My Savage Ancestor

The author said it was based on The Witch, but the Witch has begun to fight devils since Chapter 800, and the pattern is global. But this one is still in Huali Peak, and even the Valley of Ten Thousand Beasts can't shake a pig's trotters. Not to mention other sects and dynasties. The relationship between the pig's feet and the heroine is even more strange. The title of the book directly mentions the heroine. Chapter 800 shows the relationship between the hero and the ancestor, which is still like that of an emperor and a slave. I feel like the author wanted to write about everything, but only half of it was written. There is no description of farming, the group portraits are only a few people and the insertions are quite abrupt, and the emotional scenes with the ancestors are always far away. It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

More than 150 years ago, I wrote about a disciple who I brought up like this. What else can I read later? If you stop naturally, the protagonist will take first place, but if you don't stop naturally, the sword will be gone. You let the ancestor choose and see what she chooses

It's very strange how the author has set up this world. Moreover, the sect of Wanshou is so engaged in internal fighting to the death that it is not allowed to be transcribed. Those who make things difficult for the ancestors can still live well without a large-scale sect fighting to the death. It is simply a trap, isn't it? As for the description of Yan Ziran, someone who works so hard to die, who doesn't hesitate to dig up the foundation of his own sect, can still live such a happy life, is also a scorpion poison. Are you sure your ancestor is really expanding the sect and is not a little girl playing house? ? And the book you wrote, what exactly do you want to express, that there is no order in cultivation? You can bully your master and destroy your ancestors, you can ignore the precepts, and there is no punishment, so what do you want the sect to do? Raising two or five children? And the setting is also funny. Only the disciples are allowed to show off to the elders, and the elders are not allowed to light fires. I know you want to highlight the protagonist's awesomeness, but it's better not to be so childish. . . . .

First of all, if I knew that my ancestor could detect everything here, would he still send people out to kill people? This is not exposing oneself in front of the ancestors to recruit people privately. And the author just happened to write that the ancestor discovered a soldier. Naturally, it is not the most popular one. MLM, MLM, why is it called MLM. He can make people get ahead, but he can't get things done. Could it be that the few crooked melons and cracked jujubes we found can really flourish? This is the protagonist. The author definitely has never started a business, so you can talk about your ideals and draw pictures. In addition, the author's writing is really not very good. Conflict breaks out, but I have seen that nature will end up either apologizing or dying tragically in the end

As soon as I read the introduction statement and was about to click in, I saw the information about the two heroines below😓... I immediately lost motivation.

After reading dozens of chapters, I just wanted to know the title of the novel, "When will my barbaric ancestor appear??"

After reading a hundred chapters, let me tell you. There are quite a few questions. First, Ah Meow, even though it and Pig's Foot killed Iron Bell together, Ah Meow saved the male protagonist, and then Pig's Foot ignored the past grievances? Have you forgotten that it wants to play with pig's feet again and again? The iron bell was also attracted by it, right? Second, Yin Tiecheng, the author wanted to portray him as a scheming person, but he teamed up with outsiders to kill his own Gao Xiu without even getting any reward. What confidence did he have in letting the Zhao and Li families pay him afterwards? Of course, there are also exciting plots, including the Okurayama gambling game and the subsequent hype, as well as the drinking game in the restaurant.

After reading it, let me talk about the shortcomings of this book. I think the biggest shortcoming of this book lies in the failure of characterization, especially two people, Hua Yunshang and Yan Ziran. First of all, let's talk about flowers. The female protagonist in this book has been selected, but she has too few appearances. The current 666 chapters are not too short, not even as good as Qiuxiang. Of course, we can say that this book is still long and there is no rush. Next, let's talk about Hua's character. What the author wants to express at the moment is that Hua is a character who is dedicated to cultivation, somewhat dissonant with the world, but also smart, with a bit of a womanly temper. So Huali Feng is in such a mess, does she know? She didn't know? As soon as Yin Qin's buttocks popped up, she knew he had pooped and peed. Does she know? The Yan who has been with her since she was a child is naturally rotten to the core. Why doesn't she know? As for the house near Hantan, you brought a group of people with you to this miserable place to conquer the world. You promised to give others a good location and a good house. Now that you have become rich, you have turned your back and refused to recognize the person and have to take it back. What kind of behavior is this? As a leader, he cannot benefit his subordinates, cannot lead his subordinates to conquer the world, and in the end he breaks his promise. To put it bluntly, it's a bitch. Let's talk again

Flaws do not hide the virtues! There are some slightly abrupt plots due to insufficient foreshadowing, and the characterization of the group portraits is not very clear, but there are few bad routines without bad jokes! The progression of the plot is also quite attractive, much better than what some so-called masters have written. (The master who can't help but complain about a lot of bad jokes and bad routines to gain data)

I stopped updating it a few times, but never gave up. I hope the author can be as diligent and diligent as the protagonist.

