I Am a Powerful Admiral.

Not bad. I would like to reward you with 10,000. I hope you can write well according to your own ideas.

I saved thirty or forty pictures at once and read them all in one go It was so cool

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Millions of words can be written about the six naval styles + three domineering skills, the upgrade and evolution of Wanhao 5 skills, and the LOL talent runes and equipment. Why get a character card? Except for Wan Hao, few people know it. Oda Luffy has been using Gears 1, 2 and 3 for a century and is still a god. Don't make things too complicated. He is a LoL player. Just put some LOL stuff into it. What you want is simple, easy to understand and passionate.

The author of Qidian is always confident in the emotional dramas he writes.

Feels like a real man

Do you guys have any recommendations from other fans? This book is updated too slowly. It would be best to join the navy and then treat pirates or Luffy's group without any preferential treatment, just kill as many as you can. I don't know why my sense of Luffy has declined rapidly in the past two years. I feel that he is a person who does things without considering the consequences or the impact.

Wrist Hao

I'm commenting after just reading a little bit. My personal opinion is that the author shouldn't draw character cards if he wants to take the physical route. There are so many skills that are very fancy. Looking at the physical skills of Pirates, they basically just go straight to it. If they can't beat it, they can use their domineering power to be more reckless. From a personal point of view, pig's trotters should be used to build up physical attributes. You can train them on your own to improve the characteristics of additional characters. Wear them for a long time to integrate into yourself. For example, in the martial arts novel Zhang Sanfeng practices Tai Chi for a long time, you can give him the characteristics of self-healing from hidden injuries. Zhang Wuji can increase poison resistance (Nine Yang Divine Skill characteristics) and Feng Qingyang characteristics. To see through (you can also add an upgraded version of Dugu Qiubai's trait insight), the Three Kingdoms can also write Liu Bei's trait of affinity, Guan Yu's trait of intimidation, Zhang Fei's trait of ferocity (of course it can also be changed to huge strength), the above is momentum (temperament), Zhao Yun's trait is speed (accelerated attack speed), Lu Bu's trait is ghost and god, and Huang Zhong's trait is eagle eye. . . . . . There are also some other characteristics such as being light and easy, breaking armor, seeing gods and being indestructible, carrying a cauldron, being intuitive, etc. In One Piece, in addition to the Sixth Form of the Navy, the physical arts path in One Piece can be described as the modern Jeet Kune Do plus the hand sword. After all, they all rely on fists and kicks to move around recklessly. I feel that Jeet Kune Do is more in line with the general physical arts path, and the hand sword is used to increase the strength and killing ability. So many villains behead their heads with the hand knife when they appear, and then lick the blood from their hands, which is full of strength.

I, Jin Fu Never hit a woman👩🏻🙂 Unless I can't help it

To be honest, although the writing is okay, there are too many mixed characters now, and it no longer looks like a wealthy man, and the purity is too low.

Come on, let's see if we can put this on the cover

The combination of the pirate king and the pirate king is still very novel and interesting, but the setting of the card system is not very good personally. It would be more interesting to let the pirates rely on the local power system and their own talents to practice. There may also be some reasons for the card settings. First: Because most of the characters drawn from the cards are unknown characters, so I have no idea about their skills Second: The talents and skills of the drawn characters overlap in each class, or most of them are described as simple increases in abilities, such as recovery, physical strength, combat intuition, and skills. Coincidentally, these are all things that can be learned through normal practice in the pirate world (also affected by talent). Instead of using the template of a card character to learn it directly (although the card effect can be converted into its own effect through practice), it is better to let the protagonist enhance through stories, plots and battles in a way that is intuitive and recognized by readers. Third: Looking at the entire work, except for the initial black boxing and baby5 (this part is still very interesting, I also fell into the trap), I have a strong sense of immediate perception of the plot, such as the training camp, the stiff pretense in the entrance examination, the island survival beast hunting assessment and then single-handedly challenging the strongest overlord, which made the assessment unable to proceed, and cp I won't go into detail here one by one, including looking down on the protagonist and being shocked by the protagonist. The subsequent battle with the empress, in which you and I were embarrassed, was actually acceptable to me, but the writing was not good enough to escape the embarrassment that made me vomit blood. It made me feel like a fool watching this plot. From the beginning of the training camp, the plot has a tendency to develop into a blunt and pretentious style of the ancient dragon Aotian. When I arrived at G8, I felt that this was the Long Aotian I had not seen for a long time. It was so embarrassing that I wanted to use my feet to drag out the three rooms and one living room. Moreover, the plot direction was completely in a running account. The card training and awkward costumes became stronger and repeated reincarnations. It was not as amazing as the beginning. It made me feel that someone had ghostwritten it. From writing the book with my brain to writing it with my hands, it still felt a bit weird. So I stopped watching it after g8... ps. The setting of Zefa's asthma attack during the battle with Bai II was very good, I like it very much. In short, come on, author, conceive the plot carefully, and stop using those embarrassing pretentious ways. It is not only the shock of the audience that can show the awesomeness of the protagonist, but you can start from the heroic spirit of the rich man.

The protagonist's plug-ins are too complex and confusing, involving too many characters, and the author does not explain the skills. It seems that many moves are incomprehensible, and some mission skills are inexplicable (young Naruto's full blow, the explanation is very strong, haha). Finally, it is repeatedly emphasized that he is very similar to Garp, but there is no similarity. The protagonist's personality is very different. The protagonist's personality is not obvious at the beginning. When he gets to the main battle, he starts to become ferocious, tearing off wings and breaking hands. In this case, I feel that it is more suitable to become a pirate.

You can write all the theatrical versions, write more fighting scenes, and I'll support you by watching the commercials!

You can lick any protagonist group and just be yourself. When you see Chopper, then I will dissuade you. You have a bit of pride as a time traveler and a sense of self-consciousness as a navy.

It feels like there are too many fancy things. Pirates only have domineering skills, physical skills, sword skills, fruit abilities, and a few powerful final moves. As long as the levels are not too different, and the domineering power is not consumed at the same level, it is impossible to fight them all. How is it possible for you to just use some fancy skills and have armed colors? You can beat him to death in just a few blows. Are you joking? Moreover, with a pirate's physique and domineering strength, even if you hit a few big moves, you can't beat him to death. You can imagine that Aokiji and Akainu can fight on an island for more than ten days. In the end, they only end up with a broken leg. You can beat someone to death with just a few skills. It's nonsense.

I saw some book friends saying that they want to see some cards, then open a card deck here and send out the cards you are interested in and related talents and skills. If it is more reasonable, it will appear in the plot next.

This Marriott is not passionate at all😅

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Pool Jinfu

Of course I don't like adding a female protagonist. Because that would become the old One Piece routine again. A bunch of heroines and a bunch of robots. Apart from PPP, it will have no effect. Of course, this is just a suggestion.

This powerful man reveals his plans when he meets someone. Except for the navy, most people know that the protagonist is not a pure navy.

Can you put the skills together? A bunch of bells and whistles, but in reality they are useless.

To be honest, this book appeals to my taste and I am a fan of it. The author has worked hard to update it. I am a student and I don't have much money. I will start updating it next week. I can still get it for ten or twenty yuan a week. It's so funny~

Add a blue fist card later? The blue boxing two-sleep and three-sleep standing paintings all have a naval flavor.

You have always been the one I pinned

Have you ever found the title General·Skull Crusher to be quite tricky?

After reading more than ten chapters, why do I inexplicably hate that little girl?