From the Primordial World to the Martial World

Seeing so many people criticizing the author, let me make a summary. Most of the people who scolded me were old bookworms. Those who are not demanding are newcomers. Newbies read less books. He is very tolerant of most novels. But the old bookworm can't. Bookworms tend to worry about everything. Summarize the various types of poison points. Fantasy: This is the best to write, the logic is not rigorous. There are various types. From the doggy to the murderous and decisive to the holy virgin. What are the poisonous points? This is the first one for sending girls. Let the tiger return to the mountain, this is the second one. There is also the fact that one's IQ is being led by others. Became someone else's thug. These are the three most poisonous points. There are also many poisonous spots. Because the characters of the main protagonists are different. Maybe some of them are poisonous, but if you change the protagonist, it won't be. Urban: This is the most logical. What does logic mean? It refers to the sophistication of human nature. Deal with people. It's not about being diplomatic. It's that you know what you should and shouldn't do. Be able to reasonably judge what you can get and what you cannot get. It's a relatively easy type to write, but it's very voluminous. Poisonous point? There are the following points. A gift boy. Business articles will give you shares, and science and technology articles will give you technology. Two. IQ. Let me tell you again that urban writing is most about IQ. Most urban literature. They all focus on the protagonist's IQ. To what extent? 6 Out of 10 books are no longer available for this reason. All kinds of stupid operations. Sell ​​goods at cost price? Share transfers and the like. Even proactively sell shares. Can't recognize the value of my company. These are all considered IQ. Three. Goldfinger pressing. I don't need to say more about this. You all know all kinds of outrageous things. Suppression of golden fingers. I feel like a primary school student can develop it better than the main character. Xiu Xian: Let me talk about this first. The prehistoric era is not about cultivating immortals, it is about fantasy. Where are the most typical articles about cultivating immortals? You should read the family's articles on cultivating immortals. 9 Out of 10 books. They are all authentic articles on cultivating immortals. At present, half of the articles on cultivating immortals are concentrated in this category. Its description of various realms is very consistent with cultivating immortality. For its type, building the foundation is building the foundation, and practicing Qi is practicing Qi. Unlike other kinds of fantasy. I feel there is no difference between the several major realms. Killing the enemy across the border is like killing a dog. And where is its poisonous point? First, there is a difference in realm between descriptions of supernatural powers. The various realms of cultivating immortality are very rigorous. Very rigorous. Those who are not rigorous will be classified into fantasy. And in most of the articles on cultivating immortals, he couldn't describe how he should behave in this realm. It gives the impression that the foundation building has not yet been refined and the performance is good. Two. Immortal cultivation talks about inheritance of cause and effect. The law should not be passed lightly. For those who cultivate immortality. Inheritance is more important than anything else. Heritage is more important than anything else. Most of the articles on cultivating immortals are planted here. Of course, if you don't have any inheritance, just pretend I didn't say anything. Three. This is the poisonous point in this book. A fairy. Not to mention innate magical powers. There is no feedback from the world alone. If you can't do it, just count on your fingers and do everything. But people are already in front of you, and you still can't tell where they are. Don't say anything about being injured or something? This is instinctive. Just like people can breathe. Immortals are a more advanced creature. All animals have an instinct to sense their surrounding environment. Including humans. For example, you have no vision or hearing. You can't even move. But you still feel the temperature, the humidity. If you put a blind and deaf person in a desert, rain forest or plateau, he will be able to feel that the environment has changed. But you, an immortal, can't do it. This is a lack of expressiveness.

Abandoned, extremely poisonous, causing me to pursue him until now. What a waste of my beans. Wearing the skin of the Fengshen Bang, he travels to the small world and performs all kinds of forced pretense. Modern people have traveled through time to the Great Tribulation of the Gods, and then from the Gods to the Small World. Just to show off your imagination. . . I have endured the previous poisonous points. I thought I could write some new tricks, but ended up using the plot of "Feng Yun Xiong Dominates the World", and I was also drunk. Guizhou donkey's skills are exhausted to describe a person like the author.

The writing gets worse and worse, and I feel like the protagonist is a fool

The protagonist of this book, Chun Chun, is a waste. As a true immortal, he has inherited memories, but he is still such a waste. He has obviously noticed that the spiritual energy in this world is impure. It is obviously a small world, not a prehistoric world. A true immortal is like a giant. He is naturally small in the prehistoric world. But in a small world, he is like a giant entering a small room. Even a fool knows that this room is small and fragile. It also pays attention to the relationship between cause and effect, which is really funny. Do you really think this is the prehistoric, Shushan? The enemy comes to humiliate and refuses to kill, and makes all kinds of imagination, hahahaha, it's better to look at the brain. If you use your brain a little, you will know that one of the true immortals in the world must have feelings. As for the world above the true immortal, the world cannot squeeze in. When falling, if there is a true immortal, it will come over. If there is no reaction, the probability of a true immortal is close to zero. Since a true immortal can do anything, why not be presumptuous? Why are you as timid as a mouse? How stupid. If you have such a level of cultivation that you won't kill an enemy, your entire family will not be spared any chickens or dogs. How can you teach your enemies to be afraid of them? It is understandable that ordinary people are stupid, but true immortals are still so stupid. There is no medicine or stone to cure them. People with stupid brains can still be saved. As their cultivation level increases, their brains can become auras. But a real immortal with a brain as good as a computer is still like a psychotic brain-feeding patient, so there is really no cure. Why doesn't the world develop industry if it's like this? Unify the world? The protagonist is now a beast with no power. Some people say that the protagonist is a real fairyland monster. I believe it, or even worse. What is a true immortal? It's a fairy! This is the beginning of the real difference between immortals and mortals! This is the beginning for monks to understand the principles of the world! The accumulation of real immortal knowledge is no less than that of Chinese civilization in the real world, which refers to the accumulation of knowledge from ancient times to the present. But what is the protagonist? He is just a mortal thief who stole the power of a true immortal. Whether you admit it or not, this is a fact!

After reading dozens of chapters, the author's poems are good and have the feeling of martial arts in the past. However, the protagonist is really cautious and a little down-to-earth. You said that the world of martial arts in the ancient times must be different. Why doesn't the protagonist have the ability to explore the world? You are an immortal who cultivates the way of heaven. Don't you know that the way of heaven has changed? It is no longer the ancient way of heaven. The small world of ancient times is also the ancient way of heaven. The martial arts world is obviously not. Moreover, the level of cultivation that can be achieved depends on the energy level of the world, that is, the level and concentration of spiritual energy. Can't this be explored? Anyway, I feel like the protagonist doesn't look like an immortal or someone with some immortal abilities. The author needs to read more novels about cultivating immortals to know that even earthly immortals are very naughty beings.

The book "Eunuch" begins with frequent requests for leave, with each leave getting longer than the last. In the end, there is no news and the author is castrated in the palace.

The more I watch it, the more depressing it becomes. It's just a bunch of nonsense besides being pretentious.

The writing style before and after is not of the same level. After reading the first few chapters, I felt a sense of anticipation. Reading the last few chapters was simply disgusting. Blame my expectations for being too high🤢

Why is this immortal getting more and more frustrated? He doesn't act casually at all. He decides to help, but he has to pretend to accompany him. Don't rush to help him.

I spent money to subscribe to your book, but I deleted the post without letting others talk about it. I can't talk about my shortcomings. If you make me angry, I stand on my head and wash my hair. I'll laugh to death.