I have been reading novels for more than ten years and have only spoken out two or three times. This speech was really heartbreaking and unpleasant to read. I have been reading this book for a week. To be honest, there are very few fairy tale books that I can read for a week without giving up. Personally, I think the author's writing skills are not lacking, and the characters and plots are excellent, but the description of the environment and background is really cumbersome and cumbersome. Take Chapter 651, which only introduces the location of a subsequent event. People like me who read continuously feel tired, let alone those who follow updates every day. How do you feel after waiting for a day to see updates? There is no character portrayal, no plot advancement, only environmental descriptions? If this place is very important and is an indispensable corner of the author's grand world, and it really takes such a long time to describe it, I would also suggest that the plot of a supporting character or a minor character can be used to indirectly lead to the description. After all, the order of the three elements of a novel is character, plot, and environment. I don't want to directly use the word "water" to describe this chapter, because it can be seen that the author also describes this paragraph very carefully, but the feeling given to the reader is just two words - heartbroken! In the next chapter, the author responded that it was Kavin, but for me, it was better to write Kavin's request for leave than this! As a VIP reader who has subscribed to all chapters and voted for the book before seeing any updates, I think I am still qualified to complain a word or two, right? I don't mean anything else, I just hope that the author can write better and better, and become a great person who I can subscribe to every book he writes. I think you have this potential. This is the first time I have written so much text online. I hope the author can read it.

As long as it looks good, that's it

They say the author abuses the protagonist, but I didn't feel abused even after reading Chapter 150! Is it better to have smooth sailing all the time? If you don't have any hardships to be the protagonist, do you think you'll be slapped in the face by pretending to be 13 all the time? Personally, I feel that the only problem with this book is the title - My Savage Ancestor! If you like to watch pretending to be 13 and being slapped in the face, come and take a look. The protagonist has been bullied and hasn't killed the whole family. He doesn't have the pleasure of killing the whole family with a glare. Yunyun's thoughts are unclear! (The protagonist just can't bear the slightest bit of grievance) And when I saw the title of your book, I thought it was about picking up girls and pretending to be a slap in the face, and I didn't even have the desire to click on it! If it weren't for my friend Amway, I wouldn't have clicked in! This book is well-written but not popular, but it's because it's not in the right words. Those who read the book can't stand the abusive author, and most others were dissuaded by the name!

Originally, it was going to be free for a few days, but I decided to read the whole book before it was free. As for the feeling after reading it, first of all, make sure that this book is really worth reading. Otherwise, as a bookworm with more than ten years of reading experience, I would not read it in one go. Secondly, many things that could be briefly mentioned are described by the author in too detail and depth, resulting in the slow progress of the plot and the suspicion of hydrology. Finally, the layout is too big, and with the author's writing skills, the book may end at the end. I hope I am just unfounded. Congratulations to the author Wen Qi.

I relied on this book during the rectification period of Qidian. I read it in one sitting, otherwise I would not have read farming articles. There were some nonsense words during the period that really made me lose interest, but considering the author, I have nothing to say. But I still have to praise the author. The beginning is very good, the characters are well-written, and the plot is not bad. I can't say it is too good, but it can be seen that the author has a good idea and has conceived it well. The little witty words he wrote also make people smile, and the characters' IQs are also on the basic line... Having said so much, I also encourage the author. Of course, it is impossible to reward, and it is impossible in this life 😂😂😂

It's a pity that this author is not popular. The first book of all authors at Qidian is generally a hit. The second book of a good author is almost a masterpiece, and the third book can become a god. But none of these great masters interrupt updates for no reason, and none of them update unstablely. Only with stable updates can you become a great person. Rainbow's book will never gain popularity. When he writes his next book, he starts over again.

A romance novel cloaked in fantasy, if you don't agree with your views, leave!

Alas, I originally wanted to know how Yun Shang would reward diligence after Min Yueru's death, but I didn't expect... I started pursuing this book in my freshman year of 2018. I studied clinical medicine. After a tiring day every day, I would read the updated chapters before going to bed. There was no update for nearly a month, and I almost thought it was discontinued, but it still hasn't happened yet. In fact, the author feels that there are so few people reading it that he can't make a living. But I think a good book is just like those of us who study medicine. It takes a long time to settle down and achieve some success. Although the author has clearly closed the book, he hopes to continue updating if he has time and mood. In any case, thank the author for the happiness he has brought to us readers. See you later, come on Rainbow.

You've spent so much money on prostitution, so I'll give you five recommendation votes every day this month? Keep up the good work and be optimistic about this book. I think this book would be even more popular if it weren't for the update issue. It will be fine now that it has stabilized. Just take your time and step by step 😁.

A book that could have become a god, both in terms of writing style and setting are acceptable, but the author doesn't want to. Also, the author doesn't look down on the money to write a book.

