Starting from the Ancestors of Montenegro

Refining

As for the old demon from Montenegro, he is still as domineering as the one written by Meng Ruishenji back then.

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The coffin took away Shennong's relics, but Mr. Yuan passed away today. Three meals a day, filled with the fragrance of rice, those who are full should always remember Mr. Yuan.

There is no story in this book other than cultivation and enlightenment. For tens of thousands of years, the old devil's life was simple and boring, filled with emptiness from the outside to the inside. Since Su Chen's soul traveled through the old demon, his life has become extremely gloomy. He has a dark personality and a selfish demonic nature. He has no friends, no women, and no disciples. The sect is also a cross-section, and the two apprentices are also used to make use of it. The several forces he founded are also sneaky and shady... Such a demon life is far worse than the glory of Qing Emperor. The Qing Emperor is majestic, the lord of heaven, and has overwhelming power. Compared with the old demon who can only curse and sneak attack behind him, the two are incomparable. Starting from the old demon and ending with the old demon, there is no reversal, no ups and downs, the demonic nature remains the same. Becoming a Taoist, transcending the universe, is just a passerby. Live your whole life, live your whole life. The remaining 20 chapters end the book, which is basically a waste. Not to mention the fight between the old demon and the Qing Emperor and Ksitigarbha, Xiaoxue, Xiaoqian, Mirage Demon, 10 people from the Underworld, Black Dragon, Ao Qing, Yang Jian, Sun Houhou, Yan Fei, Gu, Shushan, Kunlun, Yaochi, the Demon Sect, the Pure Land of Samsara, the Black Sky Demon Land, Tang Sanzang, Demon Guanyin, etc., There will not be any independent stories! Unfortunately, I can only say that the book of 500 is still as anticlimactic as ever!

The author still has some writing skills, but the books he writes are really getting worse. Other authors don't say they are getting better and better, at least they can rest on their laurels, but Zhongyuan Five Hundred's book is the only one I feel is okay. All the ink in his stomach was emptied by Taoist Master Qingxuan, and from then on, there were many innocent moans and groans. I just hope the author can save a little more ink and start a new book.

After entering the world of Buddha corpses, forcing the gods, and the Three Pure Ones, it felt a little boring. Later, when the ancient world came out, he was enlightening and preaching every day, and he no longer had the taste of the old devil before.

I remember that there was a copy of Black Mountain Patriarch before, but it was greatly revised and then disappeared. Was it written by you?

Why do so many people criticize the author? This book is both excellent in terms of text and plot. And many of the comments are just looking for trouble.

Is it reasonable for these fairy worlds to have no progress in productivity after tens of millions of years? Is it realistic to blindly worship ancient times when it comes to the power levels of exercises? This is the point I have been thinking about after watching Xianxia for so many years. I hope this book can avoid these and write new ideas.

I used to watch pirated versions of it all the time because I didn't have money. I watched it many times. Now that I'm an adult, I'm dedicating all of it to my youth 🤝

Don't take the saint route, take the demon route. The ancestor of Montenegro is a demon. Without the character, you might as well travel through time and become a Buddha.

The plot moves forward too fast and is boring! But the biggest highlight is that the author doesn't mix it with water! With only 630,000 words, it feels more substantial than reading other novels with 1.63 Million words.

He wrote the same thing as someone else, and the rest is that annoying cultivation mode, where chaos turns into a starry sky, and the world turns into a planet. It's low-level, and it doesn't have the feeling and artistic conception of Five Hundred anymore.

Your fighting power has collapsed! The old demon has not yet achieved Taiyi, but he can defeat Xuannv who is almost at the level of Taojun. There is still Taiyi in the middle. Logically speaking, the higher the level, the less likely it is to surpass the level. After reaching the Seventh Heaven of Gods and Demons, one can achieve Taiyi, but the Ninth Heaven only accumulates strength and does not achieve Taiyi. However, the protagonist can press Taiyi to the ground and hammer him. What difference does this realm make? There is no bottleneck in the realm of the protagonist, and the fighting is too weak, with things like annihilation and so on. The realm is too empty!

A monthly pass, fully booked, hope to add more details 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Beauty

The front looks good... The back feels different... The front feels restrained and a bit depressing and looks good... The back just falls into the cliche.

It turned out to be written by Zhong Wubai. . .

Today's two are doubled to four, please refine! 🥺🥺🥺🥺

Finish it quickly, I won't read Wubai's books anymore, they are too rubbish, and the remaining sincerity of fans has been consumed by you! In the second part of the book, if you change the IP, you will always start from scratch and you will never be successful!

I always looked at him as an old monster from Montenegro, starting with

I said the writing style was so skillful that it didn't look like a newcomer. After reading the comments, I found out that it was an old author named Zhongyuan Wubai.

You can do five hundred. Every book after Qingxuan is good in the early stage, but it's just that you can't stand it later 😭😭

Although there are various opinions in the comment area, whether it is a bad ending or not, I really think it is very good and I really like this book and this story.

Isn't it, this can be sustained to death? ! The plot rhythm in the early and middle stages is pretty good, with a lot of foreshadowing, and there should be a lot of content to write about.

To be honest, I feel that the writing on stability is good; But gradually, I have the illusion of being dull and unchangeable; For example, the life of "people": In life, most of it is dull, and it does need surprises; In career, "success" and "accident" are intertwined, with more of one side and less of the other. The same is true for authors writing books. It is important for the protagonist to be "stable", but there should also be some surprises that should be written in a suitable way. Add a ripple to the "book", and at the same time set off huge waves in the readers' hearts.

With this kind of thinking, this writing style, and this layout, it would be a pity not to publish a new book.

Two monthly tickets today are doubled by four, and they will be the same tomorrow! Please improve! 🥺🥺🥺

Only when I saw the recommendation letter did I know it was five hundred.