In Konoha, I Also Want to Be Proud of Myself

The protagonist's current skills are completely acceptable. He has an exoskeleton, six thrust holes on his back, bone machine guns on his shoulders, a small chainsaw in one hand, and a shield and hand cannon in one hand. This consumes less chakra and bones, and the attack power is not weak. It is also a combination of offense and defense.

It looked pretty good, but in the end I suddenly found that the main plot remained basically the same, and there was just an extra character who was a bit of a soy sauce character. How should I develop it? Can I boldly adapt it?

I just want to say that Kaleidoscope goes well with Wood Release, and White Eyes goes well with Bone Release.

It's boring to write the most charming Orochimaru as an ordinary person88

Orochimaru collapsed in the first chapter. Orochimaru is not the type who pretends to be aloof. He should have a personality that is indifferent to emotions and anger. Although his skills are a bit disgusting, his personality charm is really high-end. Even if he encounters a fool, he should not lose his composure. At most, he will be arrested without talking nonsense after being speechless. There are indeed a lot of fools in Naruto, but in this work, they suffered a second blow to their wits. The author should watch Naruto a few more times and grasp the personalities of various characters before writing. Thinking about it from his perspective, if I were him, what would I do, how would I answer, and what kind of psychological changes I had experienced before to make this decision. The world of Naruto seems simple but it is not simple. There are many operations that seem to reduce intelligence. If you think carefully about the environment, you will find that you can understand any choice of any character. (This does not include TV original plots)

Hey, I can still be happy and happy at the front, but the further back I go, the worse it gets. Why don't I turn on the immortal mode once after practicing it? Is it difficult to fight 4-tailed Naruto and Orochimaru? Is this the sage mode that transcends Hashirama? It's a useless show, but the plot remains the same? That's enough

How should I put it? Personally, the most poisonous part is that after Hashirama's cells fused, he completely forgot about Danzo. Danzo directly sent someone to attack you, without any cover-up, and almost killed you, but in the end, you became a good person You have revenge, brother, the protagonist is super powerful, with Tsunade Jiraiya as a guarantee, and he is Ino Shikacho's son-in-law, so he killed Danzo first. Is there any problem? The more I look at it, the more useless and cowardly I become

The protagonist is just a supporting role in front of Naruto and Sasuke. He spends most of his time around these two people, and he also wants to change Itachi's fate. The third generation was so kind to him in the early stage, but he didn't care about the third generation so much. Is Itachi familiar with the protagonist? Anyway, I just persisted until the protagonist said that he was from the future in order to change Itachi's fate. He really dared to say anything

I won't talk about Orochimaru and Tsunade's poison... The protagonist is eight years old this year and already has chuunin strength. He is actually arranged to go to school with six-year-old Naruto, who is still in the same class. What excuse are you making about educational resources to make me laugh? From this plot arrangement, we can see the author's skills. He would not be able to write without the plot of the original work...

Why do you, Tsunade, a person from another village, accept you as a disciple? You can even enter Konoha Village, and even more outrageous, you can enter a teaching center like a ninja school. The whole world really revolves around the protagonist.

I didn't believe it when I saw the poison. The apology was really poisonous... I withdrew. The part about Uncle Snake is very poisonous, and the part about Tsunade cutting off pig's feet is also poisonous. Even if you can withstand these poisons, the problem is not good, it's just plain... The novel has three golden chapters at the beginning, but I didn't see the highlights.

The author simply cannot see the essence of many problems. The Flower Country is a one-time story, and it is even more ridiculous to preach to Neji. Neji's fundamental problem is his father's death and the tragic fate of his family being separated. But the author makes it sound like a child is ignorant and jealous of others.

