Planet Builder

Read the first chapter. The feeling it gives me is: indecision, quantum science. It is known that the so-called god-level civilization mentioned by the author is a civilization using quantum computers. Also known: China's quantum computer is called "Nine Chapters" Conclusion: China is at least a semi-god-level civilization. I can't stand it any longer, my brother is cute. 🤭

So that's why you raised the price?

The writing is relatively novice, and the plot always makes me feel like I'm back in elementary school, holding building blocks and a group of friends doing all kinds of dubbing. The descriptions in all aspects are relatively weak, and the sense of immersion is purely based on the second grade and imagination. This book is currently only suitable for a quick and brief overview of the plot. Because the description of the details is too, um... Perfunctory, the main thing you read is just an idea, and you can't dwell on why the characters are doing what they are doing, otherwise this embarrassing feeling will follow you for a few months, which is still relatively short. The more you read this kind of book, the more experience you will gain. There is one key point: writing novels with few details and different angles is very easy to get stuck and to become eunuchs. Because the content is a bit empty, this kind of novel itself relies on the rapid progress of the story to cover up these shortcomings. Once the readers have no new chapters to read, they will skip it... Therefore, this kind of novel is not long, and it can basically be completed in about four or five hundred chapters. But looking at the author's story framework, the future of this book is a bit uncertain. I think one day in the future the author may really want to go back in time and slap the person who came up with this framework. (By the way, I have also written this type of book. Typically, it is so enjoyable to write, but so many questions arise afterwards.)

This should follow the flow of a light novel. The rhythm is a little fast, but not abrupt. What can convey the tension is that the writing style is pure vernacular. . . Feeling, no feeling, no need to use your brain to see it. It is expected to be completed within 1.2 Million words.

I feel like this plot is a bit too good, but the plot has nothing to write home about 😁😁😁

Author, can you please stop treating us like this? Normally speaking, a chapter usually has 2,000 words or more, which is 8 or 7 actual chapters. Your two chapters originally only had 14 articles and now they are getting fewer and fewer. The chapter you just posted only has 13 articles. It is better to publish one chapter and one chapter separately. Actually, these are not important mainly because you have condensed the content of these two chapters into just a few sentences. Take the content of the chapter just now 1. The character in the previous chapter died, which leads to the content of this chapter 2. The protagonist believes that the Zerg have brain control technology 3. The protagonist decided to directly interrogate Experimental Subject No. 9, And the supporting character agreed and cooperated And it has not been written in one go. Every time, a small topic is continued with another small topic just after it ends. Take the just-concluded Zerg attack as an example. The author directly used 26 chapters (because these chapters are all x2) to talk about three Zerg attacks. In summary, there is a bit of a drag on the rhythm, and the writing is not too concise. Except for a little bit of water, I think there is no big problem.

The beginning of this book cannot be said to be very similar to the previous one, it can only be said to be exactly the same 🤫

How should I put it? Has the author never understood the Zerg? There is only one intelligent individual in the Zerg, and the others are all war machines. This is a bit boring for you.

1⃣️This is a good book. How do you define it? I personally think it is "fluent in writing, self-consistent in logic, and can produce emotional resonance." This book meets the above conditions; 2⃣️The biggest problem in this article is that the story mode is basically fixed. Readers (such as me) will be tired of reading later. The motivation for readers to continue reading is the emotional resonance of "national feelings", the overwhelming number of high-tech, and a small number of refreshing points. 3⃣️The author's writing skills are quite good and worthy of praise. Keep it first

This book has the potential to become a classic in the disaster science fiction genre. Come on and write well.

I saw an author writing about some of my favorite games, so I finally stayed up late to read them! The story begins with three golden chapters that you can read carefully. The world view described in it is quite grand. There are goals in the first major stage and small stages, and there are also opponents. The goals are clear and it is a good start! But the most important middle story is very disappointing😞. I originally wrote a long review, but in order not to be criticized, I deleted it! This live broadcast is really incomprehensible, and it is still live broadcast in the institute, which is unbelievable! Also, according to the description of the IQ of the characters in the story, my understanding is that there are no foreign countries in this world, there is only one country, China! Even if there are people outside, they cannot be a country, they can only be regarded as tribes! Come back and read it again when you have time. Come on, author!

