I Establish an Immortal Dynasty in the Mortal World

Hey, hey, isn't this Dabai, the famous man in the palace (trying to be yin and yang)

I haven't read the novel, I just briefly glanced at the table of contents. I'm just curious about some of my personal thoughts, so I made a post to complain about it. In the past, novels about cultivating immortals rarely wrote about physics, and most of them only wrote about cultivating immortals. If someone said, "Author, why don't you write about physics, travel back in time and invent gunpowder or something?" 9 Out of 10 people would say that he is mentally ill, and it is quite funny to find science in the world of cultivating immortals. In fact, mortals who are not cultivators also breathe oxygen and are affected by gravity. This is also part of science. The situation is much better now, and everyone's tolerance and acceptance have improved a lot. But the author seems to be writing about cultivating immortality while developing technology. This is like carrying out the industrial revolution while simultaneously expanding the system of cultivating immortals. The former makes up for the problems in traditional immortality novels about the productivity and living standards of the bottom people, while the latter continues to maintain a major feature of immortality novels. If both aspects develop simultaneously, it has to be said that the oppression of the people at the bottom may be doubled, and of course the development of national strength will also be doubled. I read the "Third Lingshi Financial Crisis" in the "Galaxy Colonization Manual" and learned about the Matthew Effect. In fairy tales about cultivating immortals, if personal power is too high, it can easily lead to the failure of the society of cultivating immortals to exist stably for a long time. Just like the gap between the rich and the poor is too large, the gap between individual cultivators is even several times greater. And with the acceleration of traditional technologies such as steam engines, immortal capitalists should also appear. If I had to think about it, I think it would be easy to highlight the internal conflicts within the country. The author seems to be planning to write about a long-lasting and immortal dynasty. In this way, after a certain stage of development, the monopoly class appears, and class solidification becomes more serious. The contradictions between the working people at the bottom and the rich at the top, and the contradictions between those who are cultivators and those who cannot be cultivators, will continue to accumulate, and society may have problems. In the past, the change of dynasties in ancient times cannot be said to be entirely due to the emperor's stupidity. There were also cases where land was annexed to a certain extent and could no longer be maintained, and everyone disrupted the intention of redistribution. Having said all that, I personally want to write something more essential. Since the novels about cultivating immortals all use steam engines, which is the first step that people would criticize in the past, I think it will be more unique to write about the current situation of different levels of national development. After all, very few people will mention the aspect of social structure in novels about cultivating immortals. It is difficult to write about the economic base, but it is OK to write about the superstructure. , Morality, religion, law, literature, for example, if the currency of cultivating immortals is not spiritual stones but paper money (this is related to the novel I mentioned earlier), will there be a factory owner of cultivating immortals? Even if the writing is not good and immature, it is still an attempt, which means that when writing, the things to think about are not only upgrading magic weapons and supernatural powers, which are the signs of all novels about cultivating immortals, but also things that can be called rising to philosophy. Nowadays, there should be very few people who are still struggling with what the worldview of cultivating immortals is. They used to think about how to upgrade and how to make it reasonable. Now that they have seen so much, it should be reasonable. Nowadays, the level of education has generally improved, and the level of people who read books has also improved. Sometimes when you read novels about cultivating immortals, you will think about the difference between the society of cultivating immortals and the real society. Especially when you become a proletariat and are exploited, you will feel the characteristics of social class. Therefore, I personally think that describing a reasonable, realistic, and detailed social structure of cultivating immortals is very selling, even if it is forcibly maintained by the protagonist alone, that is still okay. Personal advice, don't spray if you don't like it.

You are still not satisfied with the high-quality products on the shelves. Many great masters have not achieved this result. What result do you want? What's more, if I recommend you later, this book will surely reach 10,000 orders if it reaches a million words, so what else can you do?

It looks pretty good so far. First of all, my views on steam locomotives. Excluding industrialized production, if it is purely handmade, I think it is possible. You can search for drawings online and take a closer look. It is not impossible to simply build it without asking for horsepower or advancement. I will tell you the truth about coal. It was discovered in the Western Han Dynasty. If you don't believe me, Baidu, Marco Polo even marveled at it and called it a black stone. As for the smelting of iron ore, we don't need special alloys. Steel has been around since 500 BC. Don't believe Baidu. Sometimes we just lack an idea, which is very important. Some expectations for the future. I think that since it is a technology tree under Chinese culture, screws and the like can be used without screws. I hope the author can use his imagination, such as mortise and tenon structure, to make more use of the thermal characteristics of materials. As for immortals, they can also be combined with today's chemical system to become a more systematic and scientific way of cultivating immortals. For example, electrical stimulation exercise method, spiritual root medicine, test tube cultivation of fairy seeds, analyze the ingredients and cultivation principles. In terms of agriculture, hybrid rice is not impossible. In the past, the Soviet Union took a detour and went directly to hybrid breeding. There was no such concept of breeding before. Nowadays, high school students know that this is mainly time cost, so you can give it a try. As for chemical fertilizers, they were initially used in the pre-Qin Dynasty. Now the so-called chemical fertilizers refer to the chemical fertilizer industry. It seems to have been popular in the 19th century. I don't know much about it, but don't mention chemical fertilizers anymore. The sewer system existed in the Ming Dynasty, and this can be explored. As for the others. What kind of physics in another world is useless? I can only say that you are a nt. If these are useless, why don't you just say that the protagonist is a ball of light and lives in a world with only light? Isn't this more reasonable? Since plants grow out of the soil, you have to drink water and eat, you can see things, hear things, and your heart and head will be damaged, so it must be consistent with certain common sense of people who live in real life, but some special points are different, do you understand? For example, there is something more in the air instead of something less, or one thing turns into another thing instead of a lack of something. I don't know much. The above are all superficial opinions. Please forgive me if I am wrong.

