Pioneer of Super Technology

Damn it, it turned out to be a fire cave 🤓

The director of the Space and Time Administration came to report

If I have this opportunity, I will definitely cooperate with the country to ensure safety and stability, and there will be a group of people to help me find a way. If I didn't talk about this nonsense earlier, wouldn't this be killing the goose that lays the goose that lays the egg?

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Don't the old technicians in the mechanical processing plant know what "test run" is? ? ? I guess the author doesn't understand what "test drive" is. The scammer will definitely say that I'm showy, and I'm not in a 4S shop, so I'm trying out a car! ! ! 😁 All machine tools at home and abroad are installed by the manufacturers. Before installation, we will give you a planning drawing to design the factory or site as required! ! ! Their manufacturer is responsible for installation and commissioning after accepting the site. This is generally called "testing"! ! ! The veteran technician knows nothing? ? ? "It's a mule or a horse that comes out for a ride" is the old technician's saying. They don't "criticize" without knowing anything Because of the nature of their work, they are relatively calm and composed Besides, the more precise the lathe, the more troublesome it is to install it. Did you know that "horizontal gyroscopes and dynamic balance" are installed in advanced lathes? ? ? Have you measured the most basic ground flatness and horizontal line difference? ? ? Do you know how many threads should be turned on which screw is more precise? ? ? It's not like you think it can run just by putting it on the ground! ! ! Because of a slight error that is even thinner than a hair It will lead to "machine destruction and human death"! ! ! During my internship after graduation, I was criticized by senior technicians because I took the initiative to clean the milling machine! ! ! That's still a 90-year-old manual machine tool! ! ! The veteran technician did the calibration again! ! ! You can write that the old technicians don't understand how to operate the new machine tools (it's normal not to know, but it's abnormal if they understand) You cannot operate a machine tool with a blind eye. If you are not careful, the machine will be destroyed and you will be killed. Veteran technicians have been cautious all their lives and will never make such a mistake If you understand, you understand. If you don't understand and pretend to understand, you will have a lot of troubles. (If you understand even nine points, you don't understand. If you have a very good grasp, you still need to be guided by an experienced person.) Moreover, the machine tool test does not only succeed once or twice, it also takes more than six hours of idling on standby! ! ! And in order to analyze the parameters, we need to find a few more different materials and make a few worthless things to try! ! ! The protagonist doesn't care about the lathe, but also worries about casualties, right? ? ? Only with a deeper understanding will such a slap-in-the-face plot become more enjoyable! ! !

Author, you should focus on describing technology rather than selling products! Not paying attention to technology in reality is just like India – it's hilarious! The novel is always about making money, but that is not science fiction at all, but a second-rate dealer!

I feel like something is missing. The author actually doesn't need to go out of his way to vilify the villain. The last few chapters have fallen into embarrassing pretentiousness (such as the male lead pursuing the female lead, and the latest chapter mocking the male lead)... It's not that you can't write, but you have to have new ideas. Old readers can see this embarrassing routine at a glance, and the villain has a low IQ, so he is at a disadvantage. If the author doesn't know much about these intrigues, he can let the villain try an honest method, such as open competition. The opponent funds another crew and puts all his efforts into the rivalry to create a villain who is both an enemy and a friend, and can be shaped for a long time. Even if the character image is incomplete now, as long as there is one characteristic point, the subsequent image can be added later. This is far more popular than setting up a low-minded villain who only appears in a few chapters and can easily guess the routine when necessary. Most old readers pay more attention to the creation of characters when reading novels. In many cases, they can keep reading for a certain character. (For example, the Empress of Zhetian only has one sentence when she appears: Not to become an immortal, just to wait for your return. This sentence shapes the characteristics of a character. Many people have no idea what kind of character or appearance this person is, but they are still obsessed with this character. With Chen Dong's description in the following chapters, this character will be fleshed out little by little.) You can draw many characters from reality, such as using a certain Lei, a certain Yu, a certain poor of o Founder... I talk a little too much. I just looked at the author's Qidian homepage and found that I have added some superfluous things. I wanted to delete it but it took me half an hour to write it. Let's just treat it as the nagging of an old reader. I hope the author doesn't mind. Many of the words are very nagging. These are the personal experience of old readers and the resentment of old readers. There are fewer and fewer good articles, and there are more and more idiotic villains. I am not afraid of using old routines, but I am afraid that there are no new ideas. Finally, I wish the author good health. For you, your health is more important than anything else.

Writing a book must be based on reality and have some logic. In reality, if you have a black technology, who would you tell it to? ? When you don't have 100% ability to protect yourself, do you go back and tell others? I guess you even want to hide it from your own parents, so why don't you tell your seniors? ? ? A ruler who is not secret will lose his ministers, a minister who is not secret will lose himself. Failure to keep a few things secret will cause harm. In society, if you do this, you will not survive 3 episodes.

Hello author, I think you should reduce some of the pretentious and slap-in-the-face routines, because I noticed that there are a lot of pretentious and slap-in-the-face routines in several of your works. There are so many forced slaps in the face that make people feel a little uncomfortable. Of course, this is just my personal and humble opinion, and I hope you can continue to write high-quality works.

If you can't afford to play, don't play. If you can't write well, don't write. Eunuch books that deceive people's feelings will end their descendants!