The subject matter is quite good, the plot is average, and the content is too novice. It is not suitable for old bookworms. What I want to complain about is that the author wants to express that the Zerg crisis is coming soon, and it is necessary to go all out to prepare for war and launch various defense projects. The atmosphere is very tense and critical. But as for the protagonist, he makes videos, engages in live broadcasts, makes friends with girls, and shows off in various ways. Brother, this is a Zerg invasion. I mentioned earlier that bugs may also appear on other planets in the galaxy. Bugs on the earth are still evolving crazily. Is this a good photo? Why don't you just change the cheat code so that you need to show off in front of others to unlock the technology? Too many flaws

There's something wrong with the subject matter, buddy. People who like science fiction are more serious, such as me and many of my book friends. So, what we like is science fiction, not fantasy. It must be science and technology-themed fantasy that is well-founded. Dyson sphere is an unreasonable fantasy, not science fiction. Do you know the surface temperature of the sun? Do you know how far away it is to build a satellite that can obtain energy without being evaporated by radiation? Then you will find that even if all the material in the solar system is packed and dissolved, the total material will not be enough to orbit the satellite around the sun. All matter here includes the earth, the moon, Venus, Jupiter, etc., Including asteroids, etc., So matter. The basis of science fiction is that technology can be unrealized and rely on fantasy, but it cannot be made out of nothing. Where in the solar system can so much material create a Dyson sphere? Can it be science fiction if you create something out of nothing? Even if you create something out of nothing, have you ever considered the interaction between masses? How much mass does it have to go around the sun once without being sucked in by the sun's gravity? Will it break the existing balance of the solar system and in turn suck out the material on the surface of the sun? Can't figure it out? Does the moon know? It was captured by the earth and became a satellite of the earth, but the tides on the earth are also affected by the gravity of the moon. You finally know the rising tide of the Qiantang River, right? What would happen if there was a moon on the surface of the earth? Are you trying to say that a Dyson sphere doesn't need much mass, just like a solar panel? It's a pity that I calculated it based on this thickness. Otherwise, let alone orbiting the solar satellite for one week, it would be impossible to just lay it on the surface of the sun for one week! Don't think of the sun as a light bulb, okay? Can you search Baidu for information that you really don't know? Do you still plan to use Dyson spheres as a science fiction theme? Are you talking about science fiction? No, this is fantasy! I now seriously suspect that you are not a fan of science fiction and are writing fantasy under the guise of science fiction!

Not sure if the author has any scientific research experience. Anyway, as a scientific researcher, it was really awkward for me to read the first few chapters. Although I am not in the field of physics, once it comes to specific issues of nuclear energy, such as building a micro-nuclear reactor, it will immediately become very serious, because it involves a lot of safety facilities, confidentiality, etc., And it is definitely not something that a few professors can do together and say it can be done. Moreover, the miniaturization of nuclear fission reactors is still basically at a theoretical level. If a few professors who can propose highly practical miniaturized nuclear reactors do not consider stealing academic achievements, they should report it to the country immediately. Personally speaking, I don't think it's very enjoyable to watch anyway. Readers who don't have any requirements for details and just want to enjoy the novel may be more accepting of it.

I originally thought it was science fiction, but Chapter 58 showed me that it turned out to be fantasy More than a million parts were processed by more than a dozen machine tools in one hour. I don't even mention the size of the parts. Just assume that the parts are processed as soon as the knife touches them. Let's give the stroke half a meter. Do you know how fast the tool moves to the part to be processed? 13 Meters per second! More than 800 meters in one minute! 50,000 Meters per hour. If this is still processing with just one knife, you might as well just ask Xiao Yan to come over and refine it with the strange fire! Mechanical and electrical majors are really embarrassed to see this! Also, high-precision processing machine tools are not magnified a hundred times or a thousand times, but the number of zeros after the processing size. For example, when processing a 15 mm long part, the domestic error is currently 15.0001, And abroad it is 15.00001 Also, the fact that it only takes 5 to 10 minutes for a car to go from parts to finished car is based on the fact that all parts are finished products. Otherwise, how long will it take to paint your car body! In short, I feel a little drifting since 58, and the energy points have suddenly started to inflate. Are you anxious?

The author would like to make some comments: You are already the person in charge of a national-level project and you still start a video and become the host? It looks so embarrassing! !

This is a mutated creature.

