Writing Myths

It is a good book with a great setting. However, the writing style is a bit unfamiliar and does not express well the awe, curiosity and fear that a mortal encounters with the extraordinary. Here is a small suggestion. The author can learn from the writing style of the book "The Reborn Dominator" (I do not mean to plagiarize, just learn from it). The feeling of opening up the world written in this book is great.

Is this the book written by the author who promised to publish 100,000 words at once? Why is it so short?

This book is one of the better among the mythological revival articles I have read recently 😭

Who can tell me what the Nine Songs God System is?

Does the author of the new contract have any ideas? Does he want to cut it off?

The author's writing style is really good, and he has accumulated a lot of knowledge. What he writes is interesting to read. Even if you put aside the plot and just look at the popular science and settings, it is still an excellent spiritual recovery article. But as a behind-the-scenes article, the protagonist's presence, or the protagonist is more like a tool man. It seems that most of the time, the protagonist starts the game, and then just sits back and does nothing. When something goes wrong, he comes out to clean up the situation. If there is no problem, he puts the dungeon aside and opens the next dungeon. The previous characters are written as plot tools, and they are put aside after they are used up. Let's talk about group portrait dramas, but group portraits also need to focus on the characters to describe the group portrait. There is a central character or a central point to promote the group portrait description. The existence of the protagonist seems very cool and NB, but after thinking about it carefully, it seems that anyone can do the same as this protagonist, and there is no sense of mission that must be done by him. Not participating in the game from the perspective of the whole process, I really have no sense of immersion. It is more like reading a book like a matryoshka doll. The protagonist is the reader, and I am the reader watching the book that the reader reads. As for the supporting characters, both in terms of the country's response and the reaction of the onlookers, they are quite intelligent. Sometimes the reaction can even be said to be excellent. But when an excellent supporting character is used up, he puts it down and changes to another supporting character to continue writing. It is so dizzying that I don't even remember the existence of several supporting characters. A good characterization wasted. As for the world view, it can be seen that the author has a big plan and wants to build different pantheons through different domestic literary works and enrich the world view of the work. But in terms of progress, the progress of the work is really too slow. It took so long to write the Nine Songs God System and it has not yet been completed. Moreover, the Nine Songs God Department does not have a particularly heavy proportion in domestic theological works. This means that there are still many God systems waiting to be perfected. While I am looking forward to the world view of the work, I am also worried about whether the author can control this huge world. Finally, I wish the author can become a hit. After all, there really aren't many seedlings left behind the scenes. Most of them were either 404'd or eunuched by the author because of indifferent subscriptions. I still hope that this book can be completed gloriously.

Why does the preface of the latest chapter not match the postscript?

Mythology revival novels have always been relatively popular. There are countless novels in this category, but so far there are no masterpieces, and very few have even been completed. Most of them died halfway. Although there was a book on The Way of the God in the past two years, to be honest, that novel has many shortcomings, which can be said to be a common problem in this type of novels. The first is the compatibility issue of the mythology system. When Eastern mythology and Western mythology appear together, they appear to be nondescript anyway. There are many Eastern gods and goddesses, a hundred ghosts walk at night, and Western angels come to the world. At first glance, they are like books on the street. Therefore, it is best for the gods to be relatively similar, the functions of the gods should not overlap with each other, and the most important thing is that the style of painting should be the same. The second is the training system. It is best to have a complete and unique upgrade system or level setting. This is very important. Take Squid as an example. The upgrade systems in all his books are very complete, and upgrades are conditional. This is reflected in various rituals in Lord of Mysteries. Here I have to complain about the current immortality novels. You can practice and upgrade at will. There is no fundamental difference between each realm. You only need to take medicine. This kind of unclear setting is a taboo. The third is the plot design. The protagonists in such novels are usually the masterminds behind the scenes, leading the revival of the myth. Of course, a lot of ink is also spent on the supporting characters to show the changes of the times from their perspectives. Therefore, it is very important to how to handle the scenes between the protagonist and the main supporting characters in the description process. What's more important is that there must be a core, which is why the protagonist does what he does, what benefits it has to the protagonist, and what is the most fundamental conflict in the book. If it is just to become stronger, even if it is to become a eunuch or to be unfinished. Many novels of this type reach one hundred to two hundred chapters, and there is no way to continue writing. This is the problem. Now this book only has more than 30 chapters. It has chosen the Jiu Ge divine system that almost no one has written about. The main character's IQ is also very online. The writing is really good. I hope the author will not go to the palace. Come on. The above are just random remarks. After all, I am just a reader. I don't understand how the author writes a book. I just saw a beginning that I liked very much. I was afraid that it would fall into a cliche, so I couldn't help but complain. Don't blame me.

