western fantasy, and I don't understand some of the plots and reference systems in the article, it is easy to understand the worldview and caster system. I think this is a reflection of the author's skill. A lot of Western fantasy has a certain reading threshold, such as DND, HP, Warcraft... Many authors draw on these systems that have a lot of mass base, and only focus on telling stories (many of them don't focus on telling stories, just for fun or yy). It's not bad, but I personally don't like it... This book shows that the author is deliberately trying to build a self-consistent spellcasting system, a complete world view, and on top of it, tell a complete story seriously, which is very suitable to my taste. I hope the author will continue to work hard to improve the story! Using rationality to analyze magic/immortality is a point that I like very much, but many authors can only use spring and autumn writing methods or forcefully lead them through. In fact, I personally feel that there is no need to be too rigid in using half-understood realistic scientific theories to show off, but to tell a story that "praises reason and logic" from a logical level (something like the one in the later stages of cultivating immortality is good). The magic system of this book makes it comfortable for engineering students to read without embarrassment. I look forward to the author slowly analyzing the causes of the male protagonist's time travel and the space cracks in hell! Or build a system like Xingyue (mainly referring to Demon Night and Sky Realm), but leave appropriate mysterious parts for readers to understand and deduce by themselves, and only hint at the author's thoughts in the text? Personally, I feel that some things don't necessarily need to be explained forcefully, just try to be as self-consistent as possible. Finally, let's talk about the story. I recently discovered that I have read the author's first two books. The first one was put on the bookshelf to gather dust after reading more than a dozen chapters... I only read a few chapters of the second one. I have to say that the author has made great progress in being "interesting" with this book! One of the problems that makes many Western fantasies unsatisfactory is that it is difficult to create a sense of the picture by trying to spread the world view all at once. The author started from a fortress and it was very comfortable to go step by step. The male protagonist's combat power did not expand too fast, which also made the world view more natural. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

It looks good so far, but it's a little awkward in some places, maybe because of my personal taste, but this book is really good, so I still recommend giving it a read.

Boss, where did you get the dough? 🤓🤓🤓 Can you bring me one?

The author writes very well, come on, I support you.

I, the monthly ticket, seek refinement!

Not bad. . . Not many paragraphs are skipped. Physical knowledge and magic knowledge are well connected, The world view structure, soul and other things are well written The characterization is very vivid

I have a feeling the goddess already knows about him. In fact, there is no rule that says devils cannot worship God. Last but not least, the development of electrical and scientific civilization does not weaken the goddess. On the other hand, it may strengthen the influence of the goddess. After all, electrons are everywhere. Vulcan doesn't stop people from making fires. Thor won't stop people from learning how to use electricity. Just two things are needed. Magnets and copper wire. As long as he praises the goddess, I think the goddess may support him. A common misconception is that creating electricity requires a high level of knowledge. That's a lie. At the most basic core. The usage of creating and using electricity comes down to two very simple devices. Generators and electric motors. Contrary to popular belief, electric motors are very simple to build. It uses the same principle as a generator. In fact, generators and electric motors are the same. Just slightly modified. A generator is mechanically the same as an electric motor but operates in the opposite direction, accepting mechanical energy (such as from flowing water) and converting that mechanical energy into electrical energy. The first electric motor and generator were built in 1820. It took only 50 years to build the first electric power plant. As stated before, the basic principles of generators and electric motors are very simple. The magnet is wrapped in a copper coil. Motors and generators go hand in hand because they are basically the same thing. The first power plants actually used hydroelectric power. 1Water provides the physical force that turns the generator and generates electricity. (Of course, you can also use things like gasoline, coal, and wind.) 2The electricity is then sent to electric motors, which are used to move mechanical gears. 3The mechanical gears then power whatever mechanical device they are connected to. (Of course, not every device needs a motor. Light bulbs, heaters, radios, etc.) A very simple process. Far from being high-tech, electric motors and generators are both classified as low-tech. None of them are difficult to make. What is classed as high tech are inventions that require the use of electricity and require the use of circuit boards. The circuit board is complex, not the motor or generator. None of this is esoteric knowledge. In fact, they teach you this in middle school and high school as well. If someone says it's difficult to generate electricity, don't believe them. They are either liars or idiots. Or both. Industrialization in the 18th century relied heavily on generators and electric motors. Without both of them, the modern world would look completely different. As long as he praises the goddess, I think the goddess may support him.

I don't understand why so many people complain about Soth's books. Soth's writing is concise and clean, the plot is brisk and powerful, the protagonist's image and emotions are full enough, and the scenes are clear and clear. Overall, it has a strong sense of script, few group portrait scenes, and fast-paced small scenes. In my opinion, these are all suitable for serial reading. Why do some people always insist on making complaints about them? Even if you don't like it, you can just abandon the book. What makes people insist on reading two pages of each book and then criticizing a few sentences. . .

Author, doesn't your conscience hurt?

