There's a Black Hole Inside Me

The writing was fine at the beginning, but things started to go wrong after about 50 chapters. The plot became more and more poisonous, and there were some interesting plots related to current affairs mixed in. It was like a layer of poison wrapped around the outside of the detoxification pill... It's a pity that your poison acts too fast, and the detoxification pill wrapped inside is still there. It didn't work but it turned poisonous I feel like there is a problem with the positioning of this book. Isn't it good to write about the development of a company? It has to be mixed in with the main line of trivial things that have no driving effect at all, and almost all of them are a little poisonous. Is it necessary? In the book reviews, I also saw a lot of people who gave up on the book, including me... 🙏 Farewell, I really can't stand it anymore

The author's poisonous point of giving money to people for no reason is indeed quite disgusting. It's not easy to reject someone. There's no need to give money. I feel a little bit stupid. The reason why I haven't given up on this book yet is because the author's story about family is actually interesting, and it feels like he has experienced it personally.

I came from The Sims. After reading Shuhuang at that time, my eyes lit up. The more I read, the more fascinated I became. I hope the author will not give up. You will definitely be the great god in the future.

Sci-fi sci-fi. It's all "fantasy" and no "science"

It's okay for the protagonist to engage in beauty treatments in the early stages, but beauty treatments actually require a doctor's certificate. Therefore, an art student must cooperate with a doctor to do cosmetology.

The protagonist is still too docile. What kind of longevity plan can be completed in twenty years? Logically speaking, if China can complete it in twenty years, the United States should almost have it. After all, the United States is more than ten or twenty years ahead of China in the fields of high-precision instruments and biomedicine. However, this is also science fiction level for the United States. Even ppt dare not say that. In addition, without changing genes, scientific research shows that the human lifespan limit does not exceed 150, between 130-150. This plan is too fantasy The boss behind the scenes has appeared again. What is the use of having this background after such a long time? It's just a sounding board. You have such a naughty existence, you owe your power to yourself, and you can live a good life outside China. It's not that you need the country, but the country needs you. As a result, it's like you are relying on others to live your life. From the beginning to the present, what has the country done to the protagonist in the book? Pay the protagonist for a project that he can't handle, and the money is not much, and let the protagonist build a photolithography machine, a major breakthrough in the field of high-precision science and technology... In the book, the government and the protagonist basically take advantage of the cooperation. The funniest thing is that the protagonist has developed so many high technologies and made such great contributions, but it seems that he can't live without clinging to a big boss. So what is the use of such awesome powers and such great contributions? The protagonist seems to be making money all the time. I don't understand the use of making so much money. The protagonist is now worth almost one trillion yuan. He still cares about money. He doesn't mainly consider enhancing his abilities or other things. He just focuses on making money. What's the difference between hundreds of billions and trillions? In the latest chapter, the man surnamed Xu also reminded not to get angry casually. Do you think God would be careful if he came to earth? How can you figure out your own strength without getting angry? Given such a great opportunity, he still restrains himself in every way. He can't do as he pleases, so he might as well go home and farm. The protagonist is always being used for free labor, and he doesn't get angry when he is bullied. This seems a bit aggrieved.

Now you can only speak if you have 300 followers. I subscribed to more than a dozen more posts because I just wanted to come here and say: This writing is getting more and more out of ideas! What a pity. Great creativity and early stage! Some content becomes more poisonous the more you watch it!

The author started the life-extending and bad-money mode. I will still subscribe, I just want to see how bad you can write this novel. After all, there's not much you can do if you're as bad as you are. I'm just telling the truth. Although this book is disgusting, I will still read it seriously.

The more you write, the better it gets. Did you just modify the outline and publish it? It makes me not want to subscribe anymore

Coming from The Sims, I feel that the author is a very thoughtful person, so don't let this sink in.

You can write about traveling to aliens, like the interstellar world of The Sims, or cultivating civilization. Life on earth has reached its peak, and the current chapters feel cliché.

I feel that the author is a contradictory person. He portrays the protagonist as a patriotic entrepreneur, but he seems so resistant when it comes to paying taxes. Just like the previous book, he always found some ways to evade taxes. Although the reality is similar, it is still very contradictory to write it like this. It is better not to write it. Another thing is that the transactions between large companies are a bit simple. After all, interests are above all else, and it is the nature of businessmen to pursue profits.

The creativity is still very good, but the character design is not likable 😅

The author's wife, Xia, is very good at first. Don't be fooled. Later, she became a queen and wanted to kill the protagonist. She raised a bunch of faces to put hats on the protagonist. It made me laugh to death.

Check out the genealogies of the big bosses and the Zeng family and the Ye family in the past two terms, and see if you still dare to say that there is no aristocratic family. As soon as Mao got out of class, he was already engaged in Xuanwumen activities. Several big bosses are able to rise to the top through marriage. Their descendants become county magistrates as soon as they come out. Upgrading only depends on time. You won't be able to reach that level even if you live to be 200 years old, because it's not suitable if you are older or younger.

