My Savage Ancestor

After reading a hundred chapters, let me tell you. There are quite a few questions. First, Ah Meow, even though it and Pig's Foot killed Iron Bell together, Ah Meow saved the male protagonist, and then Pig's Foot ignored the past grievances? Have you forgotten that it wants to play with pig's feet again and again? The iron bell was also attracted by it, right? Second, Yin Tiecheng, the author wanted to portray him as a scheming person, but he teamed up with outsiders to kill his own Gao Xiu without even getting any reward. What confidence did he have in letting the Zhao and Li families pay him afterwards? Of course, there are also exciting plots, including the Okurayama gambling game and the subsequent hype, as well as the drinking game in the restaurant.

After reading it, let me talk about the shortcomings of this book. I think the biggest shortcoming of this book lies in the failure of characterization, especially two people, Hua Yunshang and Yan Ziran. First of all, let's talk about flowers. The female protagonist in this book has been selected, but she has too few appearances. The current 666 chapters are not too short, not even as good as Qiuxiang. Of course, we can say that this book is still long and there is no rush. Next, let's talk about Hua's character. What the author wants to express at the moment is that Hua is a character who is dedicated to cultivation, somewhat dissonant with the world, but also smart, with a bit of a womanly temper. So Huali Feng is in such a mess, does she know? She didn't know? As soon as Yin Qin's buttocks popped up, she knew he had pooped and peed. Does she know? The Yan who has been with her since she was a child is naturally rotten to the core. Why doesn't she know? As for the house near Hantan, you brought a group of people with you to this miserable place to conquer the world. You promised to give others a good location and a good house. Now that you have become rich, you have turned your back and refused to recognize the person and have to take it back. What kind of behavior is this? As a leader, he cannot benefit his subordinates, cannot lead his subordinates to conquer the world, and in the end he breaks his promise. To put it bluntly, it's a bitch. Let's talk again

Flaws do not hide the virtues! There are some slightly abrupt plots due to insufficient foreshadowing, and the characterization of the group portraits is not very clear, but there are few bad routines without bad jokes! The progression of the plot is also quite attractive, much better than what some so-called masters have written. (The master who can't help but complain about a lot of bad jokes and bad routines to gain data)

I stopped updating it a few times, but never gave up. I hope the author can be as diligent and diligent as the protagonist.

The author said it was based on The Witch, but the Witch has begun to fight devils since Chapter 800, and the pattern is global. But this one is still in Huali Peak, and even the Valley of Ten Thousand Beasts can't shake a pig's trotters. Not to mention other sects and dynasties. The relationship between the pig's feet and the heroine is even more strange. The title of the book directly mentions the heroine. Chapter 800 shows the relationship between the hero and the ancestor, which is still like that of an emperor and a slave. I feel like the author wanted to write about everything, but only half of it was written. There is no description of farming, the group portraits are only a few people and the insertions are quite abrupt, and the emotional scenes with the ancestors are always far away. It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

I have been reading novels for more than ten years and have only spoken out two or three times. This speech was really heartbreaking and unpleasant to read. I have been reading this book for a week. To be honest, there are very few fairy tale books that I can read for a week without giving up. Personally, I think the author's writing skills are not lacking, and the characters and plots are excellent, but the description of the environment and background is really cumbersome and cumbersome. Take Chapter 651, which only introduces the location of a subsequent event. People like me who read continuously feel tired, let alone those who follow updates every day. How do you feel after waiting for a day to see updates? There is no character portrayal, no plot advancement, only environmental descriptions? If this place is very important and is an indispensable corner of the author's grand world, and it really takes such a long time to describe it, I would also suggest that the plot of a supporting character or a minor character can be used to indirectly lead to the description. After all, the order of the three elements of a novel is character, plot, and environment. I don't want to directly use the word "water" to describe this chapter, because it can be seen that the author also describes this paragraph very carefully, but the feeling given to the reader is just two words - heartbroken! In the next chapter, the author responded that it was Kavin, but for me, it was better to write Kavin's request for leave than this! As a VIP reader who has subscribed to all chapters and voted for the book before seeing any updates, I think I am still qualified to complain a word or two, right? I don't mean anything else, I just hope that the author can write better and better, and become a great person who I can subscribe to every book he writes. I think you have this potential. This is the first time I have written so much text online. I hope the author can read it.

As long as it looks good, that's it

They say the author abuses the protagonist, but I didn't feel abused even after reading Chapter 150! Is it better to have smooth sailing all the time? If you don't have any hardships to be the protagonist, do you think you'll be slapped in the face by pretending to be 13 all the time? Personally, I feel that the only problem with this book is the title - My Savage Ancestor! If you like to watch pretending to be 13 and being slapped in the face, come and take a look. The protagonist has been bullied and hasn't killed the whole family. He doesn't have the pleasure of killing the whole family with a glare. Yunyun's thoughts are unclear! (The protagonist just can't bear the slightest bit of grievance) And when I saw the title of your book, I thought it was about picking up girls and pretending to be a slap in the face, and I didn't even have the desire to click on it! If it weren't for my friend Amway, I wouldn't have clicked in! This book is well-written but not popular, but it's because it's not in the right words. Those who read the book can't stand the abusive author, and most others were dissuaded by the name!

Originally, it was going to be free for a few days, but I decided to read the whole book before it was free. As for the feeling after reading it, first of all, make sure that this book is really worth reading. Otherwise, as a bookworm with more than ten years of reading experience, I would not read it in one go. Secondly, many things that could be briefly mentioned are described by the author in too detail and depth, resulting in the slow progress of the plot and the suspicion of hydrology. Finally, the layout is too big, and with the author's writing skills, the book may end at the end. I hope I am just unfounded. Congratulations to the author Wen Qi.

I relied on this book during the rectification period of Qidian. I read it in one sitting, otherwise I would not have read farming articles. There were some nonsense words during the period that really made me lose interest, but considering the author, I have nothing to say. But I still have to praise the author. The beginning is very good, the characters are well-written, and the plot is not bad. I can't say it is too good, but it can be seen that the author has a good idea and has conceived it well. The little witty words he wrote also make people smile, and the characters' IQs are also on the basic line... Having said so much, I also encourage the author. Of course, it is impossible to reward, and it is impossible in this life 😂😂😂