The protagonist is the one who does everything for a ghost cat, and the protagonist is the one who casually lets a good dragon die unjustly. After reading most of the book, I don't think the protagonist, Madonna, is a bit smart, but he is indeed a bit smart. People in real life may be moody and moody like this, but the feelings and values ​​of the protagonist of a book should be traceable and coherent. Including the heroine Medusa, whom he fell in love with for no apparent reason, the author always lets himself go in strange places, which seriously affects the reader's sense of immersion.

At seven years old, you entered primary school. On the day you enter school, you are bullied by a fifth-grade child. You can't beat me, so I swore bitterly in my heart, thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river. Thirteen years old, you are at the peak of sixth grade. After years of martial arts training, you have the air of a naughty kid every time you breathe in and out. Like those fifth-grade kids, even three of them are no match for you. At this time, you meet the strong people in the junior high school level. Even the weakest junior high school strong people, their strength is by no means comparable to yours. And in this realm, you have enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy strips! So scary. So you make up your mind to enter the realm of junior high school. At the age of sixteen, you reach the realm of junior high school through years of study and hard work. You already look down on your classmates who are at the same level. The usually elusive high school realm is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, you discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the restrictions of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the test of the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal bodies and enter the university realm. Received blessings from higher education institutions. Those who fail to pass will lose this opportunity and become adults. In ancient times, some of them could also become the most powerful people and obtain the Great Way. But in the current world trend, where the vitality of heaven and earth is so thin, it is almost difficult. If you go with it, you will be ordinary, if you go against it, you will become an immortal. You must seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, you suddenly find that the people around you are all college students. At this time, your girlfriend of four years actually belongs to a huge family power. In their eyes, you without financial resources are like an ant. The family promised their girlfriend to a young master of a large family business. You were forced to leave your girlfriend temporarily. You just remember that Lihua Daiyu's girlfriend made a three-year contract with you. You recall the shame, the powerlessness, and the pain you experienced that day in elementary school. Your heart is roaring, roaring. The veins on my hands are bulging. When I return, I will stain the sky with demon blood! In order to become stronger in a short time, you chose the Internet. From then on, you enter a big company and get the guidance of a big boss. Even the time spent sitting on the toilet is used to study. As he continued to grow stronger, he discovered a shocking secret. From then on, he started his own business. I have encountered despair and encountered danger. From Beijing to Shanghai and then to Shenzhen, I have seen strong people working hard in the adult realm, gained life experience from the guidance of mysterious old men, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from university. They all become your strength to move forward. Three years later, everything was calm and peaceful, at the woman's home. At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's home. The mother-in-law's face changed slightly at the sound of the mount. Their family had been in business for many years, but in the end it was just a small branch of the family. She had seen Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, from afar, and she would never forget that voice in her life. But this sound is different. The father-in-law suddenly thought of something, his face suddenly turned pale and he started to tremble, this was impossible. How can you do it. Even if I try hard for half my life, I still can't resist it. To be continued!

The blue dragon died unjustly for no reason... I don't understand that since Fitch's soul has dissipated, the protagonist still insists on clinging to the body of his previous life and transforming into a sex demon? Since the goddess exists objectively and is willing to sacrifice herself to save the world, why is the protagonist unwilling to believe in her? Who says faith and self-effort are contradictory? Newton still believed in God. Could it be that his becoming the light of human civilization was not the result of his own efforts? So the only explanation is the arrogance of the time-travelers. Maybe the author thinks that deliberately increasing the difficulty is to create a strong character, but in my opinion, it is just a brain disease. Also, the author keeps saying that the protagonist is unwilling to degenerate into a devil, but you deceived and used close people and killed an innocent dragon. Isn't this a depraved act of the devil? ... In short, it is becoming more and more poisonous and unpleasant. Although I haven't finished my subscription yet, I still plan to give up. In addition, Marvel's intrusion seems abrupt and out of place, which is another big poisonous point. I suddenly remembered why I had subscribed to some of this author's previous books but was persuaded to quit halfway through. It was because this author was inconsistent, his creative brain was not clear enough, and he mixed poison and even feces from time to time. As one of the oldest authors who wrote DND, he is not at this level.

Arrogant. Pure arrogance. He really has no respect for the gods. He needs to be defeated. He's not even an Archmage, let alone a legendary one. Not even legendary mages would insult the gods in this way unless they were crazy. Has he forgotten what happened the last time he saw God? He couldn't resist anything. Gods are gods with a reason. First, they cannot be captured unless using very specific types of artifacts. The method used by the King of Hell is very specific and almost impossible to replicate. They also cannot be killed by mortals. They can only be killed by gods or powerful creatures with special artifacts. Killing or capturing a god requires extremely specific circumstances and methods. He does not have the ability to achieve this goal. Whether he worships the gods or not, he should still give them due respect. At some point, they don't even need to fight. They can eliminate you with just one idea. I think his devilish transformation affected him a lot in that regard. He's arrogant and he doesn't even realize it.

Many misunderstandings will be resolved safely as long as you explain them well. The goddess has recognized your identity and still insists on hiding everything. The devil's identity is like a time bomb. If you don't take care of it yourself, you just wait for enemies or accidents to detonate these time bombs, causing innocent people and teammates to die unjustly. It's really stupid.

