I Am a Sword Master in Konoha

The author knows how to write novels😂. Wow, secret training for a whole year, wow, special Jonin strength, wow, breakthrough to intermediate swordsmanship, wow, a genius who needs Konoha to hide his age and identity. There was so much foreshadowing in the front, but it turned out that it was a big deal at the beginning, and was deceived by people using tricks and sneak attacks by people using spells. It's not that I can't understand the author's idea of ​​wanting the male protagonist to experience some setbacks, but is it necessary for you to be so anxious and outrageous?

This author's imagination is really awesome. I admire him so much.

Tsunade

A common problem in Naruto fanfiction is that they grow up too fast and quickly distance themselves from their partners. So many God-like works have their own protagonists. Many novels focus on the strength of the protagonist and leave the partners behind in a few pictures. Then they only focus on getting stronger along the way. Although they are very young, the protagonist is written to be the mainstay of the entire article. Especially among Naruto fans, almost all of them already have elite jounin or kage-level strength by the time they can master the Three Body Technique. It looks so uncomfortable, and I don't know how to read this book, after all, I've only read a dozen chapters. It wouldn't be bad if the protagonist were reborn as a 16, 17 or 18-year-old ninja and had such a fast growth rate.

If this knife were replaced by White Fang, then this wave would be a sure kill, but it is a pity that it cannot be replaced.

I don't understand. If you don't want to write about ninjutsu, don't write about it. You can't say what ninjutsu you want if you know how to use the sword. Obviously, in the early stages of swordsmanship, when the ninjutsu is not enough to cut open, you can just hold back the ninjutsu. He was obviously very sensible at the beginning, especially when he discovered the spy before he became a genin, and the six of them cooperated and killed him.                                           When I was taking the Chunin Exam, I couldn't bear to be "shit" all over my body, which caused some chakras to be blocked and so on. At this time, let alone being a veteran, at least he has some experience, and at least he needs to be a little vigilant. This is a typical example of ignoring rationality in order to lead to the subsequent plot. Is there no other way? It has to be like this. This does not make people feel that they are abusing the protagonist, but that the protagonist suddenly changed and their IQ dropped rapidly. Moreover, that psychic beast can smell its own scent from a kilometer away, but cannot smell the smell of people who are very close to it and are covered in mud? If it is covered with mud, it may be two meters away.

Newbies can read it, but old bookworms shouldn't read it. This book is very self-indulgent. Moreover, he committed a taboo in online writing. In order to draw out the consequences of the plot below, he forcibly found the cause, which resulted in a serious mental deterioration in the Chuunin exam. This book has persuaded at least half of the people to quit.

I hope the author's strength upgrade span will not be so long. Naruto is very long, and the strength increases too quickly. There are too many plots in the later stage, and the plot can easily collapse, such as changing the fate rope technique of some minor characters, because the heroine seems to be Tsunade. If the author wrote it in an emotional drama You can give it a try if you are a good-looking author. If the emotional drama is not good, I suggest you have a single female protagonist, or don't write it. Don't lick the heroine's content. Basically, single female protagonists are very stable. Come on, author (the rope technique was accidentally stepped on and exploded to death). Personally, I feel that she is a minor character.

Build an official supporting building. Interested book friends can write down the original characters, blood successors, skills, etc. That you find interesting. Coconut Juice will choose some excellent ideas and put them into future plots.

The biggest problem with Naruto fandoms is watching a group of 7- and 8-year-old brats fighting back and forth, without any sense of immersion. Every time I see the protagonist having so much fun with a group of brats after time travel, I can't understand. Is the emotional intelligence of everyone who has traveled through Naruto dropped to the level of a 6-year-old child?

The most annoying thing about system flow is that all the actions of the protagonist revolve around the system. The protagonist is like a puppet on strings, without any substantial spirit of resistance. Unfortunately most system flows make this mistake! Therefore, it's not that there are no good works in system flow, but that most people can't write well!

I haven't read it yet. The protagonist uses a knife. In fact, I don't think there are any fancy knife skills. I just use basic knife skills to increase the protagonist's chakra. Attach chakra to the knife, add sharp cutting to the attributes of chakra, and then improve the physical attributes of strength, constitution, speed, and nerve response. In the future, when encountering an enemy, you can slash flatly. Refer to the character Shinigami - King of Flat Slashing - Kenpachi Zaraki.

