Living in My Pocket World

Now the protagonist is completely out of the home setting. Obviously, you can slowly explore another world. When you are tired of exploring, you can go on a trip or attend some comic exhibitions to do handicrafts. It is so relaxing and relaxing. I have to forcefully write a few female characters and then be burdened by favors. There is also a Baiyudan incident in an organic vegetable and mineral water factory, which excessively increases the chance of exposure! I have read several similar novels written by the author before, and they all collapsed in the middle and late stages. I still can't change my old habits!

The author can consider a prefabricated house or an RV as a residence in another world. Compared with a simple shed or building a house by yourself, these feel more suitable. In addition, since the protagonist should also consider his own house in the real world, after all, as a rented house, some problems will arise sooner or later. Some small comments, for reference only

I'm here to scold the author. It's okay at the beginning, but what the hell is going on in the end? Is it worthy of your introduction? The promised home nickname? Did you agree to explore the portable space? The more you write, the uglier and more cliched it becomes. For new readers, I suggest you open the table of contents and take a look. You'll find it boring later. Goodbye.

The first comment on this book, if I hadn't voted for recommendation today, I would have voted for you, hmm, please add some fine points?

Returning to urban home-style writing, it will definitely become a high-quality product

If the author still writes like this, he will definitely be disappointed! Originally, it is a good book. If nothing else, it can at least allow readers to finish it and you can get some results! But what the hell did you write? Don't you see that there is something wrong with what you wrote? Or is this the kind of value you have? There is still a way to save it now, issue an apology, ① rewrite from the place where the female writer and heroine were accepted, reorganize the outline, and make it more normal. ② Rewrite the story from before the two heroines were pregnant, and find a reasonable excuse to send these two heroines away! To be honest, I really want to finish it, but I really can't stand your whole thing! As for the jewelry, that girl is more normal than these two heroines! Nothing! ! !

What is it like for a person with very upright views to read a novel that subverts his views? I am experiencing it now. Who asked me to subscribe to so many chapters? 😆😆😆 It would be a waste of money if I don't read it.

I immediately gave up the book after reading the harem, oh yeah

When I saw everyone scolding me, I felt relieved. Using poison to describe this book really matched the word perfectly.

I really don't know what the author was thinking. In the beginning, he portrayed a person who was very homely and didn't want to fall in love. Later, he changed too quickly, and he also had a harem. Wouldn't his personality be split? You either have a harem stud from the beginning, or you have a heroine who is single-minded and the theme is not clear. She can't stand it when she is not clear with Li. It's really disgusting. The first part is very gripping, but the second part is really unbearable and makes me vomit.