What If I Could Be Reborn?

I just read the author's last book and finished half of it. Tell me your feelings. This book is evenly matched, and it feels like there are some shadows of the previous book. First of all, although the protagonist in the last book opened the Crystal Palace woke up early, he paid very little, so this time I hope the author will focus on portraying the protagonist, because the stallion protagonist is no longer lovable, and they all come to read the novel. I think it is okay for the protagonist to fall in love with several women, but his responsibility and dedication must be portrayed. Instead of a woman pushing him away, the writing is like the good-for-nothing male protagonist in a Japanese light novel. And the author obviously has the ability to write about daily sweetness very well, but why not try to write more about daily sweetness between male and female protagonists, and write about the feeling of emotional brewing. Then as for the female protagonists, the author still hopes to write a few female protagonists in detail, instead of relying on adding more female protagonists. I only read the last book, and I think the portrayal of Gu Yan in it is very good. But after re-ordering the ending, I found that there seemed to be too much at the end. But the length is only 200 chapters, so I think it must not be well written. So wouldn't it be better if this book could focus on the male protagonist, simplify the female protagonist, and focus on portraying several female protagonists instead of seeing one after the other. After all, depending on the author, you are not the kind of person who focuses on writing about business, so romance articles can focus on your strengths and write more about daily interactions.

I looked at the writer level, lv5 but then I looked at the score of this book, it seems to be a mess I read a few chapters and commented after reading it. First of all, let's talk about the character of the protagonist. I know the author is a female author, but the male protagonist written in a male channel should not be too stupid, at least he should combine knowledge with action. Several of your previous books had this kind of problem. For example, you set up a character who is a scumbag, but you ended up writing a person who behaves and thinks very strangely. He is a scumbag but not a scumbag, and he is pure but not pure. He is written as a big fool. This is called character failure. The male protagonist's character failure is much more serious than the heroine's failure, and readers will run away a lot. The second is the logic of the plot. Don't give the characters a God's perspective. Don't give the characters a God's perspective. The plot will be too rigid and awkward, and will lose the sense of substitution. Then the reader's mentality may become that of having fun. In this way, the characters in the plot are no different from puppets, and there is a lack of logic. I think this shouldn't be a mistake that lv5 authors can make. Finally, the essence of the male channel is to have a good time all the way. Don't bring the bloody plot of the female channel (I don't know about this one, I haven't read it later) Let's talk about this one again, the old rules, let's talk about the three golden chapters. After reading four chapters, the first three chapters did not follow the plot and were quite bland, but the characters did not seem to be established, the introduction was bland, and the title of the book was average, which would be very discouraging for new readers. But it does not prevent fans of the author from reading it. But it seems that book fans don't buy it... So the author should polish it up, come on

Is this because the blind date was successful and they went to fall in love? ? How do you fall in love at your age? Listen to me, get up and code quickly!

What's going on with this book? It shouldn't be so overwhelming. Many toxic data are better than this one. I think the writing is okay.

There are so few people, I guess it's because the track of the rebirth love story is too winding, and I can't finish it without some abstract gameplay.

It looks great, but the data feels so bad. Don't worry, I will always support it. The writing is really to my liking.

The heroine didn't have an ex or a relationship record in her previous life. Can the author give me an accurate answer? I've seen several rebirths do this kind of setting, but I'm going to say it later. The kind of book with good writing is equivalent to eating delicacies from the mountains and the sea and suddenly feeding them to you⑩

This book is of such high quality, why is its popularity so low? Maybe it's a matter of personal taste. I feel that many books of the same type on the bestseller list are not as good as this one. Is it because the word count is too few? Oilfish sauce, you need to reflect on it.

After reading the beginning, I knew why this book was not popular. Things like rebirth are illusory, and the author made it too deliberate, as if the protagonist can predict the future.

If I could be reborn, I would never get married if I had no money. If I had money, I would find an obedient wife like Shen Liushu.