I Am in Douluo, and I Deceive Tang Dachui at the Beginning.

I can't stand it any longer. To me, it's a pity to throw it away if it's tasteless. I was attracted by my imagination, but the plot development is messy. It looked okay in the early stage, but what I think soon came out The first poisonous point: it was the early stage of hard training, spending a lot of energy, leaving hidden wounds all over, and then awakening half a level of soul power. The second poisonous point: After reading Chapter 80, Awakening Bluesilver Grass and Wooden Stick, I couldn't use the Clear Sky Hammer I snatched. This may have been mentioned later, but I couldn't hold on anymore. The third poisonous point: the setting is chaotic. The advantage of twin martial souls is that one has practiced to the point of being banned. As long as the physical fitness is improved, the soul rings of the two martial souls can be filled up without bottlenecks. The two martial souls of the protagonist are at different levels. The fourth poisonous point: the protagonist is too promiscuous. He takes a low-level teacher as his disciple, and asks the protagonist to help him upgrade without any help. In Chapter 80, he has no fifth-level soul power, so he evolved the martial soul for the teacher. The fifth poisonous point: too many ideas, no strength to support, too many and too messy operations, unable to improve the level, and still have to ask the villagers to practice. As his strength improves, no matter how he teaches him, he is still a novice and begins to expose his calculated skills. However, Fan discovers that the entire village, including the protagonist, will die. The sixth poisonous point: It is still a matter of cultivation. There are too many ideas. I want this and that, but I don't pay attention to improving the soul power level. I saw him saying that when he reaches level ten and participates in the Soul Master Competition in a few years, he will not be able to hold on anymore. Let's not talk about what level Tang San was at when he participated in the competition. How did the protagonist have the confidence to compete at level ten? Huo Yuhao's son of destiny's million-year soul ring did not dare to operate like that, and his goal was to reach level ten in a few years to compete in the competition. Wow, level ten in a few years. I'm crazy. Backed off. For me, it was very attractive in the early stage, but then the operation became more and more fascinating and I couldn't stand it anymore. Some of the poisonous points that I think may have been addressed by the author later, but I can't persist. To be honest, if Douluo Dalu is ridiculed again as a fantasy sewer, it is also fantasy, and strength comes first. The protagonist is indeed a showman, and improving strength is the most important thing. I feel that the cart is put before the horse

I have no idea what it is about. The protagonist and Tang Hao have only met a few times. Why should Tang Hao pass on the chaos to the protagonist? Just because the protagonist has a big face? What's even more funny is that the protagonist left himself with hidden wounds in order not to arouse Tang Hao's suspicion. Seeing this, I want to say what did the protagonist come to Holy Soul Village for? Just to injure yourself? There is no need to read this book. Just to avoid Tang Hao's suspicion of the protagonist, he injured himself all over. What future does the protagonist have? With no plug-ins, no background, no talent, and even injuries to himself, unless the protagonist has Tianmeng and Electrolux like Huo Yuhao, the protagonist's achievements will be just like that.

Why can't you grasp the key point? Wherever you go, study and study. I don't understand the point of respecting strength. I don't know how to make a decision before taking action. Use foresight to plan whale glue. Medicinal bath. Grass jelly. The soul bone of the Ice and Fire Dragon King. And Dragon Valley. The location of the hundred thousand year soul beast and the ferocious beast. There are even Wanzaixuan Ice Cave in Tianmeng and Longcheng. So many opportunities. Just a few of them can change your destiny against the will of heaven. I don't know how to write about grass roots in Loveland, but I don't know how to make a fool of myself. I will just leave it for blind research. Like Dugu Yan. Bring your own fairy grass and title grandfather. Anyway, it's all about gambling. He even dared to jump in front of Tang Hao and was afraid of Dugu Bo. Moreover, Dugu Bo's character is much better than Tang Hao's little brat. In the original work, the little Zha San detoxified him. But he went through life and death for the little bastard. Not to mention the grandson-in-law. I will play with your broken blue silver grass

The author is writing a Douluo fanfic again. The ideas in the previous book are very interesting, and the expansion of the cultivation system is well written, although it is a bit of a puzzle. I hope this book can be written better and have new ideas that are different from the previous one! After watching Douluo and Qin Shi, the interaction between Tian Hao and the female characters in the book is too raw. Stop being such an animal and make the interaction more normal, okay?

