Douluo: Starting from Deceiving the Blue Silver Emperor

Author, what are you writing about? The first time you read a book, you read this. Ah Yin came out at the front, but didn't even bother with the back? As for the promised heroine, many people came here for A Yin, but after chasing her for so many chapters, they didn't even see a single hair.

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Come on, I'm really looking forward to you writing about the duel with God King Shura and Tang San. But I feel like if you write it like this, Tang San's side will either be resolved within one chapter, or several god kings from the God Realm will participate. Come on, I'm looking forward to it.

Bibi Dong, Hu Liena, Qian Renxue, and Qian Daoliu are the four major licking dogs in Wuhun Palace. The high-level officials of Wuhun Palace lick the enemy's high-level officials. If you can win, you'll be lucky! !

I hope Tang Hao and Ah Yin are not both in charge in the end. Maybe I am too evil. Well, it is possible.

However, if the heroine does not have Ah Yin, I suggest you not write too much about it. The more you read, the more uncomfortable you will feel.

Don't start a new book. It's just for reading your imagination. Slow down the pace a bit and don't be too hasty. Write more side content. Adjust the main content, don't update too much, polish it, don't think about digging holes all the time, just take your time.

It's normal that I can't finish writing. The author himself has written in a mess. Whichever cultivation system he chooses to follow, he should mainly write about that one. If he adopts the martial soul system, he should aim at evolving the martial soul to increase his innate soul power and absorb soul blood. The result is that the martial soul is still the same up to now. If it is based on the Qi and blood system, A Yin has already condensed the Qi and blood soul rings, but he threw them away halfway through the research. Anyway, it looks very messy and there is no main thread at all when doing research

How many levels are you at? I don't have any skills. Is it bad to slowly develop my luck in the Wuhun Palace? I have a backer to protect me, but I insist on showing off everywhere, for fear that others will not know my talent. In the Ice and Fire Eyes, I trust others too much. I was stabbed. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have died a long time ago.

Can you please stop giving me the word count? It has deviated from the main plot. The protagonist's plug-in is a jade disk of good fortune, which can be deduced by luck, but now it feels like all kinds of weird plots are forced to be just for the sake of word count.       ，，cos，，？       ，，100 I know you are laying the groundwork, but it's not too long. It's obvious that there is a very good platform in Wuhun Palace. It can be used to spread the word to the world so that all people without soul power can practice and collect transportation, but they have to run out and wander around. In the words of the older generation, the protagonist is just fooling around all day long and not doing anything serious.

I have seen Chapter 93, and the more I read, the more something is wrong. I thought that A Yin had been banned and could completely restrain his aura. But why did everyone in Wuhun Palace seem to be blind when the protagonist left Wuhun City? Qiandaoliu and Qianxunji didn't react? Even if he didn't react at the time, Wuhundian didn't see the slightest reaction after the protagonist disappeared for so long. 😥 A character who will basically be Qian Renxue's Xiao He in the future is so ignored? And the protagonist also seems inexplicable. Do you believe that Ah Yin can protect you from the possible siege of Haotian Sect? This is not a waste, but stupidity. Not even a protector dares to be so arrogant. I wonder if the talk of luck has confused the protagonist's mind, thinking that he can do anything with his luck, but I don't see the use of this so-called luck other than deduction There are indeed many authors. Just these two chapters were put on the shelf and they were all brought out like this. I doubt if you lost your mind when you wrote this paragraph.

It's a bit like Marika's book. I feel that the protagonist is too desperate. The reason why it feels like the author has been suppressing the protagonist's level. It's like the author has lost the watermelon to pick up the sesame seeds and is getting further and further away from the theme.

I have to say that a creature like the protagonist is extremely disgusting. It is really disgusting to collect something, be tortured, and harm Dugubo's family. Once the protagonist sees something good, he will be unlucky, and so will others, so this book is meant to disgust people.

​​Guess the next plot, the protagonist's village was destroyed, Golden Crocodile Douluo went to check, the protagonist showed great strength, Golden Crocodile Douluo thought Tang Hao killed people and got goods. The protagonist is brought back to the Wuhun Palace. The protagonist's display of talent completely shocks the Wuhun Palace and drives away Yu Xiaogang. The protagonist is famous in the mainland. Tang Hao was expelled from the sect. He found out that he had misunderstood the protagonist and felt regretful. The couple parted ways, but Bibi Dong developed a liking for the protagonist because of his talent and sympathy for the destroyed village, and completely forgot about Yu Xiaogang

The front is fine, but forget it after leaving the Wuhun Palace. It's a bunch of mindless operations to deceive others and yourself.

Tang Hao was absolutely disgusting. . . .