Just finished reading the 9.8 Update. I just want to say that with the protagonist's IQ, let's just show it off. Let's just say, I am a black hole. I am not afraid of nuclear bombs or luxury single rooms, unless you kill me directly. But if you kill me, the earth will be gone. What will happen to the black hole that no one controls? You don't know, right? What is there to cover up? Who dares to kill you? Didn't you know you were the protagonist? Is this book still being written? As a protagonist, you should be arrogant. You can be domineering at one moment and cowardly at the other, which makes it uncomfortable to watch.

The more I write the more I write, the more stupid I become. I left and gave up.

I read so many chapters you wrote in a few hours. Author, do you understand what I mean?

The protagonist is now a child shopping with an artifact. Black holes are awesome, but the protagonist's room for manipulation is now limited. A gentleman does not stand behind a dangerous wall. In fact, everything he does now is under the attention of relevant departments. I not only want to make money, but also have a mentality that there are always unscrupulous people who want to harm me. The author also makes the same mistake that all authors have. I write what I imagine. It's also unrealistic not to read the comments. What you want to write may not necessarily be what the author below wants to see. Everyone who clicks to read your book wants to read about this subject, but what you write deviates from the public, and by then you won't be able to make even a small amount of money.

The creativity and plot development are really good, but none of the women around the male protagonist are reliable so far, and none of them is the perfect girlfriend in everyone's mind! The writing about the family is also a little weird! The author's ability to write about love is not bad at all! The biggest poisonous point is lending money to buy a house to a neighbor who is not a friend at all. After buying the house, he also provides monthly support. Later, in order to stop giving money, he helps arrange work. I think all readers will not be able to stand this plot. If the author wants this book to be popular, it is best to modify or delete this plot!

Why do I feel more and more stupid? How would such a powerful space fleet compromise so much because of a woman? There's really no need to drag down the word count. Just finish writing a new book when you've finished revising it. The few books I followed you all ended badly, I hope this one ends well.

In the latest chapter, there are 5 companies left, and Zhongxin International has all withdrawn. Is it because of foreign shareholders? The fiancée feels like she was a scheming bitch at the beginning, and now the author wants to clean it up? High school students are also turning into scheming bitches. The heroine in the author's novel is really unlikable. In the early stage, the cheats were exposed to speed up development. I think it's a bit more gain than loss.

Elderly people should draw key points! The boss has just died, and I feel that the protagonist cannot serve them alone. If he doesn't do this, he will use carelessness to suppress him and serve them in disguise. This is a temptation trap. And you can see if the protagonist's abilities include biological things.

This book shouldn't be about science fiction, it should be about the city. A black hole is just a waste for you to use. The protagonist is afraid that he really has no scientific research spirit at all. He has this thing in his body and shouldn't study it by himself. As a result, he has been obsessed with making money for a long time. This feels like Dr. Chen stopped studying and became a capitalist. Moreover, these female characters of yours are well described with several meanings, and all of them have boyfriends. Are you sincere and disgusting to us? I have to say you succeeded. Shennong is dead, and those who come after him should not try easily.

At the beginning, there were a lot of poisonous points. For example, he opened a beauty shop without any plan, and the neighbor girl borrowed money to buy a house in order to get their relationship back together. What do you think? Now that you have some money, you think money is easy to come by, right? If you don't think he is annoying, why don't you move out quickly, but you let his boyfriend buy a house? What kind of logic? It's amazing.

I always thought that mental poison was an adjective, but this book showed me that it is not.

The more you read this book, the more poisonous it becomes. You can just ask the protagonist to kill thousands of people. It is also a eunuch book. His desire for money is infinite and he is restrained in every possible way. You are really the best.

If female characters can't be written, they won't be written. The author succeeded in making me not have any favorable impression of him. Although it's not cliche, he has really made those characters "dead".

I really don't like this Chu Xia because she doesn't get along with the male protagonist. When I'm with her, he acts like a stupid idiot. What's more, what I can't accept the most is that the male protagonist only understands her appearance on the surface and doesn't hate her for being scheming. However, what the male protagonist likes is the Chu Xia he wants to like, not the real Chu Xia. It feels like the two of them were forced to get together.

The idea of ​​starting a high-tech industry is relatively clear. If we still engage in landfills as before, it is really better to be honest with the country directly, without restraining our hands, and really integrate our abilities with the development of the entire society. Garbage, recycling of non-recyclable materials in various senses, building railway tunnels and bridges, cancer and AIDS treatment, high-tech processing precise to the atomic level, anti-gravity technology brought about by black hole gravity research... It will bring about earth-shaking changes to the entire human race. Great rejuvenation, a community of destiny, etc. Are not dreams.