Planet Builder

The subject matter is quite good, the plot is average, and the content is too novice. It is not suitable for old bookworms. What I want to complain about is that the author wants to express that the Zerg crisis is coming soon, and it is necessary to go all out to prepare for war and launch various defense projects. The atmosphere is very tense and critical. But as for the protagonist, he makes videos, engages in live broadcasts, makes friends with girls, and shows off in various ways. Brother, this is a Zerg invasion. I mentioned earlier that bugs may also appear on other planets in the galaxy. Bugs on the earth are still evolving crazily. Is this a good photo? Why don't you just change the cheat code so that you need to show off in front of others to unlock the technology? Too many flaws

There's something wrong with the subject matter, buddy. People who like science fiction are more serious, such as me and many of my book friends. So, what we like is science fiction, not fantasy. It must be science and technology-themed fantasy that is well-founded. Dyson sphere is an unreasonable fantasy, not science fiction. Do you know the surface temperature of the sun? Do you know how far away it is to build a satellite that can obtain energy without being evaporated by radiation? Then you will find that even if all the material in the solar system is packed and dissolved, the total material will not be enough to orbit the satellite around the sun. All matter here includes the earth, the moon, Venus, Jupiter, etc., Including asteroids, etc., So matter. The basis of science fiction is that technology can be unrealized and rely on fantasy, but it cannot be made out of nothing. Where in the solar system can so much material create a Dyson sphere? Can it be science fiction if you create something out of nothing? Even if you create something out of nothing, have you ever considered the interaction between masses? How much mass does it have to go around the sun once without being sucked in by the sun's gravity? Will it break the existing balance of the solar system and in turn suck out the material on the surface of the sun? Can't figure it out? Does the moon know? It was captured by the earth and became a satellite of the earth, but the tides on the earth are also affected by the gravity of the moon. You finally know the rising tide of the Qiantang River, right? What would happen if there was a moon on the surface of the earth? Are you trying to say that a Dyson sphere doesn't need much mass, just like a solar panel? It's a pity that I calculated it based on this thickness. Otherwise, let alone orbiting the solar satellite for one week, it would be impossible to just lay it on the surface of the sun for one week! Don't think of the sun as a light bulb, okay? Can you search Baidu for information that you really don't know? Do you still plan to use Dyson spheres as a science fiction theme? Are you talking about science fiction? No, this is fantasy! I now seriously suspect that you are not a fan of science fiction and are writing fantasy under the guise of science fiction!

Not sure if the author has any scientific research experience. Anyway, as a scientific researcher, it was really awkward for me to read the first few chapters. Although I am not in the field of physics, once it comes to specific issues of nuclear energy, such as building a micro-nuclear reactor, it will immediately become very serious, because it involves a lot of safety facilities, confidentiality, etc., And it is definitely not something that a few professors can do together and say it can be done. Moreover, the miniaturization of nuclear fission reactors is still basically at a theoretical level. If a few professors who can propose highly practical miniaturized nuclear reactors do not consider stealing academic achievements, they should report it to the country immediately. Personally speaking, I don't think it's very enjoyable to watch anyway. Readers who don't have any requirements for details and just want to enjoy the novel may be more accepting of it.

I originally thought it was science fiction, but Chapter 58 showed me that it turned out to be fantasy More than a million parts were processed by more than a dozen machine tools in one hour. I don't even mention the size of the parts. Just assume that the parts are processed as soon as the knife touches them. Let's give the stroke half a meter. Do you know how fast the tool moves to the part to be processed? 13 Meters per second! More than 800 meters in one minute! 50,000 Meters per hour. If this is still processing with just one knife, you might as well just ask Xiao Yan to come over and refine it with the strange fire! Mechanical and electrical majors are really embarrassed to see this! Also, high-precision processing machine tools are not magnified a hundred times or a thousand times, but the number of zeros after the processing size. For example, when processing a 15 mm long part, the domestic error is currently 15.0001, And abroad it is 15.00001 Also, the fact that it only takes 5 to 10 minutes for a car to go from parts to finished car is based on the fact that all parts are finished products. Otherwise, how long will it take to paint your car body! In short, I feel a little drifting since 58, and the energy points have suddenly started to inflate. Are you anxious?

This is a mutated creature.

The author would like to make some comments: You are already the person in charge of a national-level project and you still start a video and become the host? It looks so embarrassing! !

I wanted to see the exhilarating feeling of developing technology, but as the author, you have to post videos of everything you do, and then you are shocked one way or the other. The exhilarating feeling of developing technology through your own efforts is not written at all. Moreover, the development of technology is too casual, just throwing out a stack of information.

Forget it if you post a live video for the first time. But if you build a maglev train or an air battery, you still post a video, and then the whole network doesn't believe it. Then you slap me in the face to prove it. Is this interesting? I don't understand the meaning of your video. Do you still want to be an Internet celebrity when building technology? What's the use of this? Come on, the author, you exaggerated the leaping research and development, and then the experts questioned it. It was already very embarrassing. But the author, you also developed a technology and forced to post a video. It was even more embarrassing. It made me die of embarrassment. I originally thought this was a hard science fiction article. But author, do you like to be an Internet celebrity so much? You have to post a video for everything you do.

After reading the comments section, most of them said that the author's settings and details were a bit poor. Science fiction can have unlimited fantasy, as long as the logic makes sense. Although I have not read this book, judging from the complaints in the comment section, this book is currently a mixed bag of good and bad. Can anyone actually say (without going against their will) how this book is? 🤔

To be honest, the author's knowledge and writing style are completely incapable of controlling interstellar wars and civilizational competitions. A hard science fiction book is turned into a turn-based game. Every time we fight, we find that the other side is stronger. Then the protagonist develops a weapon and equipment that is just right, and then wins the battle. Just like this, round after round, from the ball to the solar system, it is a dead routine. Just like this, with one weapon after another, the level of civilization is soaring. That's it? Also, I personally feel that the various weapons in the article are just average. The golden finger of the protagonist basically has no sense of existence. Except at the beginning, it is not mentioned later. Most of them give people a feeling of cramming. Time and time again, I feel tired. I hope the author will make a quick charge before writing this kind of book next time.