Forget it if you post a live video for the first time. But if you build a maglev train or an air battery, you still post a video, and then the whole network doesn't believe it. Then you slap me in the face to prove it. Is this interesting? I don't understand the meaning of your video. Do you still want to be an Internet celebrity when building technology? What's the use of this? Come on, the author, you exaggerated the leaping research and development, and then the experts questioned it. It was already very embarrassing. But the author, you also developed a technology and forced to post a video. It was even more embarrassing. It made me die of embarrassment. I originally thought this was a hard science fiction article. But author, do you like to be an Internet celebrity so much? You have to post a video for everything you do.

I wanted to see the exhilarating feeling of developing technology, but as the author, you have to post videos of everything you do, and then you are shocked one way or the other. The exhilarating feeling of developing technology through your own efforts is not written at all. Moreover, the development of technology is too casual, just throwing out a stack of information.

After reading the comments section, most of them said that the author's settings and details were a bit poor. Science fiction can have unlimited fantasy, as long as the logic makes sense. Although I have not read this book, judging from the complaints in the comment section, this book is currently a mixed bag of good and bad. Can anyone actually say (without going against their will) how this book is? 🤔

To be honest, the author's knowledge and writing style are completely incapable of controlling interstellar wars and civilizational competitions. A hard science fiction book is turned into a turn-based game. Every time we fight, we find that the other side is stronger. Then the protagonist develops a weapon and equipment that is just right, and then wins the battle. Just like this, round after round, from the ball to the solar system, it is a dead routine. Just like this, with one weapon after another, the level of civilization is soaring. That's it? Also, I personally feel that the various weapons in the article are just average. The golden finger of the protagonist basically has no sense of existence. Except at the beginning, it is not mentioned later. Most of them give people a feeling of cramming. Time and time again, I feel tired. I hope the author will make a quick charge before writing this kind of book next time.

I haven't read the book yet, but I can't read the introduction. . How can anyone build a Dyson sphere in their own galaxy?😥

I have seen more than 130 pictures so far. About summarizing the results. The protagonist throws out a very powerful "noun" This is awesome! That's awesome over there! After a while The protagonist throws out a very powerful "noun" This is awesome That is awesome And so on.

Building a wall along the coastline is outrageous. How is this different from the Maginot Line? The Zerg will take a detour and land in the northeast from Siberia. Do you want it? I'm so stupid 😅

The setting of this book is quite good, but the author's narrative style is too monotonous. Unlocking new technologies -> The process of realizing the technology is passed through -> Press conference/live broadcast -> Everyone is shocked -> Unlocking new technologies... It keeps looping like this And the protagonist has not encountered any difficulties at all. As long as there is electricity, he can continue to produce black technology, which looks quite boring. It's not that I want to torture the owner, but I want to be a little bit of a challenge.

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I drop wisdom! So witty! Shennong is dead

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Introduction to the poisonous points: 1. Every time the protagonist introduces himself, he always carries a nickname suffix of a certain station. In the early stage, it was okay to gain popularity, but in the later stage, he is still a consul? Are you guilty of secondary school disease? 2. He has a sister, a house, two healthy parents in the country + his other half is a special soldier. These three descriptions have no effect on the plot. The number of words written is either too low or too embarrassing. 3. Military knowledge equals no knowledge. The author sees only nuclear bombs and only nuclear bombs. When we meet the Zerg in the beginning, the light firearms are useless, and the world's number one maritime armed force is written as if it is mentally retarded. There is no normal person in foreign countries who are wise and remote. The only normal one is a villain and a traitor. The article describes many times that the Zerg King can directly hit the hydrogen bomb and escape completely. I can only say that he is really military-blind. 4. The protagonist was born as a research talent and went to the front line many times to replace the battlefield commander, which once again proves that the author has no concept of military science at all. 5. The latest chapter of the aerospace aircraft carrier and giant mecha, the author himself has not thought about how to present the description in a turn-based manner. The aircraft carrier and the three-headed dragon are just one person to see who has the highest attack power and thickest blood. As for the giant mecha, this setting is very poisonous. If you have a little bit of technology and military knowledge, you will not write about giant mecha. Suggestions: No suggestions. Since you deleted all the suggestions in my original post, there is no need for me to give you any more suggestions. Summary: For readers who are hard science fiction, soft science fiction and serious military fans from Daily Guide, if you see my post, congratulations, you can avoid lightning. This is a science fiction-like fantasy novel.

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