Classic of Mountains and Seas ☆*:.｡. O(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆

Open a discussion thread to discuss a common topic in Shinto novels - merit. What do you think? What is merit? Is it necessary to divide it into multiple merits? Heavenly merit? Humane merit? If divided, how should different merits be divided?

The novel is okay so far, but its biggest problem is the description of national power. It is poor. The most obvious thing is that the description of national power and leadership is too poor. Some of the country's violent machines are described as if they are like kittens scratching their paws. The same goes for high-level leaders of a country. The description turned into a fight between a few people, and the top leader of the special department arranged by the state was described as rushing to the front line like an agent. The country's weapons seemed to have no threat other than nuclear bombs. Can you watch a military movie? The rest of this book is okay, but the description of the country is too poor. I don't know if the author deliberately didn't write it because he was afraid of river crabs, or if he really realized that the country is only so weak.,,,

There is another one, which is my personal suggestion. If the author wants to write about myths other than the Nine Songs system, he might as well choose one that fewer people have written about. Just like Greek mythology, Nordic mythology, and things like the mummies and pharaohs in Egyptian mythology, the bull-headed horse-face in Chinese mythology, etc., Try to avoid writing about them. Too many people have written these. 😂 Not only are people writing about myths or spiritual energy recovery, but they are also writing about other supernatural and fantasy genres. It's almost visual fatigue. The following is a personal recommendation: The traditional underworld system (cow-headed horse-faced, ten palaces of Yama) can be replaced by the Taishan Fujun system (this is obviously less popular than the one above) Foreign mythological systems can be tried American Mayan mythology, Andean mythology (Quetzalcoatl, human sacrifice), Yamato mythology in East Asia (that is, Japan's native mythology system), Goryeo shamanism, Brahman belief (Vedic mythology) in South Asia-in the Indian mythology system, Mesopotamian mythology in West Asia, Canaanite mythology, Celtic mythology in Western Europe (such as King Arthur and Cu Chulainn are from here), etc.

12.6 Let me say it, this article was obviously not forced to finish. Many of the articles I followed were directly 404ed. Those authors either wrote in another place or waited until they were released. If it hits a red line, it needs to be revised, but it doesn't go that far, because like other articles, the outline can be cut in China and transferred abroad. After following the series for so long, what I know is that the author's outline only has the domestic follow-up Interstellar and so on, and it has been cut. It is no longer written in China, so it is in this unfinished state now. Due to the slow update of this book, it is probably the shortest of the daily chapters I have ever seen. It often has 5 pages and 6 pages. Readers have been unable to accumulate it, so the profit is not good. When I first ordered all the books, it ranked 270th without any reward (but readers who have followed the behind-the-scenes novels should know that this is already pretty good). When an author writes a new article, it's not about whether it's suitable or not, but the author must have a complete outline and update speed. If the outline is incomplete, I've never read one that's not finished or monitored. The update is too slow and there are not many people subscribing. If the author doesn't care about money, it doesn't matter. If you want to earn some coding fees, you must save the manuscript. If readers don't accumulate, they will be lost. Finally, I hope the author will publish another book🔥. The quality of the writing is good. I really like this book, but the experience of following the series this time is really bad. —————————————————————— It's a pity. I think this book is pretty good in the behind-the-scenes story. It's a pity that the author sucked it up, and it ends directly. It's not conducive to readers to accumulate goodwill. 🙄 If the author wants to start a new article, he should think clearly and stop it from being unfinished, otherwise even the great masters cannot afford to lose popularity like this. No matter what the subscription is at the beginning, if you plan to keep writing, readers will naturally be willing to support it if it is not unfinished or unsupervised. 😅