To be able to write a fantasy novel into a farming novel... The author is so powerful! 😁 Come on!

Based on Lin Zhibai's idea of ​​planting inner energy seeds for others and harvesting inner energy in the coming year to strengthen himself, I suddenly had some ideas about the Immortal Dynasty. The first stage Cultivation, ordinary martial arts is polished at the physical level, cultivating inner energy and strengthening the body. And human beings have limits, limited by lifespan and talent, and there is no way for human beings to become stronger without limit. Therefore, with the method of inner energy seeds, one person among ten thousand people can achieve enlightenment and reach a higher level. New changes may take one or several leaps to appear. This new change lies in the transformation of the inner Qi. During this change process, after the inner Qi is strong enough to a certain level, the physical body can no longer bear it, so the inner Qi will feed back the physical body at this stage. The physical body is strengthened and the internal Qi capacity is increased. The two form a spiral upward logic. After reaching a limit. Bang! Transformation! was born! Inner Qi shows a new attitude, it has stronger abilities. It has stronger toughness and is not easily consumed, so it can fight for a long time without eating for a long time; it has stronger recovery ability, so after being injured, it can be the same as before in the blink of an eye; it can even be condensed outside the body for a long time, so a strong person at this level can condense weapons outside the body to fight against the enemy. And human beings have also achieved their dream of flying through this level of inner energy! So the inner energy has many new names, true energy, spiritual power, Gangqi... After ten thousand people transform and one person transforms, the true energy appears, and this person will sprinkle the seeds of the true energy. The gentle and weak seeds can be tolerated by humans at the inner energy level. At the same time, the inner energy in the human body will slowly be infected with the characteristics of the true energy, strengthening the body until a new strong person is born. The second stage With the emergence of true energy, the first limit of human beings can be broken, and civilization continues to develop. As time goes by, people at this time have become like the fantasy of Qi practitioners in ancient times. Their skin is like ice and snow, they do not eat grains, inhale the wind and drink dew, ride on the clouds, control the wind dragon, and swim all over the world. But at this time, people suddenly discovered that the second limit of mankind has appeared. Soul! When practicing the true essence and the body, they often strengthen the soul together. However, compared to the tangible and visible true essence and the body, the soul is too ethereal, so its strengthening is far behind the pace of the true essence and the body. The disadvantages of this unbalanced development finally appeared one day. A powerful man practiced too fast and his soul could no longer control his body. He stubbornly believed that as long as he compressed his true energy to the limit like the first limit, a new transformation would occur. It's a pity that he was wrong. The limit this time is not the true essence, but the soul. So he became a brilliant firework in the night sky, turning into a spiritual energy stream that sprayed the world. Some later generations called this vision "Emperor Ooze!" When the rest saw it, they were frightened and stopped practicing one after another, until someone came up with the concept of the second human limit. The problem of the soul is put on the table. Many powerful people studied it in depth, and finally, the seed plan was restarted, but this time it was not the inner energy but the soul that was planted. Unlike inner energy seeds, the method of soul seeds is more dangerous and more domineering and cruel. The strongest ones divide their souls. The division of the soul is different from the internal energy. The inner energy circulates back and forth, endlessly, but the recovery of the soul is too slow due to the lack of methods. One soul division represents a period of weakness, so the strongest ones dare not easily divide their souls too many times. The most powerful people choose the successors of their soul seeds in this world, and after dropping the soul seeds, they wait for the next harvest. But this time we still encountered a problem. The reason why the inner energy seeds can continue in the host is because the same inner energy method operates. However, the soul seeds are rootless water. They have disappeared in more than ten years, and the transformation of the host cannot meet the standards and cannot be recycled. At this time, the strongest men were divided into two groups. One group throws soul seeds into unborn fetuses. Because they are blank, they are easy to color. When they die, they will return to themselves and be unified. There were so many people who practiced this method that there were many "reincarnated immortals" in the world. The other faction, they are a group of extreme strong men who are not willing to spend this long time waiting. They create cults, preach, find believers, and establish dogma, which is extreme and harsh. Believers search for the Sons and Saints for them, train them, and guide them with strict canon rules, so that they have various souls such as joy, anger, sorrow, and joy. When they are sixteen years old, they undergo the so-called baptism, which is the planting of the soul seeds. After a year, they take them back. However, the Sons and Saints are just shells that are abandoned at will, losing their value and turning into dementia. The soul slowly becomes stronger, human cultivation is finally comprehensive, and a new era begins. At this stage, the soul can be cultivated, and the powerful soul is understood again, creating a soul cultivation method, but this method cannot be as fast as reincarnation and devouring. The soul is also divided into several stages, from the out-of-body experience where the soul can appear in the world to the soul, which can change the world just like the physical body. The path of cultivation has been initially completed. At this time, the cultivation world was also divided into two factions due to differences in ideas. The peaceful sect advocates self-cultivation and the method of reincarnating immortals; the pacifist sect who establishes a cult and brutally strips away the will and life of others. One is called a fairy, the other is called a demon.

I got a recommendation for a high-quality product. You can tell me that my grades are too bad. I don't want to write anymore. This line of work is not suitable for you. Give up, brother.

Such a good book didn't make the list because the author was too lazy! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I just read the introduction, and asked out of curiosity, In the Immortal Dynasty on earth, everyone lives forever, It directly breaks the law of reincarnation, and the population will continue to grow endlessly What will happen when the population exceeds the land and resources in the end? Will God play a bad role every once in a while and send down divine punishment?

Can we arrange for a few ascendants? Describe the scene of the Immortal Dynasty through their perspective.