The Mystery of Screenwriting

After catching up to the latest chapter of this book, it is obvious that the author still wants to take the path of the mastermind behind the scenes, but compared to the previous book, which took too big a step, this time it is much more restrictive. The protagonist's ability in the previous book improved too quickly, and the goal set by the author at the beginning was too small. As a result, the protagonist's ability can fully achieve the goal later, but the overall plot actually feels like it can continue to be extended. Secondly, the division of combat power in the previous book was not rigorous enough, and the settings of various organizations were not detailed enough, which also made it impossible to continue writing in the later period and had to be unfinished (of course it is much better than Eunuch). In fact, to put it bluntly, the development of the characters in the later books exceeded the author's initial expectations, resulting in the inability to grasp the rhythm, and he could only rely on occasional bursts of inspiration to write. This would only make writing very tiring, so it was also a wise move to leave the last book unfinished. After talking about the previous book, let's come to this book. As mentioned earlier, the author probably learned the lesson from the previous book that progressed too fast, so this time the role must have plot value, and cannot keep doing things like the previous book. This is also worthy of appreciation. This time the protagonist is not in a movie world, but a world similar to a parallel universe. I won't go into the specific plot, it's better for you to watch it yourself. This time the protagonist is no longer directly invisible like the previous one, but appears more frequently. The plot is okay, it feels like watching an urban literary copycat, and the writing is relatively reasonable. It is not a direct copy, but a selection based on the background of the times. I have always had a question, how did the protagonist remember so many movie plots? Could it be that he was really a screenwriter in his previous life, so he re-wrote it based on his impressions? I haven't seen an explanation yet. Of course, it's possible that I missed it. After all, it doesn't affect reading if I don't know. Next, let's talk about the key things. This time the author did not directly use the ready-made plot, but made slight modifications by himself. In fact, it was just a mix and match. Of course, this is still in the early stage, and the mix and match is not very strong. I'm looking forward to the later scenes of werewolves fighting Maoshan Taoist priests. Of course, I don't know whether the author will let the reality created by the protagonist develop on its own, or whether every alien activity must be arranged by the protagonist. If it's the latter, then I feel like the book's enjoyment has dropped a notch, and I hope it's not like this. There are only four plots for the time being. I personally like the first and third ones better. I think they are quite interesting to write. Although the first plot is very short, the horror and madness is still very eye-catching. The second one I didn't like very much. I couldn't even tell the names clearly while watching it. In this kind of short plot, it's really difficult to tell who the author is describing. Sometimes both men and women get into the plot without understanding. After all, it's original and not a familiar character. In addition, the plot did not appear again after only a few chapters, so it was a bit hazy, so I suggest that the author pay more attention to the plot arrangement in the future. I think the third plot is the most exciting so far. It really feels like watching a blockbuster movie. It is well written and has a good setting. After watching it, I feel that this is the right direction for the development of the protagonist's abilities. It's also very interesting to create the characters here. I won't spoil the details. You can see for yourself. However, the excessive plot at the end is really boring. Maybe it's because it's like eating ordinary food after tasting something delicious! Anyway, I didn't watch that part seriously. If there is another plot like this after it is released, I don't really want to subscribe. It's okay to go too far, but I hope these plots can be more closely connected with what the protagonist is doing, without causing a serious sense of separation. I'm still watching a fantasy blockbuster earlier, and later I'm going to have a banquet and entertainment in an urban novel. If you can abbreviate it, just abbreviate it! It's not that you can't have excessive plots. For example, in the third plot, the hotel uncle delivering the meal was very interesting. He made the stingy and greedy uncle very vivid, and he also used this character to add a little lubricant to the plot. But the banquet entertainment is really not interesting. Coming to the fourth plot, I won't say more about this content. It's just that after watching it, I felt a little hesitant to talk. I felt that the plot this time was not worth spending so many plot points. And it doesn't match the style of the third plot very well. If the previous one was an orthodox dark and magical style, this time it has become a crazy and mysterious style. In my opinion, it would be interesting if it were set to be ordinary neurosis and antisocial personality caused by some reason, but in the end it was because of a prop, which made it a little less interesting. Of course, there is no doubt about the author's writing style. It is much improved compared to the previous book, but the typos are much correct compared to the previous book! Hope to have a good check. Finally, let's discuss the later development of this book! According to the current situation, the author should be planning to follow a Western fantasy background route, which will not involve too much superpowers. I feel it is best not to do that, because adding superpowers and science fiction will be too abrupt. Of course, biochemical ones will not have much impact. However, it's up to the author himself! Maybe I can write a different feeling too! After all, the fusion of the author's previous book is actually quite interesting. I am mainly worried about whether the author has prepared an outline, because without an outline, each piece of the plot may be separated, and then there will definitely be a situation where the previous book cannot be written in the later stage. If there is an outline, then at least a reasonable ending can be obtained in the later stage. The above is just my personal opinion. If there are any shortcomings, you can add them. Don't criticize, and I don't want to guide the author to write a book. I just want to express my own opinions. Whether or not you adopt the idea depends on the author. Even if you do, I still hope that the author will stick to his own ideas as much as possible. The details can be changed, but the main content still has to be decided by himself.