I found a bug. The path the protagonist has taken so far has nothing to do with whether or not he cheats Tang San. To cheat Tang San, you only get a defective version of Iron Armor, but at the cost. Looking at the latest chapters, your life may not be saved, and the risks and rewards are not proportional at all. Anyway, the protagonist's path is to learn from little people, turn them into strong men, and then get feedback from little people in the process. This path is currently feasible. If so, what's the point of tricking Tang San? Is it going to bring unnecessary disaster to myself? Even if it is for joining Wuhun Palace in the future, it is actually too much. Even if you, a free spirit master, join the Spirit Hall in the future, it is equivalent to going to work. Just for the little salary every month, it is necessary to open a hell-level dungeon by yourself. Are you just a part-time worker risking your life for that little salary? Even if you really succeed, Wuhun Palace is still Wuhun Palace. Will people believe you when you tell them that nothing happened? If you fail, you will die without a burial place. Why do you help Wuhun Palace achieve this level? PS: In fact, what Liu Jingang said sounds like a teacher, but it is actually a white glove. This clearly means that he has more room to operate. No matter which force he joins, or in other words, he can go it alone. Even if Liu Jingang joins the empire with the benefit of the protagonist or Wuhun Temple dies in the end, it has nothing to do with the protagonist, because their master-disciple relationship is a secret between the two, and as long as the protagonist does not take the initiative to expose it, no one will know. Just because he wanted to trick Tang San, the protagonist, who could obviously hide behind the scenes, had to jump out and put himself in danger all the time. And it was because of cheating Tang San that his path was blocked. Originally, Wuhun Palace, the two empires, and the seven major sects all had options. But because of cheating Tang San, he could only hang himself on the tree in Wuhun Palace. Then what use would Liu Jingang's gloves have?

And what's even more funny is that the protagonist, who has no cheats, no background, and no talent, still dares to mess with Yu Xiaogang? I just want to ask you, are you impatient? No matter what, Yu Xiaogang is still the son of the leader of the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus. How dare you offend Yu Xiaogang like this, are you not afraid that Yu Xiaogang will kill you?

It's a mess, just like Shi. After almost 100 chapters, the soul power is still less than level 10. What's more, in the future, the soul rings must be absorbed for a minimum period of time to prevent the soul rings from affecting themselves. In the future, I will use self-created soul skills and write nm ability. So if you have the ability, use all the ten-year soul rings. I guarantee that nm will never affect you. Don't use a single soul bone.

Everyone dislikes Tang San and hates him. This is not the reason why you make the protagonist the same or even worse.

Whatever you wrote is messy, just a few words from you. Ah Yin will help you and let you grow up to deal with her husband and children. Did the hundred thousand year old bluesilver grass live on a dog? Even if it is a dog, if the owner wants to hit someone, the dog will help bite him.

Identification completed, poison. The settings are thrown away throughout the whole story, and my feeling after reading it is that it's just confusing.

The writing is a bit far-fetched. Tang Hao and Tang San thought too well. And you made your anus look like this. How could he not take revenge on your villagers. You think anus is a saint. I'm afraid he is eager to destroy all the people and things related to you.

When I wrote Chapter 65, there was a lot of criticism. The author is also awesome. I just said that when I just read it, I always felt that it was so inconsistent. After reading the comment section, I felt relieved and no longer had the desire to pursue it.

The author's last Douluo fanfic was quite good, is he going to write another one? ? In the previous book, even the enemies of the will of the universe were dispatched. What kind of enemies are they fighting in this book? ?

I don't think it's as good as the Kingdom of Souls. I'd rather read more of the previous ones. If you dare to come into contact with a butcher like Tang Hao at the beginning, isn't this forcibly reducing your intelligence? Anyone who has seen Douluo before time travel and has some judgment will not regard those big family soul masters as good people. The second sect Ning Fengzhi and Gu Rong, when they see a genius like Tang San, their first reaction is to strangle them in the cradle, and they want to fool others... The veteran soul masters who have been in the world of soul masters for decades will definitely be more scheming than someone like the protagonist who has never experienced fighting. If he is really smart, he will hide and develop for a while. At the beginning, he wants to reach the sky in one step? After reading the author's previous books, except for the unfinished ones, including Kingdom of God, Naruto, Bad, and Swordsman (I feel like this one is also a bit unfinished), these are all quite good. Now after the latest book was tricked by Tang Hao, he said loudly to everyone he met, "Aren't you really afraid of leaking secrets?" After being cheated, pretending to be dead and growing up quietly incognito is the right way. I also told Tang Yuehua that I was really speechless. He still liked Tang Hao. Is it possible that a person like the protagonist who has never met him in person is more trustworthy than his second brother? Just say something to win sympathy when you meet someone, but if you continue to sensationalize, it will be a double standard. I don't dare to subscribe anymore. Now the protagonist's ten-level soul power can kill people beyond n-level. His combat power is broken and the plot is too fast. I'm really afraid that it will end. I beg the author to think about it carefully, even if it is updated slowly, and seriously consider the character design and plot rhythm, the quality is really good, and no one who spends money to read the book wants to be fed.