What level is the protagonist? I heard that there is a novel that does not mention the protagonist's level for seventy or eighty chapters. Admire and admire. A weakling wandering around, the protagonist would have died long ago

Maybe I don't understand it very well, but I feel like the beginning is a bit abstract? It is outrageous for a student with extremely low qualifications to write a letter to the future pope telling him how to become a god.

There is no need to start a new book, just adjust the pace slowly and update less often.

After reading a few chapters after it was released, I felt that the protagonist's path was messed up. I looked at the catalog again and got back on track when I went to the Botanical College. With the protagonist's current strength, he should find a basic base to stay and use the luck provided by Yu Xiaogang to improve his training system. At least he must first determine his main training system, determine the outline, and then fill it with golden finger luck. The protagonist's current three-system Jing, Qi, Shen, Jingheshen, has a direction, but the Qi is not yet there, and the martial soul level It was still level one, and it was only improved by Alan's sacrifice, which seriously slowed down the progress of cultivation. Also, because of the golden finger, the setting that you could not get more than 1 silver coin each time was a trap. Also, it was a bit stupid that the protagonist would be unlucky every time he got an opportunity. There was obviously constant luck being absorbed, and even if it was consumed due to chance, it would be quickly replenished. At the low level, it was just the state of luck before meeting Tang Hao and A Yin, and he was not unlucky at that time.

There are too many private goods! The sect and Wuhun Palace should have coexisted peacefully before Qian Jixun's accident! The upper three sects and the lower four sects were all canonized by Wuhun Palace. He would murder the young master of a sect when he had nothing to do? Has he been on the must-kill list so early? That's not how nonsense works! Why is the Chamber of Secrets so hated? It's just because Bibi Dong is too attractive to Lao Sepi! To be honest, compared to real emperors and family heads, the Secret Chamber Douluo is considered to be at the saint level! The eternal emperor and wise monarch you call him doesn't talk about his life, but only his life style. He is not even worthy of carrying the shoes of a secret chamber Douluo! Even the secret room might be many times better than what he was sitting in!

Why does Lingyuan have character cards? It's still the heroine, isn't it just two chapters out?

Ah, I died of poison. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I thought the setting was quite novel and not bad. The author didn't take it seriously when he said it was poorly written before it was released. The result is really poisonous. (The plot and characters are poisonous) First, Tang Hao inexplicably wants to destroy the protagonist's entire village. (It was said that he discovered that there were a few people missing from the village and suspected that the protagonist was informing him) In the name of doing good for Ah Yin, he could still tolerate it. I went to Dugu Bo later to help them solve their own problems, but I didn't even get a single piece of fairy grass. As a result, I was attacked and seriously injured by Dugu Xin on the Sunset Forest Road? The reason is because he is afraid that the protagonist will reveal the Ice and Fire Eyes? Then the protagonist kills Duguxin and his wife. What all the supporting characters have towards the protagonist is that they don't trust each other and want to silence them, they are treacherous and crazy.

I endured the nausea and read Chapter 23. These 23 chapters are all about popular science. . . I'm really convinced! Looking at the catalog, it's the same! Abandoned the pit, said goodbye, can't see a little bit 😅😅😅😰😰😰

Don't believe the introduction, look at the introduction and see the hard work. As a result, a treasure fragment suddenly appeared, a jade plate of good fortune, poisoned to death

The plots of the three Douluo films are almost the same, the only difference is the amount of water injected into them. This is the first time I've seen this, a book where AI deletions, deletions, and deductions circle the money three times. Stallion novels, with an average of four or five chapters, written by a middle-aged greasy and wretched man.

Hahaha... As I watched it, I felt that the progress of the plot was too slow... Chapter 30 has passed and the protagonist is nesting in a small village with the big mouse A Yin! Chapter 60 is over and the protagonist's training has not yet gotten into the main topic. Unexpectedly... Hahaha The author destroyed it before Chapter 70 was released! The paving is too wide... There are too many holes... I can't write anymore...

The innate soul power is low, there is no clear benchmark for the dragon-snake martial arts, and the combat power is vague; the protagonist wants to activate the intelligence mode, but he is frustrated everywhere; he refuses to take it back, and he cannot poke the heart of lsp. It can be seen that the author has his own ideas, and his writing power cannot be controlled, and he immediately jumped in the later stage.

The protagonist is a brainless guy. He talks about everything in the first few chapters. The character's character is also written with many contradictions. On the other hand, Tang Dachui is said to be aboveboard, but it doesn't take long for him to become suspicious!

The combat power in the book has collapsed. A level 98 Super Douluo cannot defeat the Blue Silver Emperor who has just joined the Titled Douluo. Moreover, the spirit beast itself will become an adult after level 70 and has to be hunted for spirit rings. The characters in the book are also very brainless.