The Empress Wants to Keep Me for Herself

No one is reading? Can you give me some advice on whether the writing is good or bad 🥱

A message to the author: Hello, hairtail boss. I just got into your book through a recommendation. I have read Chapter 82 now, and I saw the situation about the Virgin Bitch at the end of the chapter. I support the boss in deleting the post or even directly replying to it. I have posted the specific comments at the end of the chapter. Also, thinking that I have already written the words anyway, and to put it bluntly, it just evokes the topic, I would like to make some immature suggestions to the boss. Let me say it first, I am not here to ruin things, I just hope that the boss will write better and better, so that we readers will have better things to watch and more excitement.         ，，， For example, if the protagonist has no family background or foundation, he can go against the Xu family without incurring revenge. This is a bit forced to instill intelligence in the villain. Hairtail Boss describes the people in that world as very kind-hearted, but intersperses a lot of dark methods (the emperor was assassinated, Wei Xing was assassinated, the Xu family's unscrupulous little conspiracy to steal the protagonist's business, etc.), Which feels a bit inconsistent. According to this situation, the Xu family was slapped twice (once because they failed to recruit and were not given face). The other time was a complete slap in the face at the poetry competition. Zhou Yuan's poems were better than Mo Bai's. The protagonist took the first place and turned around and said that Mo Bai won the championship. It was extremely insulting. It was not only insulting to Zhou Bai, but also even more insulting to Mo Bai. This is like what the Olympic gold medalist said I don't want the gold medal, so I gave up the first place to the third place. Does the third place have the face to go up and accept the award? This is worse than the food that comes from nowhere! ), I suffered a loss (I failed to try to steal the protagonist's business, but was falsified by the protagonist, which hurt my reputation), I didn't even think about taking revenge immediately, and I still waited for the protagonist to develop for a while before giving out experience points. And in my opinion, from the perspective of the Xu family, I would think this way: This Mu has no family background, unknown origins, and no foundation, but the emperor values ​​​​him very much! Kill him and you can test the emperor's bottom line. Second, it can give a signal to my people and neutral people in the court that the emperor values ​​​​more safety than I value, and it shows my strength. Third, you can seek to seize Mu's property and family wealth, and the business will make a lot of money every day. Money and silk are very attractive. The four lonely civilians were fortunate enough to enter the county, and if they died, their children would be dead and they would have no worries. At most, the emperor could use this as an excuse to exchange benefits with me. This wave is not a loss. . . Therefore, in the previous chapters, Hairtail Boss lacked a protagonist's description of the constraints on the Xu family, or a prevention method for the Xu family, or even a method of revenge. I even guessed that those readers who randomly said that the protagonist was a virgin bitch also derived from this aspect and concluded that the protagonist was a softie, and united with the protagonist to spend their own money to save the locust plague, so they spoke radically and randomly. . . . Therefore, the hairtail boss can add some political planning or personal means to strengthen the protagonist's toughness and, more importantly, show the protagonist's mature mind. From the current point of view, the protagonist's mind belongs to a relatively naive and simple type: I don't offend and no one offends me (I didn't enter the wrong order), I treat others well, others treat me well, human nature is always kind and conscious, and the heart to guard against others is indispensable - it does not exist. . .         ，：（，，，，） . . The second is to increase the political planning of the protagonist (for example, using voice shares to win over some neutral and powerful people in the court. Individuals will die quickly if they live alone. A money-making business without the protection of powerful people cannot develop based on common sense. A three-year-old child walks through the bustling city with a lot of money to understand). . . The third is to describe some of the protagonist's methods of developing armed forces (those who are not loyal to the royal family, but only loyal to the protagonist's power, such as recruiting refugees, opening a college to catch babies, and adopting military management for education, etc.). . . Also, important suggestions, vivid characters, and common sense. . . The Hairtail Boss's book is good as a mindless show of affection, but I hope that the Hairtail Boss can write a masterpiece like Yueguan, Banana, and Jie Yu 2. Also, I have only read Chapter 82. I will continue reading and hope to review your book in the future. . .

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​] I couldn't sleep anyway, so I read carefully for half the night, and then I saw the words between the words. There were four words written all over the book: "Persecute You Shui"!