Many fans regard the third generation as a good person who does whatever he wants for Konoha. Kakashi's father committed suicide, the Uzumaki Kingdom was annihilated, the Senju were annihilated, and Naruto's tragic childhood. Many people said that it was Danzo who had done it. Didn't the Third Generation know? Would Danzo dare to take action without the third generation's acquiescence? What would happen if the third generation said a word when White Fang and Naruto were attacked by villagers? Also, White Fang's failure in the mission and his choice to save people was just an excuse to launch an attack to force White Fang. White Fang's reputation was so high that it threatened the third generation's status. The Book of Sealing is in the hands of the third generation. Rare Earth Reincarnation: Doesn't the third generation of such an awesome ninjutsu know that this ninjutsu is equivalent to a nuclear weapon? Who would dare to attack Konoha if it appears just once! To put it bluntly, the Senju clan has been exterminated. How can the third generation face the first and second generations? The third generation was afraid and didn't dare. Alas, fans all regard the Third Generation as a good guy, and Danzo as a complete bad guy. You must know that the Third Generation is the Kage, and all of Danzo's actions are watched by the Third Generation!

Sorry, I can't stand it anymore, it's too poisonous!

. . . . Wuyu knew the brainless protagonist when he saw the master selection in the previous chapters. Aren't those options, except Terumi Mei, all seeking death? Too idealistic, Tsunade? Jiraiya? Kakashi? Why would they accept you as their disciple? Or why can you survive before they take you in? Take Jiraiya, who has the most disciples outside the village, for example, among his few disciples outside the village, Nagato and the others are the only ones. Or when Jiraiya thought that Nagato might be the child of destiny and they were orphans, how could you have such obvious blood stains on your bones? Why should I accept you as my disciple? Besides, the major ninja villages are obviously hostile. Don't talk about your age. Even babies saved by others are killed directly? Didn't look at Nagato and the others when they met the Sannin for the first time, did Orochimaru intend to kill them directly? (Don't tell me Orochimaru is an exception? Orochimaru is the common practice, okay? Tsunade and Jiraiya behaved too much at that time.)

After all, Tsunade is the granddaughter of the first generation, and she is dedicated to Konoha. How could she just accept you as a disciple from Kirigakure Village, even if she is a traitor?

I can't see the front, I can't see the front, and I can't see the back There is one place in the front that directly caused me to persuade him to quit. It was Tsunade who forbade Kimimaro from using the Corpse Pulse. The part about it disgusted me so much that I refused to let him use it. Then why are you writing about Kimimaro?

It can be said that all kinds of poisonous points are full. It is suitable for people who have never watched Naruto or have watched a little bit and heard about the plot. For the difference, you can refer to the TV series "Dou Qi Transformed into a Horse" if you have not read the Dou Po novel.

Isn't the blood disease of corpse bone veins caused by lack of hygiene? If a person takes the bone back and continues to use it, can he not get sick? After killing someone, the bones must be disinfected and hygienic!

The original cover image, but I couldn't change it back later.

It seems that there are 200 pictures. I'm thinking, does Kimimaro really have no idea about Danzo at all?

I feel a little disappointed after buying all of this book. It's very interesting at the beginning but boring at the end.

Why not use it after learning the immortal mode? Never used in fights. How many times have I fought with people, just like a child, and my personality is the same

Just read the original work, know the plan of Konoha's collapse, and still follow the original work, the same is true later, farewell

It was a bit interesting in the early stage, but in the later stage, it was written according to the original plot, and there was no sense of passion.

Newcomers should treat the contents of this book as a parallel universe, with slightly different backgrounds and characters. Otherwise, you will feel a bit incredible.

How to extract chakra and understand Japanese without inheriting memory, 🤐🤐🤐

I didn't expect you to write this as the protagonist, but I discovered it too late. I also wanted to write it at the beginning, but unfortunately the writing was not good, so I only made the character's ninjutsu ability, but I deleted it because I couldn't write it after all. The most basic one of my high-level ninjutsu is to pull bones into soldiers, and the highest one is the Hidden Bone Coffin.

Temptation

I'm still looking at the front. In my opinion, corpse bone veins are completely comparable to wood. For us modern people, we can make our own weapons and bring private goods, human bone diamond knives, and military exoskeleton armor. If necessary, we can also make our own skeleton puppet army, mechanized auxiliary army, and take the bloodline purification route without risking village prosecution.