A Wage Earner Rises in Another World

After reading the latest chapter, I found that it was not without reason that the protagonist became a wage earner with a debt of more than 5 million. It would be abnormal for him not to be a wage earner with a debt of more than 5 million. The author's writing is very reasonable! For example, the Gelongmon that the protagonist worked so hard to raise was raised for a neighbor. After raising it, was it sent back for free? It's not like you can't afford the main character, why don't you just buy a batch of them and raise them yourself? Do you have to work for others for free? And that time when building an airplane, the protagonist used his superpower to help his friend build the airplane, and then the friend was grateful and handed over 30% of the shares of the aircraft factory to the protagonist. Isn't this normal? I provide the technology, you provide the money, and we all make money together, but the protagonist refuses. He directly refuses, exchanges the shares for an airplane, and then leaves happily. I don't understand the protagonist's mindset! The protagonist is really a modern man, why does he act like a gentleman who is ashamed to talk about money?

You need 500 fan points to speak... But there's nothing you can do about it. I feel uncomfortable holding some words in my heart if I don't say them out loud. This reward of 500 points is a sign of understanding that it's not easy for the author to code. First of all, the values ​​in this book are really exaggerated for the sake of exaggeration. . . . Sometimes the numerical value is too exaggerated, which really affects the senses, and makes people feel that it is too unreal and has no sense of substitution. (ps: The following is my personal opinion, please do not take it seriously) If the one-light-year continent can be turned into a slightly larger alien world planet, the number of alien pioneers will be reduced. Then, there will be less political drama involved (the political drama written in the author's book is really hard to describe in one sentence...) Then the planet exploded, maybe it was changed to, the star gate we traveled through was closed, and there was no way to go back. Appropriately reduce the force value of the different world. Then, the millions of people from the Development Bureau who live in another world (the number of people has been reduced from 30 million to one million) rely on the preliminary industrial foundation. Even if they build weapons after World War II and before the Cold War, they can still rely on technology to maintain their superiority in front of people from other worlds. And nuclear bombs are still used as the ultimate deterrent weapon. And the quantity is not large, use one less one. In this way, if the natives from another world dare to resist, the game between them and the pioneers will be even more exciting. The army of aliens is maintained in the millions, preferably not exceeding tens of millions. The war scenes are described in detail. The war scenes in the book are a bit too childish. . . I believe I am not the only one who feels this way. Thousands of nuclear bombs will be dropped from the mouth, causing 50 million casualties.       …       ，，， This value is too illusory... It is easy for readers to have no idea about this value. Furthermore, the author did not create a good concept of magic in the early stages.                                                                                                                                                                               The role of magic in some conventional things, which the author has not written out in detail, such as mutual communication and mutual command between armies, magic is more decentralized to civilians, and magic communication and the like have been developed. This will further facilitate the use of magic communication and command of the army.)      (Looking at the author's early description, it is obvious that an empire with a population of 5 billion is like a feudal aristocratic system in the European Middle Ages... Anyway, I can't imagine how to effectively manage an empire with a population of 5 billion by relying on such a Shinra-like system. More effectively, an army of 500 million people can be organized in a short time... Even if there are magicians, the country's constitution and the system are there... It's too trivial...) ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ It feels like a child's play to have an army of 500 million with just one mouth... So I said at the beginning, reduce all the numerical values ​​to make it look more realistic. The war scene does not need to be big at the beginning, just some small fights will do. In the early stage, the author can focus on describing how the protagonist uses super powers to farm and develop his own farm. Just like the lord article, it's just an example. Then after reaching a certain number of words, basically the same world view and various settings about magic are almost laid out. You can go deeper. At this time, we can have a million-level battle. Then introduce higher-level settings. Basically, that's it. I'm writing as I think about it. It may be a little messy, but you can understand it. It would be nice for everyone to take a look at some of my immature personal thoughts.

Come on, author, it's very interesting. The author is really creative.

It can be understood that the protagonist and his fellow villagers went out to work, and several fellow villagers made enemies. The enemy burned the village where the protagonist and fellow villagers lived, and killed all the villagers. However, the protagonist and some fellow villagers do not have much hatred for the villagers who burned down the villages and killed people. Instead, they have great hatred for the fellow villagers who have made enemies with others.