General image (actually Mikazuki Munechika)

The author wrote blindly in many places and did not read the original work at all. The original work said that Tsunade Senju, Jiraiya the mad ghost, and Orochimaru Yagami are the Sannin of Konoha. He also said that Tsunade was not named Senju, and that Jiraiya Orochimaru was a commoner. Even if you don't know, can't you check it online? Although Jiraiya's mad ghost clan was exterminated long ago, the Yagami clan has always been there, and the Moonlight clan is introduced in the original work as being slightly sparse, but there are still ten people in a hundred generations. You directly wrote it as a single soldier.

I can't stand it. The writing is okay, but it doesn't have its own characteristics. The main reason is that the timeline is too long. It seems to be about 700 chapters, but after flipping through it, it seems that Naruto has not appeared in chapter 300. There are slightly too many original characters. If you write so many original characters, it is better to write a novel of your own conception.

The male protagonist killed the elite Jonin on the opposite side and didn't take Shi Ti back to the torture squad to collect information. As a result, after the battle, he didn't give it to himself to fall in love with Tsunade when he had time. In order to protect Tsunade, he chose the Purple Jin ninja to collect Shi and let them expose the Shi wilderness... …Forget it that the male protagonist still pretends to be a show-off when he witnesses his beloved being seriously injured and in a state of embarrassment. I won't find fault with you, but you are too naive to even ask your comrades to be tortured or forget to do it.

I feel that this Naruto fanfic by the author is one of the best I have ever seen. It has a lot of relaxed daily life, and the bond with the partners is deeply described. Especially the single female protagonist is very well received. I suddenly feel that the best part of the original Naruto description is the bond between people. I read some comments that it is childish for the protagonist to play with a six-year-old child. I disagree. I feel that this aspect is the best written. Other Naruto fanfics have written the protagonist as very selfish and has no relationship with his companions at all. I feel that it is also very interesting to make friends with favorite characters in the original and establish deep friendships. I feel that this single female protagonist is very well received. The original CP is very touching. If there is a harem, it will not be as good as the original CP. I am a little dissatisfied, the child was given too late, and he is younger than Naruto and the others.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading it for a while, so I couldn't help but book a chapter at the back and post it How come the Sannin and White Fang went to ninja school in the same year?

After seeing the last few pictures on the shelves, I felt really self-conscious, the timeline was a bit messy, and the battle was hard to describe...

I've read a few chapters, and there are a lot of unknown and bad jokes in them. I'm just trying to make fun of them. Is it interesting?

No, is it interesting to play this kind of self-deception every day?

Sarutobi Hiruzen accepted the Sannin of Konoha as his apprentice before he became the Third Hokage. Especially jounin and jounin can accept apprentices and lead a class. After the death of the Second Hokage, Sarutobi Hiruzen came to power. By that time, Jiraiya, Orochimaru, and Tsunade had already gone to the battlefield, and then they became famous as the Sannin of Konoha. The Fourth Hokage also accepted Obito, Kakashi, and Lin as apprentices before becoming Hokage. The timeline is too messy.

Some book reviews have been deleted. How many people have been persuaded to quit?

The last point is that he doesn't really like Nagato very much. Although he also knows that Nagato's darkening is completely the product of various tragedies and conspiracies, he still can't forgive Nagato's behavior of killing his master in the original work This paragraph is just written blindly. In order to follow the plot, it can be said that Nagato has done nothing now. It makes sense that you are afraid that Madara will cause trouble for you now, but that you don't have the strength to change Nagato's fate.

Find a book. The hero's teacher was Tsunade's mother, and she died after giving birth to a rope tree. The hero signed a contract with Slug and received the second-generation water escape inheritance. The book opens on the eve of the First World War in the Ninja World. Please reply if you know the book friends, Crab Ning Lei!

The main character's cultivation of the Eight Gates is too easy, right? 🤔 Kai becomes a clown

You said you don't like Nagato because he killed his teacher and wanted to change. What did you change? Obito will also kill his own teacher in the future, so why don't you say you don't like Obito?