I'm an Editor at Marvel

I suggest the author create a rigorous and detailed outline; otherwise, it's prone to falling apart as more and more elements are added.

Seeing the Ancient One scene was quite disappointing. Whether it was Blood Harbor, Van Helsing, or Triangle, all of them gave me the feeling that the protagonist was lurking behind the scenes, strategizing and planning. The protagonist also took the Time Stone from the Ancient One into account and created corresponding countermeasures. Up to this point, they were all very good.

Detective Conan... To be honest, these few pictures are pretty boring.

I still can't understand Thanos's frivolous philosophy. Were his own minions among the half of humanity that died? However, it's quite similar to the American way of thinking: the Earth's resources can't support all Chinese people living the same life as Americans, therefore China cannot be allowed to rise again.

You could edit a miniature figure in a bottle and complete the Gate of Truth.

It started off incredibly well, but lately I don't even know what it's been writing anymore. I won't complain about the excessive sycophancy, since I do trust the Party's credibility. But what's the author's mentality going from awkwardly praising the Party from beginning to end? What are they trying to express? I find it very difficult to understand.

It's not interesting to see Marvel novels written with characters from other games or movies instead of Marvel characters. Seriously, if you're using the Marvel name but don't want to write about Marvel characters, why? Wouldn't that inevitably lead to a disaster?

To be honest, isn't this a bit of a mixed bag, listing Marvel, Heavenly Court, LoL, Jackie Chan Adventures, Detective Conan, and Saber? 😥

Having read up to chapter 104, honestly, I just want to ask, is this still Marvel fanfiction? I feel the author is drifting further and further away from Marvel fanfiction. It's becoming more and more like a chaotic brawl with characters from League of Legends. All that's left is the Marvel skin. What happened to Black Widow, whom you invested so much effort in developing in the early stages? All that writing before and after the book was published?

This book is good, but the pace is too fast. We were taking it slow, when suddenly Hextech appeared, Heaven appeared, and the Clock Tower appeared. It was too fast, and after it came out, there wasn't much of a chance to show off, so there wasn't much of a satisfying moment. Logically speaking, when a superpower comes out, you should write about S. H. I. E. L.