After reading Chapter 80, I want to leave! After seeing it now, I personally feel that the story and writing style written by the author are still very good, and I have the desire to read it! But please forgive me, a person who lives in a peaceful era, the actions of the protagonist are contrary to my three values ​​! The protagonist only relies on his own personal preferences (it was written earlier that the protagonist likes horror movies, so the screenwriter is weird) and the screenwriter is weird and kills innocent people (don't say I am a virgin bitch, am I clear? Chu)! If the protagonist has to do this because it is related to his own life, I have nothing to say. After all, don't persuade others to be good without suffering from others! Or sacrificing a group of people in order to let more people live, this is normal! But this kind of harming others just for his own pleasure and entertainment, what is the difference between the protagonist and a perverted murderer! Sorry, I can only see this! However, the plot written by the author is very exciting, and this is the truth!

This book truly makes people sleepier the more they read it. If there is no reasonable feedback, it will be difficult to read an online article. Fighting monsters, upgrading, and experiencing setbacks are all feedback systems similar to RPG games. The protagonist continues to become stronger. , Collection, this is reader feedback, the plot is the driving force, this book belongs to the protagonist who keeps writing the story, ignoring the feedback, after hundreds of chapters, the protagonist is as weak as a chicken, even with millions of plot points at hand, it is still a weak chicken, even if you get a few side-effect props, superhero transformation potions and the like, it will not be like this. Although the reality is also generally good, money, status, and the changes in the protagonist's situation are more attractive than the main plot. There are many plots, but none of them are good. It's not that the writing is bad, but the author has separated the readers from the plot. The readers rely on the protagonist to bring emotions. The author has stripped away the protagonist, but the behind-the-scenes flow is not well written. The interaction between the protagonist is too low, and the background is not there. He is just an outsider, but this outsider has not done anything yet. It seems to have gained a lot. In fact, the so-called millions and hundreds of thousands of plot points cannot bring any emotions to the readers, because the protagonist is not used to do anything, or does very little. Although Raising All Humanity discourages players and lacks common sense, the interaction between the protagonists is very good. I suggest that the author not to strip away the protagonist too much. The protagonist should at least arrange something to do. Don't exchange for nothing, at least something useful, a necklace with huge side effects, a potion that reaches the limit of the human body, and gloves that are useless. To be honest, it's ridiculous. The main character is so lacking in motivation.

I always feel that the protagonist's mentality is too good. In the real-world script that I edited, I don't feel the death at all. The protagonist is just a screenwriter. It feels like a murderer. Also, what is this protagonist trying to do? You have no dreams or pursuits, just for your own fun, editing copies to kill a bunch of people?

In the setting of the protagonist, the mysterious world disappeared for a long time due to the great purge. But now that the mysterious world has re-entered everyone's eyes, he shouldn't just appear directly and throw out a lot of settings. If it were written like that, it would be a complete failure. The way the author writes now is very good. The mysterious world now appears in everyone's eyes for various reasons. The things they come into contact with, the mysterious things, are just the "aftermath" of mysterious events one after another. The government got a glimpse of the mysterious world, but has no idea what happened. This is a story that conforms to the logic of normal reality. I hope the author can continue writing, and it would be better to have a sudden war, so that the world of normal people has no idea what is happening, but the war in the mysterious world is in full swing.

Give me a suggestion For the sake of convenience, all people who deal with exceptions are called employees To strengthen the strength of employees, you can first not strengthen their own strength, that is, add extraordinary, use various weapons left over from the past, or obsessions left by ghosts. It can be strengthened with objects, or prayers and rituals, which can easily suppress the combat effectiveness without being obtrusive. It is similar to that of Lobotomy Corporation. Each kind of legacy has its own special function and price. Of course, this author has been writing about it, which is absolutely fine, but the ones given to employees must not have side effects. Recommend 3 games for reference. Esoteric Cult Simulator, Lobotomy Company, Hunting Showdown. I won't mention The One True Witcher 3, since it's already here.