Everyone who clicked here, don't leave yet. This book is very interesting, but now it has become fat and ready to be slaughtered. I won't let you down🤓🤓🤓

Good job! Write well! We like yours! I have experienced a lot of things and read so many books, so I have a lot to say and a lot of stories to tell, so let's write a novel! Keep your original intention and work hard! Think of yourself as a storyteller, don't think about anything else, and take care of your inner thoughts. Read more, write more, think more, summarize more! Don't give up easily and stop updating easily. We are all following you! It's a pity that your fans are very poor, hahaha 😢🤭🤭

Not to mention other problems in this book, the biggest problem is that the time is unclear. It has only been a year or two since I wrote hundreds of chapters. You must know that this is a novel about cultivating immortals.

I was confused. I think many people think that the protagonist has no experience, but in fact, if you look at the people around you, you dare to say that there is no top-notch person. Just like Yan Ziran, some people think it suddenly exploded. In fact, there are many such people. But having said that, if I haven't experienced it, I can't believe that there are such top-notch people. In fact, if you have rich experience, you will find that the world is so big, and there are no bird people.

You can turn it off silently if you don't want to read it. It's not easy to write a book, and I don't have any grudge against you, so why bother. Besides, I think it's quite interesting. It's just that the author is really slow😱. I can only wait patiently. However, the author's character is still good. Although he has no achievements, he is not eunuch or unfinished. It's very good. Come on😊

After reading Chapter 150, I don't understand why there is an extra big brother plot. It would be better without this paragraph.

Don't be in a hurry, just follow along now, keep going, the climax will gradually build up, and it will end quickly if you want to let it go now. The protagonist needs to rely on means to turn the world upside down. There is still a long way to go, so don't be anxious. Good things are never too late.

The problem is that the author thinks that you are writing about the vast ancient world, but in fact you are writing about the protagonist's trivial details. And the scary thing is that the author has a bright future after farming in his mind, but he never describes it. When he wrote it, he felt that he was laying the foundation for a peerless sect, and every little thing was a brick and tile of the future building. But the viewers don't have this blueprint in mind, and they don't have the energy to make up a blueprint through the existing bricks and mortar, so they naturally feel that it's stuck. As for the main line, I think since the title and introduction of the book are given, the emotional line must be used as the main line. Anyway, I came here for the ancestor in the title of the book. After reading the free chapters, I felt that it was okay. Although I haven't entered the main plot yet and I don't even know the so-called ancestor, there are constant conflicts, big and small, and various conflicts set the pace, and I don't feel that the pace is slow. Then as usual, I went to piracy to check the quality of the paid chapters, and skipped chapters to jump to the latest update. There were more than 400 chapters, and the protagonist seemed to be still doing odd jobs for the ancestor... So I stopped subscribing. Then there is the issue of group portraits. I stopped reading the two free books mentioned by the author before finishing the chapters. I will use "Revolution Goddess" as an example. There is a big plot in Revolution involving the Queen, the Great Magician, the successor of Emperor Tudor, and a political commissar of the protagonist. The first three are temporary allies and later enemies, and they all have a good personal relationship with the protagonist. The man is honest and the woman is beautiful. They also have their own persistence and pride, which is why they part ways with the protagonist later. The political commissar under him was fabricated to find out information, and finally became an advanced worker and supported the protagonist's path. These supporting characters all have very good qualities. The two women are naturally beautiful in appearance, and the man is also handsome or has a handsome face. On this basis, the plot unfolds based on their beliefs and paths, and everyone likes to see it. And then the supporting characters in this book… Those under the ancestors don't have many roles, and they don't seem to have interesting souls. That Sun Ah Qiao, everything follows the lead of the protagonist. Then the recent Pang Ni, not to mention his appearance, is fat and lazy, and there is nothing admirable or likeable about him. According to convention, he could be a comedian with this image, but it is not in the book. It can be said that he has no merit except for bringing out the old man Tianjizi. And among the men, the protagonist's brothers also have their own problems. The images of these characters cannot afford much drama. It doesn't mean that you have to be a saint, but no matter the protagonist or the supporting character, you have to have characteristics and be more likeable than the passers-by in order to become the protagonist and the supporting character. That's why the author said that even though most of the plot focuses on the protagonist and the ancestors, everyone still feels that pen and ink are wasted on the supporting characters. Adding plot to characters who cannot bear the plot, you think the author is setting up a multi-line plot, but in the eyes of readers, it is just like a small character with so many words. There is also the problem of brain burning and brainlessness. Now, as long as the writing is decent, mindless writing is better. The more settings there are, the less I want to read it. There are so many things that require mental use in work and study, and I no longer have the time to think about foreshadowing and hidden clues in novels. Before, I might have written down the Yinqin operations one by one and thought about the prospects, but now I really have no intention of doing so.

In the recent plot, the ministers used methods to resist the emperor, but the powerful emperor could suppress them. What's more, this is a world where the power of individuals crushes the system. How did these people judge that their ancestors would restrain themselves?

It's so poisonous that the protagonist uses fairy tales to explain everything he encounters.