Chapter 86: Soul power level ten, obtain the first white soul ring 👍

Can you please stop making it so complicated? Aren't internal power and soul power the same material? There are still two martial soul levels, why have you separated them? Aren't the blue silver grass and wooden stick your martial soul? How can levels be separated? It is divided into blue silver grass level and wooden stick level. Shouldn't it be superposition? I know. You insist on catching me and feeding me poison?

It seems that the only thing in Douluo that can evolve martial souls is fairy grass. The fairy grass that takes tens of thousands of years to mature has this effect. A dozen levels of soul power can make other people's martial souls evolve. After all, it is just "the power of my thoughts." Also, any of the herbs given by Dugubo have the divine will of the Shura God. According to your logic, all the immortal herbs of the Ice and Fire Eyes do not have the divine will. Then how could Tang San not have the divine will? If he had the divine will, you would have been killed by the Shura God when you tricked Tang San with the Clear Sky Hammer. Bugs in the original novel are so normal. If you insist on a conspiracy theory, then whose conspiracy is the protagonist?

The idea is great, but not attractive. I have been thinking about it, and I also vowed not to take the initiative to kill the soul beast. The author has been demoted?

Damn, I'm speechless. The soul power was awakened at half level at the beginning, and then the soul power was still at half level. Up to the 42 chapters I have read so far, there is no change at all, and I don't understand what the hell is written.

This author's books each have the same formula. They are innovative research on extraordinary aspects, but they are all shared. They are as bland as water and not very exciting. After reading it for a while, I don't want to continue. I can only take a look at the occasional creative research on exercises or something.

It's terrible, it's too ridiculous, it's so whimsical

Write fw at the beginning of this book. Fans are always burning their brains to add some original settings. In the later period, the book collapsed again. No cheating. Early readers were displeased and couldn't keep them. It's so cool to open and write in the later period. Everyone is gone. Used by birds. The books are all the same. No progress

This author's books are really poisonous. Every time he writes well at the beginning, he just adds some imaginary crap to rise up. But in the middle, he loses his way and starts to poison. He adds a bunch of second designs that I think are awesome. The second design is just a Douluo fanfic with 80 chapters and only a few levels. There is no soul ring. He also said that the soul ring will limit his own growth. I can't complain. The protagonist he created can only talk on paper and can't stand it.

Why is this poisonous chicken soup called Miao Lun the wooden barrel so famous? How much water a wooden barrel can hold only depends on how much water the barrel can hold, and has nothing to do with the length of the board. After all, when the materials are the same, different people make the barrels, and the amount of water they can hold is also different. Even the same person may have errors. Why is this theory so enduring?

I don't even know what the author wrote, I can't understand it at all

Douluo wrote a disgusting movie, and took advantage of the popularity and went down the road to make money.

When I saw the protagonist doing business under the title Fire Cloud Evil God, I felt a little bit poisonous. Why didn't anyone think that there was a god behind the protagonist's "original martial spirit"? For "Fire Cloud Evil God", the Noumenon Sect is very close to becoming a god. This distance will make the gods fear the gods because they are very close. In this case, the protagonist's taking the title of Fire Cloud Evil God proves that there is a god like Fire Cloud Evil God. And evil corresponds to good, which just proves the reason why the protagonist is strongly targeting the God Realm. Otherwise, in the eyes of others, the protagonist's reason for targeting the God Realm is too weak, but if there are gods involved, then targeting the God Realm is also a matter of course.

The writing at the beginning was okay, but the more I wrote later, the more confusing it became. I couldn't understand what to do anymore, including body training, self-condensing soul rings, and all kinds of messy techniques. The soul power level was also messed up. I gave up.

Douluo Dalu

The writing was very good at first, but it changed once I got to college. The more I thought about it, the more confused I became. I don't know why I persisted in writing more than one million words.