The Legend of the Ninja World Starting from Xiao Li's Flying Sword

The name of this book should be The Ace Taker of Konoha

The author is very thoughtful, and many of the settings are quite creative. The only one that makes people uncomfortable is Minato's setting. But after seeing the later, I probably know the author's idea, which is to take in Kushina and then hack Minato, but it is still uncomfortable.

I think it's okay. I've read a lot of invincible articles, so this is pretty good.

Minato Ru is really as jealous as the author wrote, looking down on people with low professional titles, so will he be called the Little Sun? Since we are reforming, what's wrong with listening to the voices from the bottom? Really forcefully create contradictions. Don't distort the characters of the original work too much when writing fanfics

After watching the first part, the rest was okay. I think the worst part is the protagonist's cognition. It's like a fourth-year political student who despises a third-year student, but in my eyes they are just half-assed! The protagonist despises Namikaze Minato, but in terms of his performance, he is not much better?

The author should not say that what he wrote is an enjoyable article. It is not enjoyable at all. The people the protagonist wanted to save either died or were captured. All the plans of his enemies were successful, and all the benefits that his enemies wanted were obtained. He even got more and became stronger because of the relationship with the protagonist. This is the reason why your book has poor performance.

Excellent in both medicine and poison!

Although the author has been emphasizing that this is a refreshing article, to be honest, after reading dozens of chapters, I didn't feel the slightest bit of satisfaction at all. Instead, I felt full of depression and aggrievedness! The vicious conspiracy of the top management, the crazy cruelty of the ninja clan, and the unreliable intelligence of the teammates all brought about endless darkness and almost suffocating pressure, without any refreshing feeling, and it just made me want to give up the book! Especially in the battle part, those battles that can clearly crush the opponent and create a sense of satisfaction are all briefly mentioned, while those that are difficult, difficult, and extremely laborious are described in detail. This is simply deliberately designed to make readers feel unhappy! The author is a liar, and the so-called refreshing articles are simply deceiving people. It is recommended that those with weak psychological endurance should not read this book, otherwise the depression and darkness will be enough to make you feel uncomfortable and want to die for several days!

Snake Princess Story!

The man who single-handedly brought Meituan out of business!

I thought it was a bit outrageous from the beginning when I saw the protagonist being chased by 30,000 dead ninjas. The following scenes such as Jiushi Tetsu and Onikai felt like nonsense.

A kind wife!

Tags of works: Wife Pregnancy ntr

The information I read in Chapter 1: Vicious tongue, two meters tall, unaware of the plot, named Li Wanji... Sorry, the poison is coming!

I read the prologue, then the wedge, and mentally prepared myself to read the first chapter. But after 8 pages, I was completely blown away and I quit.

Even Shennong couldn't bear the poison of persuading people to quit.

I can only say goodbye. Little Yang has become an incompetent man who is irritable and angry. He cannot accept it. Hey, this is unacceptable! Before I leave, I wish the author can continue writing

Death from poison. . . Licking the dog to the limit. . . If you don't use it well when you have the ability, you can see that it keeps licking. Although I know that there will be a better one in the future, but I have no ability to crush him, and the Nine-Tails is likely to be hidden, I continue to support the enemy and add variables. If Minato was really that jealous, Raijin would have killed you with his teleportation sword. And why in martial arts, it is obvious that chakra 1+1 is equal to two. Also support the enemy. Do you believe in your own martial arts power? Martial arts plus chakra? Why not use it to deduce how to obtain the blood inheritance and then cultivate immortality. Too poisonous

Minato's character is too biased, it's completely a second-hand design, and it's extremely toxic.

I thought I could resist a novel that could poison Shennong to death, but after reading 200 more chapters, I couldn't stand it. This novel is not only poisonous, but also dark and distorted everywhere. Minato became jealous, and the third generation became jealous and harmed Kuroko's interests for his own status. Moreover, the Nine-Tails turmoil was started by the third generation to seize the position of Hokage. It's really outrageous. , The original work does not say whether the third generation is a great man or a truly dedicated person, but at least the third generation is sincerely protecting Konoha. In order to protect Konoha, he will sacrifice his life and go around to snatch wives. After snatching Kushina, he will rape Mikoto, let's talk about Fuyoshi. Just because Mikoto and the protagonist went out, Fuyoshi thought that he had an affair with the protagonist, and he started to do it because of this. Is he a fool? Is the capacity so small? Even your wife doesn't believe it? How could he become the leader of the Uchiha clan if he was so unbearable? It's really off the mark

Why did you let me read this book? It makes me vomit.

I was persuaded to quit at the beginning of the chapter. I can play Destiny even if I go to Hokage.

🌸        ，，，，，……       The bad thing is that there are too many darkenings of Namikaze Minato, and Jiraiya is about the same. There are still a few idealists in Naruto, although not many, and the bond in Naruto is forcibly changed to a couple. Although there is something to be seen, it still feels irritating and unnecessary. A man's talent will attract women, but if the protagonist Li Manji can make targeted contributions to women in the ninja world, it may be more reasonable to have a sympathetic character, instead of just using talent to collect the harem, and at the same time respect women, there should be a few confidante who like but will not give in... I have also read the Naruto novel written by another author. The author has a good idea. The fan novels from different perspectives are indeed different, but the shortcomings still exist. Perhaps this is the reason why these two fan novels are not popular enough. I look forward to the author's next novel being more exciting, imaginative, with a reasonable plot and respect for women. You can have a harem, but it shouldn't be a bad one.

Is he really a man? A genin loser in his 20s is a real man?

This book persuades people to quit and is more poisonous, but the other one is also poisonous but is better than this one.

Basically I gave up after seeing the description of Minato and thought of another time traveler

After taking a look at the chapter time, I can kind of understand why I can't read it. The concept of the book from three years ago is really not interesting.

Damn it, you make me want to delete this book every time I want to read on.

Not bad, not bad, self-recommended, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, multiple female protagonists, and has now entered the world of Inuyasha. There are some pictures to see

I don't want to drive a stallion, but the conspiracy theory is refreshing.