Read dozens of chapters Why... Most fantasy novels nowadays like to use scientific things to explain magic. . . Use a computer to organize spells. Are you a technology mage (the dead UA in dnd 5e)? There are also these names and place name settings that are exactly the same as dnd. So is this dnd? But the theory of divine magic is too baffling. Then since the cat is called midnight. By the way, there are one, two, and three generations of the Magic Network Goddess... Midnight is only the third generation. In the end, the setting actually doesn't matter. Basically no dnd people read dnd online articles nowadays However, the most important problem is that the story is too flat. After reading dozens of chapters, I don't know what the main line is... Then there is also a problem with the writing style. The dialogue paragraphs are too long and too frequent, and most chapters are like this. Even if you save a cat, you have to talk a lot of nonsense, which really makes people not read too much**233 Anyway, I hope the author can improve it.

The first half of the book was okay, although the protagonist's insistence on being lawful and good made me feel a bit inconsistent. But in the second half, the more I read, the more uncomfortable it became, so I gave up... I felt bad that the goddess died. Even if Thunder White is still there, she is not the original goddess, let alone several other cheating fragments. In addition, the Vatican and the protagonist's father also inexplicably outwit the story. It can be said that part of it is naive and stubborn, and the other part is cunning and stubborn. It doesn't matter that the entire race of elves has been outwitted and solidified into a villain image. It turns out that the elf paladin, a supporting character that I really like, was also written to be inexplicably annoying and was kicked out of the harem. It's okay for the villain to be reduced to the protagonist's show-off, and he comes out to cause trouble from time to time. Wow, it's so annoying! I like Miss Elf Paladin! I feel that although the protagonist calls himself a devil, he has completely lost his adherence to order in the first half of the book. Well, it's not that he is not good, but he is a little uncomfortable with it. After all, there is nothing wrong with the starting point of destroying the second world in the name of protecting the third world, but it is unacceptable that most of the supporting characters related to the protagonist are kind-hearted and a bit stupid. Can you create a positive character with a higher IQ? Don't let the villain have a high IQ. If the positive character is reduced in intelligence, he can only be calculated (the protagonist is considered a villain... Although he keeps order)

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. Just like drinking boiled water, it feels a bit sweet at first, but after drinking too much, it loses the taste.

The cat is very poisonous, the would-be knight is very poisonous, his personality is very poisonous, the author Luo Ji is so poisonous that he ran away

Chasing, chasing, abandoning, this novel gave me the impression that the focus is on the setting of magic and the soul. This part is very enjoyable to read. But the plot is a bit not to my liking, such as the much-criticized death of the blue dragon, the inexplicable disappearance of Beni for a long time, the inexplicable appearance of Beni's fake father and his friends, and the disappearance of his brother caused by them. I hope these pitfalls can be filled in later articles.

Nowadays, most of the protagonists in Qidian are funny, and there are not many serious books to be found.

This book must still be about eunuchs, and there will be less than 400 chapters.

Something important I noticed is that you treat the elves as a single group rather than multifaceted individuals. Elf. It's just the name of their race. This does not describe their political leanings or which factions they align with. In fact, just because they all live on the island doesn't mean they are unified. They may not even belong to the same country. Take a look at Japan during the Warring States Period. Just because they share the same geographical coordinates doesn't mean they share the same mind and will. This is equivalent to saying that Japan and China are the same, or that the United States and Russia are the same. Elves it's just the name of their race, not their alignment or group. Likewise, you will never put everyone on earth into the same group and category. Elves should be treated the same, they are a multifaceted multifaceted faction. They have different political alliances and loyalties. Sometimes the two groups of elves come from completely different countries. In fact, this view itself is racist. It will ultimately lead to massive misunderstandings and problems between countries. For example, black people. If a black man in Nigeria shoots down a Chinese plane, we will retaliate against Nigeria. We will not retaliate against Ghana, nor will we retaliate against Liberia or Jamaica. That's because they have nothing to do with it. Otherwise, we're just targeting people because of their race. We'll put them all in the same category. We will view black people as our enemies instead of focusing on the specific countries that attack us. In fact, by repeatedly using the word elves, you strip away their individuality and focus only on their external characteristics. The focus should be on their loyalties, their political alliances and their country. After all, humans don't like to be called humans all the time. We would rather be called Chinese, Americans or British. We don't like racial profiling.

The book has been collected. Congratulations to the author for his getting better results! I also left a message to try to get some good luck. If any of you guys have a female channel vote that you haven't voted for yet, please vote for me. It would be a waste if you don't vote anyway. Thank you, little sister!

Blue Dragon Killing made me confused

I discovered that there was such a book on the bookshelf. I remember I discarded it when I saw the transformation.

The setting is messed up and the world collapses

It's really a daily routine. There is magic, but you rely on tools to defeat monsters. You have a territory. I thought I would upgrade the territory, but it turns out it's just a resurrection point. I have a pet, but it's really a pet with no combat effectiveness. I can't be a lord, I don't concentrate on studying magic, and I still have runes printed on my body. I just want to say, can I write it by adding so many labels? Mixed and messy