Myriad Worlds: I'm Not the Dao Ancestor

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The recent chapters haven't been as interesting as they were at the beginning. They're desperately clinging to the prehistoric era; Hou Yi shooting down the suns is just to get revenge on a goddess who fell into another's arms, and a bunch of powerful figures are going to fight against their equals for their underling Hou Yi's unrequited love?

I didn't originally intend to create this group now; I feel like this has nothing to do with failing, and it would be awkward if I created a group but only had a few people. However, a fellow reader invited me, so I'll give it a try. Group number: 1054855508

The author's ambitions have gone too far; the plot is incredibly chaotic, jumping from one thing to another, trying to include everything. The result is a poorly woven mess, like a hodgepodge. A clearer timeline would have been much better. As for the appendix (a character from a Chinese novel), well, I doubt even the author knows what they're writing.

Does anyone else find this portrayal of Xuanyuan disgusting? As one of the historically recognized ancestors of Chinese civilization, one can't help but suspect the author is maliciously defaming him. Be careful, or you might get reported! 🤐

I guess I'm just doing this out of pure love? Did anyone come here from my Douyin videos?

It's not a problem with the myriad realms and the primordial world; it's that you've been subverting tropes and gradually falling into clichés. The plot is interesting, but using the same trope over and over gets annoying. For example, the chat group initially seemed like a repetitive machine, which was fun at first, but the constant repetition became tiresome.

The concept of realms is simple and clear, which is good; it doesn't involve so many fancy gimmicks. In classical Chinese Taoism, there are only five types of immortals: Heaven, Earth, Human, God, and Ghost. Taoism didn't originally have the concept of Golden Immortals; Celestial Immortals were already the highest rank in Taoism.

Although this is only my 231st book to be fully subscribed to, I still hope the author can mark it as a featured book. 🙂🙂

The author doesn't need to bring in that satirical style from the chat group; that's only for newbies. Each character should just follow their own style. If every character only knows how to send emojis and act cute in the chat group, then they'll only have the same name as the original characters—no personality, they'll all be designed from the same mold.