An Old Ape in Taihe Mountain

How should I put it? You just led the cow for me, and you ran to the Zhunti gate with the monkey. Isn't it a little bit

Is there something wrong with your introduction? You followed me to the west and went to Hanguan, and you even went to worship Bodhi as your teacher.

After reading the introduction and the first few chapters, the protagonist can be regarded as a disciple of Laozi, but in the end he went to study with Subhuti. Why don't you consider the actual situation? Is it because he lacks martial arts or supernatural powers? Just for the sake of drama

The protagonist follows Wukong to heaven, and the Jade Emperor makes him a guest. The author says that this guest is a loose immortal, who is very leisurely, and takes this opportunity to get in touch with Jie Jiao. The Jade Emperor treats the protagonist well. At this time, the protagonist is dominated by the author's feelings and follows the monkey brother in the author's mind to return to heaven. As a result, the protagonist's previous image of a polite and humble Taoist priest has changed into an image of a wild and hypocritical monk. After all, Wukong just didn't understand the etiquette and was tricked into going to heaven instead, just because of his love. As for the protagonist, he clearly understands the etiquette and laws, clearly understands the causes and consequences of calamity, and was obviously a Taoist priest in his previous life. Now, he is just sitting on the fence and being ungrateful. The key is to unconsciously think about the self-awareness of the protagonist of calamity. That is really a breakdown of the character 🤔

This plot setting is poisonous. This Yue girl, Qing, became the inner demon of the protagonist. He turned around and left with Sun Wukong. I was speechless.

You have already led the cows for "I", and you still go to worship "Bodhi" as your teacher. Does "I" don't want to lose face?

If I am so good at it, why would I go to Bodhi?

It looks good, travels around the world, slays demons, and learns the skills of the Monkey King, no female protagonist! ! ! ! ! Come on! ! ! !

Don't follow the monkeys to pray to Bodhi, have an adventure and go to Taiqing's sect, and then follow the individual route

There have been too many prehistoric times, can you still turn things around? Can you write better than The Holy Way? Concentrating on writing about a simple world view is no better than this suture monster.

Is the setting of Abbot Kongxuan as Daluo Jinxian too high?

To be honest, the routine is a bit old, and the connection is not very good. It feels like a running account.

In ancient times, you would bully your master and destroy your ancestors, and everyone who saw you would help kill you, and it would be like losing your soul.

The eunuch entered the palace. There is one more person in the palace😅

Is this writing a book? All of them are the original text of Journey to the West.

Please change the paragraph format again. It's too long. It's very tiring to read.