Hua Ji

Love it, love it. Finally there is another harem story that I can read! I love this style so much. It's neither humble nor arrogant, nor does it pretend to be a monk. The characters are rich in emotions and the speech is logical. The rhythm is relaxed and comfortable. I thought there would be no more besides chickens. Come on, author. It's available for full order without any ambiguity!

Build a building, pay 20 on the first floor and 100 on the first floor...

I didn't expect this to be over. It seems that the girl was not missed? It seems that she was missed again?

Queen

It was night, Chu Zhi, dressed in a phoenix robe, stood on the terrace of the palace and looked at Chang'an City at night. "It's autumn, it's so cold at night, how can I stand alone on the terrace." After saying that, Mu Changqing walked up behind Chu Zhi and put a coat on her. Tightening his tight coat, Chu Zhi turned to the man and said: "How did you know I was here?" "I bumped into Yue'er when I just came here." Chu Zhi rolled his eyes at Mu Changqing: "It's not just that I bumped into it, right?" Mu Changqing said righteously: "I came here specifically to find you." Smelling the faint scent of Mu Changqing that belongs to Yue Ji: "Death Sign" "Haha" After saying this, Chu Zhi stopped looking at Mu Changqing and turned around to continue looking at Chang'an. Mu Changqing also calmed down, hugging the waist of the person next to him, watching this prosperous age with her. The two of them looked at Chang'an in the autumn night and were speechless for a while. "Changqing" "I'm here" "When did you fall in love with me?" "I don't know, maybe it was the first time you transformed into your cousin and came to the suburban courtyard. Maybe it was the first tryst between you and me that year, or maybe it was the picturesque scenery when you stood on the Qingfeng Tower and looked at the West Lake." Chu Zhi turned slightly, looked into Mu Changqing's eyes and said seriously: "It's the hanging pot that saved the world during the smallpox in Chang'an, it's the god descending to earth when the building is about to collapse, it's the startling glimpse from the Qingfeng Tower, it's the first sight of ten thousand years..."  "I am the empress of a country, and I thought I only valued you as a courtier. It wasn't until that Xianyi suddenly came to you that I realized that you were already an indispensable person around me. I couldn't let her take you to the Yun Kingdom. I didn't want to turn against you. It wasn't until something happened later that I realized that it was love..." "Wan Ling..." Before Chu Zhi could finish speaking, she felt her body instantly being restrained into a strong embrace, and her unfinished words were drowned in the affectionate kiss. The slightly cold tongue slid into the mouth, greedily grabbing her breath and exploring every corner vigorously. This moment of throbbing made each other forget everything around them. At this time, there was no queen, no one under the palace who might be looking at them, there were just two hearts leaning together. After a long time, the evening wind gradually subsided, and the moon was in the sky, bright and gentle. The soft moonlight made the night calm and peaceful. After slapping the man who didn't know how to show mercy, Chu Zhi signaled that he couldn't hold on anymore, and Mu Changqing's lips finally left Chu Zhi's delicate lips. As the two people separated, a silk thread was pulled between their lips, shining brightly in the moonlight. Mu Changqing held the weak Chu Zhi in her arms and laughed silly.          ，:""          "，，"          "Humph, it's good that you know that Hua Ji Chong will never care about these things if you don't care about them. If you don't cherish them and let me know which sister has been wronged, I won't be able to spare you." "Haha, as you command, my Queen." After thinking about it, Mu Changqing said to Chu Zhi: "Qing'er's letter said that the snow lotus on Tianshan Mountain is about to bloom. In a few days, I will take you to see the lotus pond on that mountain." "But what will happen if I leave the palace?" "You haven't been out of the imperial city for a long time, so this time I will take you to visit." "As for official matters, you don't have to worry, they will take care of it for you." "Them?" A smirk appeared on Mu Changqing's face, "If you are away during this period, Zhixi will listen to the government behind the curtain for you." "Sister Zhixi, this is not good." "Don't worry, the world is at peace now, and there will be no problems with so many sisters to help." "Okay." "Then you pack up and set off tomorrow."

To be honest, the writing is really good. I finished reading it in one go, looking forward to the follow-up. The author should write more stories like fairies in the household, senior sisters in Daoli, youth in spring and autumn, 😏😏😏. I love to watch sister-brother romances. Hahaha. The most loving ones are when the male protagonist is treated like a younger brother and is pampered.