If you have a favorite mythological system or mythical character, you can leave a message on this post. Bailu will take a small notebook and remember it carefully The format is as follows: Character: Shao Siming Source: Jiuge Mythology Character: Hydra/Hydra Source: Greek Mythology

To be honest, the author wrote it well, but the inheritance from another world is not controlled by pig's feet, so it feels like it has dropped to a big level. I don't know what you think, author! In this type of novel, pig's feet control everything, which makes it feel more powerful and more beautiful.

Praise you, the one who always does whatever you want

Are the forces of these countries a little too rampant? Whether they are directly attacking the big demon or blocking the Moon God Blessed Land, are they a little unwise when they already have a general understanding of the power of the gods?

After watching Shangui Ending, I found that apart from the setting, there are no highlights. The protagonist has been in the dark all the time, with no sense of existence at all. All I watched were one-man shows by supporting actors. If it is a routine to lay out the world, the protagonist had better come out to show his face, otherwise there is really nothing to see.

It feels pretty good-looking. That's why most of them are for humans. Mountain ghosts can be given to trees and animals. Hebo's can be given to some fish, shrimps, crabs, etc., All of which are given to humans. I feel very uncomfortable when I look at them.

Coming

What's the point of the author writing about the undead in mythology? Warriors treat mortals as rubbish, let alone gods.

Personally, what is the most beautiful thing about Lingqi Fushuwen? It lies in the various social situations, international forms, world changes, and class fluctuations under the revival of spiritual energy. It is almost a group portrait. The book is well written and the class face is okay, but why is it not popular?

As long as it's not close to some prehistoric species, I actually don't care. When writing a book like this, the system of various gods needs to be balanced, so that it will read well. Let me complain, Pangu is a character who can throw a lot of money into the world. His mythology was formed so late, but he has become a mainstream mythology. Great gods such as Nuwa Houtu of the Sanqing Dynasty (the Emperor of the Earth after Chengtian followed suit), are the protagonists. Sun Wukong, all kinds of regrets and praises. A man-eating monster (written in the original work "Three Strikes of Bone Demons"), the underworld is used to judge good and evil and for reincarnation. You have to admit that the underworld is beneficial to heaven and earth, but in the end he disrupts the order of the world. Heaven is the structure of heaven and earth, which is equivalent to our government. It has great merits for the world. However, he disrupted Heaven because of his dissatisfaction, and even wanted to be the Jade Emperor. He has high ambitions and low hands. This is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it! ! !

Ever since Olympus came out, I started watching it

The author's writing style is good and the writing is beautiful. However, the official attitude in the article is somewhat deliberately antagonistic. The protagonist in the article is trying to seduce the official's appetite in the name of cooperation, and he turns the official show around. It seems that his methods are superb, but I feel uncomfortable watching it. If you want to cooperate, cooperate well and list the conditions and provide benefits. There is really no need to be secretive for fear that the country will take advantage of you. Just take a few precautions.

The spirit is still curled up, but the death is far away. Jian will come to the longevity palace, and the sun and the moon will shine together. The dragon rides on the emperor's clothes, chatting and flying around Zhou Zhang. The spirit emperor has descended, and the scorpion has been lifted up from afar into the clouds. There is plenty to see in Jizhou, but there is nothing to behold across the four seas. I miss my husband too much, and I am very tired and worried.

From the beginning when the God Crow ran to Asan Kingdom, it felt weird. Then to the plot after the Olympus God System came out, the layout was very average. I don't know if it was because of the God of Harmony that the author couldn't write what he wanted to write, or the framework was too big to control, and the flavor changed a bit.

Is this the rhythm of burning paper when something happens? , It's been half a year, and no new book has been published yet

By the way, does the boss have a book club?

It's a pity, I still liked this book very much at the beginning