For a novel to have ups and downs and be captivating, it needs big events. Big events that are exciting and not mechanical can greatly promote the plot. Why don't we think about the existing materials and come up with some interesting ideas to give the author some inspiration Let me start first. The voodoo doll is made from a piece of demon hair and other materials. So what settings can be used for the voodoo doll? It will not be abrupt after adding it First of all, some people say that it is just to curse others? Voodoo dolls are the most famous for this, but as a big event, it is difficult to give participants an unexpected and reasonable feeling What if the voodoo dolls are actually invented by Haitian voodoo shamans to avoid evil spirits with the help of curses? Because it contains a devil's hair, you can use the devil's power to cast a curse, and because it contains a devil's hair, the devil cannot find the wizard unless you see it with your own eyes. The voodoo doll is actually a way for Haitian shamans to use voodoo curses to avoid debts (the old unlucky devil from hell is being betrayed every day) The big event starts with an investigator taking the voodoo doll to find the supernatural. After the incident, I met a demonic cultist, and then used a voodoo doll to use a curse in front of the statue, but the demon looked at me Investigator's attack mode, holding the voodoo doll mascot hanging on the investigator's shoulder with one hand and waving a trident with the other to curse the cultist. The investigator took out his pistol and hit the cultist continuously (when a person is unlucky, a hundred people can't even beat one person, well it's not your fault) Then a big incident started. Not only did he destroy the sacrificial rituals of his followers, run orders, and smashed his idols, but he was also arrogant and didn't take himself seriously The devil vowed to kill the Haitian shaman, and then asked all believers to kill the Haitian shaman. If they couldn't do it, they would all die (the devil's work is so inhumane) The investigators were inexplicably involved in the big incident Legendary Investigation Ethan Occupation: Voodoo Gunslinger A crappy Haitian shaman who owns a voodoo doll, well actually not at all, he just accidentally obtained a special voodoo doll that the voodoo shaman used to hide from debts. He can use the power of the demon attached to the voodoo doll to use curses, because the amount is so small that the demon does not even realize that it was borrowed Investigator's Voodoo The poison doll was obtained by chance. At first, it was just a souvenir for his daughter during a business trip to Haiti. Later, when the voodoo doll was playing with his daughter, he discovered that it was actually alive At first, Ethan planned to burn the doll, but was stopped by his daughter (because his wife died early, and he lacked time to take care of his daughter due to work. His daughter has always been mildly autistic, and the voodoo doll is her first friend) Out of love The daughter's guilt and the fact that she really couldn't fuck the voodoo doll caused her to fall down many times in the process Later, the daughter screamed and the voodoo doll and Ethan stopped attacking each other, and then under the daughter's intimidation?? Apologized to each other In fact, the two were quite uncooperative at first, and even competed to watch the TV The intervention in the big incident was because the daughter was going to school and Ethan prohibited the voodoo doll from following her, and then The voodoo doll was bored at home alone, so it secretly hid in Ethan's bag the next day and followed him to his workplace. Ethan was stunned at the time and threatened not to move, and then stuffed the doll into his clothes Later, he was shot during the investigation, and escaped under the protection of the voodoo doll. The reason was that when the voodoo doll was playing with the little girl, he heard his daughter say a lot about how much she likes her father, and he didn't want her to be sad. Taking this as an opportunity, Ethan began to accept the voodoo dolls Then there was a family interaction as usual. Their father and daughter and the voodoo dolls became good family members Participation in the big event content: What happened after a father found out that his daughter was caught by a cult? He took a rag doll and a pistol and banished a demon believed by thousands of people back to hell

I think the author should not be so hasty to write some "big scene" plots, and slowly spread the weird atmosphere from the people, so that the subsequent government agencies can find it more reasonable. Let's highlight a very scary thought: how many legends are true or false, and what happened to the people who disappeared in the wild... I have found the excuses for you: You don't think that those terrifying legends of vampires and werewolves are really just people's imagination, right? They are hidden deep around us, in the forest and on dark street corners... They never leave, but they only make those who encounter them never able to speak. The survivors live in the torture of darkness all their lives and try their best to forget that memory. Only when they die do they reveal the terrifying part to their families... Therefore, it is not necessary to let the people among them survive. They are all in the United States, so they are afraid of a hammer and it is over. Anyway, their death notes, audio recordings, videos and even bloody words can promote development. Think about the official investigation later to discover these so-called disappearance cases. How numb would the policeman's scalp be... I think we can slowly cultivate the characters from small scenes to get in touch with the dark side. For example, the father who studied folk culture and became obsessed was considered to be delusional. After the originally happy family fell apart, he stubbornly took his young children with him. Looking for the so-called truth to prove myself, I finally met the real thing. If the child survives, he will inherit his legacy and redress his father's injustice when he grows up. However, because he was too young, his memory is blurred and many details are lost, such as how he survived... And his father's death. What did I say when I hugged myself before... It would be easy if it was a father. He was obsessed with revenge and chasing that damn shadow, which made him a human being and a ghost. The extreme point was that he was forced to bear the crime of killing his own child, and he was imprisoned in a mental hospital for several years because he was judged to be insane. Doesn't he look good with this kind of persona? I like it very much! In my eyes, what makes the novels about the behind-the-scenes mafia flow better is actually the initial period when fantasy and reality collide, the thrill of pushing through the clouds and taking control of everything. Therefore, the author does not have to be too eager to push the mystery. I hope the author can see that there must be strong behind-the-scenes style and the storyline must be deep. The current plot is equivalent to directly saying to the government: Hey! I'm here, you idiot, you haven't noticed that I'm stupid, it doesn't make any difference. Finally, let's add some details to so many words.

The protagonist's thoughts and actions lack purpose. They are all for the sake of plot. What's the point of the protagonist doing things like this? Fun? Not fun. Very boring!

How can a good novel lack idioms? Let me go first. The screenwriter is mysterious.