I really held my breath after reading the novel. I saw how decisively the magicians from another world fought. After discovering the enemy, they immediately collected a large amount of precious magic materials, and then wiped out the 8 billion people of Blue Star with one ultimate magic move. This is a war of races, be as brutal as you want. It's also thanks to the fact that there are not enough precious spell-casting materials in the other world. Otherwise, the next spell will give absolute priority to destroying the entire Xia clan's forces in the other world. Then the Xia people were still there with the Holy Mother. We deceive ourselves and others into thinking that we are all good people, and those who do bad things are the multinational alliance, and are all implicated by the multinational alliance.

The main setting is full of flaws as soon as it is written. The history of a race that is hundreds of millions of years old is too pale and simple. For example, since the World Tree evolved into marine and aquatic creatures, why are the elves still accustomed to eating land-based food, and are still like road elves, without evolving into the naga fish-man form? If the theory of evolution is invalid, then how did the big trees evolve? If you can't do it, don't force it. Simply write down some glorious past, just write it off in one stroke. This is not a racial aftertaste, just write it as a small branch. Because of the disaster, the World Tree is also a terrestrial species, so when you escape at sea, you will be harmed due to the unsuitable environment. The biggest poisonous point of this book is here. The world view is very grand and exaggerated, but the author is not skilled enough and the compilation is not round. Since the compilation is not round, it is recommended not to forcefully set a race and a world clearly, blur, and nuance it, otherwise the sense of dissonance will be strong.

What I want to say is, you no longer have a backing, what qualifications do you have to trade with nobles from another world on an equal footing? Still developing? Anyone with some brains will turn all of you "Blue Star remnants" into slaves and rob you of whatever you want. Even 8 billion have been wiped out. Are you afraid that tens of millions of you "remnants" will resist? Do you know what Bai Pi did after he landed in America and defeated several indigenous empires? The Native Americans became slaves and prey directly, and all their resources and output went into the pockets of the white men. This was just before the colonization of the same race. The relationship between two species that cannot reproduce will only be more cruel. The subject matter is good, but the author's writing power is completely uncontrollable. It is a pity Don't use profits to challenge human nature. There is a sentence I like very much: there are only individuals who betray the class, and there is no class that betrays the class. The other world is completely dominated by feudal nobles. When a group of fat, oily and disarmed pigs are jumping around in front of them, can the greedy people in power resist catching the pigs back? As the saying goes, there is no diplomacy for the weak. When the largest backing of the people on earth is eliminated, these so-called colonists will become isolated wild boars, maybe with some tusks, but this is not the reason for hunters to give up pork Transactions only exist between equals. Will butchers negotiate deals with pigs? No! It will only catch the pig and squeeze out the last drop of oil and water!

Is this the power of a 5-star author? It is indeed terrifying! You are a pioneer, you develop peacefully with the indigenous people and have contacts with them. The other group were the colonists, who chose to enslave the indigenous population. You and the colonists are both from Earth. As a result, the natives ignored the earth and wiped out the planet, including your family, but you still wanted to blame the colonists instead of hating the natives. And there are 30 million of you like this, awesome!

It's strange, why do the characters in the author's works only hate the multinational alliance but not the indigenous people? It was the natives who destroyed their home!

The author's writing is okay, but it is too childish, and your hatred is in the wrong direction. The earth is an invader. As long as the earth's power develops to a certain extent, the powerful aliens will definitely take action. Even the nobles will not care about civilians. Do you think the star-killing powerful will care? And there is reproductive isolation. It is impossible for earth civilization to integrate into other worlds. Will you let orangutans integrate into human civilization? ? ? The multinational alliance only speeds up the time for the earth to be destroyed, and it is not the main reason. Why do you only hate the multinational alliance and think that it is reasonable for the alien world to destroy the earth? The alien strongman is a person with subjective consciousness, not a weapon. The first target of hatred should be the alien strongman no matter what. It is like Li went out to provoke others, and others came over and slaughtered your entire city. Then you ran to Li to avenge you, and then merged with others. What logic? Are you a weakling? Don't you have any sense of resistance? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?