The Demon Lord of All Realms Who Covers the Sky

Naruto what the hell is that. The Hokage system can compete with those who cultivate immortals There is also a superhuman physique. What is that? Zhetian's strongest constitution is also weak What a chaotic body, a mess

Traders can physically enter the platform and learn from a master who is younger than themselves at the age of five... What they travel through is not the original timeline, but directly hands over the skills from the outside world to the protagonist. This is from the first two chapters. This is awesome. Author, your writing potential is already extraordinary.

If there is a platform, I will definitely accept the Wulong Heart Technique. When the time comes, I can give up plug-ins.

Everyone, please stop reading. This is called a nanny licking dog story. The empress of One Piece comes in with a very bad attitude, so you give her a set of secret seeds and the Emperor's Sutra.

Evaluation: The author is a god

It's so disgusting. The Goldfinger of All Worlds was traded, and the result was that the Shocking Fruit, Phoenix Fruit, and Burning Fruit were all chopped down in the world of Zhetian. Only some basic garbage functions were left, which were not even compatible with the things in the Pirate World. It was too heavy on combat power and the rules of the world were different. Zhetian was extremely tolerant and incompatible. Especially things like Devil Fruit, which can be directly used as super potions and directly transform the body and are incompatible, haha

The low-end world of forcing Naruto to hit the high-end fantasy

The protagonist has no goals. He collects a lot of random things that he doesn't use. It's okay to use them as favors. The protagonist doesn't see other things being used. He just collects them like a hamster. He has a low cultivation level and doesn't feel at ease to practice. He also runs around.

It feels like the author has written so many books but has not made any progress at all. Worlds like Pirates and Douluo just come to the world and the world is downgraded.

All kinds of mindless settings are hard-written, and there are a lot of poisonous points.

I really don't understand why the author didn't let the male protagonist drive other students off Mount Tai, especially those who were about to die, it would be better if they were driven away. Or do you want to drag someone to support you even if you know that the other person will die?

Please revise this book into a finished version. Don't let those of us who invest down

This is pure nanny literature and saint literature.

The plot is too rushed, and there are problems with the world and characters you choose. There are many innovations, but most of them are brushed aside. There are also a lot of abstractions about the skeletal device. Overall, the idea is okay, but the written results are not satisfactory.

This author really doesn't know how to write novels. Let's go to a factory.

It's like adding any ingredients or seasonings to a pot, then the heat is not enough, and you rush out of the pot, and what comes out is a messy hodgepodge.

The setting is actually okay, but the author's writing style is really poor. It's like a running account and I can't stick to it at all.

I knew what the hell was going on when I saw Naruto.

I would like to ask, does Qidian have a function to block authors?

It's really ugly to eat, garbage collector.

The protagonists you write are all muscular men with average looks. Do you feel a sense of immersion? Moreover, there are so many female protagonists and female supporting characters who like the male protagonist, and they don't touch any of them until the finale. Do you feel that you have a sense of substitution? Did anyone watch it a lot? You have also written so many novels. Your plot writing is very good, but you are really bad at this aspect. You will remove this aspect, and many people will not want to read your novels. The novel was okay to read at the beginning. Sometimes the emotional intelligence shown in the novel is very high, and when the opposite woman likes him, he will act like a mallet. Your last book, Shade the Sky, was like this. A woman who likes her will delete all of it from her memory. This is really the same as killing her. This kind of reincarnation is really disgusting. Reincarnation without memory is just another person. People are made up of memories. You are really a new person.

Why is it you again? Can I be blacklisted?

It makes me very uncomfortable to see Super Stitch Monster. It makes me very uncomfortable to see various systems of sewing on the body. I can't just practice the Heaven-Shielding Technique, and then supplement it with some treasures and secrets from other worlds so that I can see more clearly. Now that I'm doing this, it's really uncomfortable to have various systems of sewing on my body.

The suture monster cannot become an immortal or a Taoist. All protagonists who have achieved great achievements must have their major skills, and they must create their own. When they are weak in the early stage, they can learn other people's skills, such as the Emperor's Sutra of Shrouding Heaven + the skills and magical powers of powerful worlds. And all kinds of powerful physiques, etc. Are only useful during the weak period, and in the end it doesn't matter.

Some are too soft. I want to see killing. In Zhetian, of course it is killing.

The author directly called Senior Gai Jiuyou. Go to Zishan to empty the inside. Go to the old land of Yaochi to empty out the good stuff and get fat. Cultivation of evil things in the old land of Yaochi There is no future in making small fuss. Go to the forbidden area of ​​​​life on earth.

What is the protagonist's name, Ritian? To satisfy my curiosity, I personally think it should be called Shi Ritian in Zhetian.

Regardless of how well the article is written, there must be ugly 3D pictures at the end of the chapter. It's disgusting.

Three thousand collections and dozens of subscriptions? ?

I guessed it when it hasn't been published for so long. Author, I will continue to support you! !