Start with a Costume Suspense Drama

The ability to resist poison is so poor that he died of poison after only 51 chapters 😵😵

This song is really poisonous, please give me your money back.

This book has a good starting point, a good idea, decent characterization, a plot that is not cliche but nothing new, and an extremely long script that directly persuaded me to quit. Just copy a sentence or two from the script to know the beginning of the plot. If I really want to watch the drama, I can still afford the VIP ticket. Why come here to read the text script? The story of one chapter is 70% water-based. How can I stand it... I suggest the author to revise these particularly serious chapters when he has time. It is really... Very strange and uncomfortable 😅

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What is the author struggling with? What a great turning point in the plot to marry the heroine and have children! You can't write costume suspense movies all your life. Besides, you've already written the best ones and you can't surpass them in the future. Why not use marriage with the heroine as a breakthrough point to make a small twist? When you fall in love with the heroine and get married, you can take a break and then write some urban romantic comedy to suit the situation, such as "Let's Get Married". When you have a child, you can write some TV dramas about dad during a year or two of rest. When the child is older, make some cartoons. Later, you can enter the film market and start shooting some animations. There are so many classic animations, such as Madagascar series, Ice Age series, Monkey King series, Toy Story series, etc. These films will cultivate their own special effects studio and they will definitely be various blockbusters in the later period.

As of now, the author seems to have nothing more to write and has reached a bottleneck stage. Writing this, if you continue to follow the old routine, you will inevitably reach a dead end. The box office is great, no matter how great it is, there is no such thing as great, so what should I write about? At this time, I suggest that the author increase his own background. Extension direction, personal suggestions: 1. Academic direction. For example, old American violent films always feel very powerful, but I don't know what's so great about them. But if you have some knowledge, you must know that there is a saying called the aesthetics of violence. You can use theory to guide practice and expand through theory. There is also an aesthetic of horror, speed, and adventure. Why is it related to aesthetics? Obviously, aesthetics allows everyone to better accept the work and reach a wider audience. 2. Social influence. In fact, if Marvel heroes are so popular, why are they global and so few people object to them? If you look closely, it is not a simple story, and it also circumvents many ethnic taboos. It is not taboo to ridicule any nationality, race, or certain group of people. At the same time, the prevention of violence is very good. The killings are all symbolic and there are not too many bloody scenes. The ones that are torn apart are usually monsters and robots. As for the humanoids, they were basically beaten until the corners of their mouths bleed, their weapons shattered, or they were beaten away and turned into ashes. At the same time, every hero has a symbolic meaning, such as the little spider and the representative of the diaosi youth. Iron Man (representing the wealthy class who is friendly to common people), a mature, humorous and accomplished male representative. Captain America (representing Americans), represents integrity and justice. Thor (representing Western European whites), represents brainless justice and bravery. Black Panther (representing black people), black people may be the most hidden advocate of rich people. Although the high technology is used in physical combat, it may have the meaning of acne. Captain Marvel (representing confident and self-reliant women). Doctor Who, scientist representative. There is not only the story itself, but also more symbolic meaning. You can consider trying to extend it here. 3. Screenwriting team. In American works, multiple screenwriters work together to create a story line or character line. The last group of people puts these together and then sums up the overall story line. In this way, the content and logic of the work are basically more reasonable. 4. Actor. To be honest, even if a famous American work is remade in China, can it be filmed well in China? I think there will still be a lot of difference, mainly because the actor's skill requirements are not met. To be honest, the acting skills of international movie stars are indeed much better than those in China. Overall, they are especially top-notch. Even though the story has no logic, the acting makes it feel very acceptable and brings you into it immediately. There is indeed very little that can be done in the country. 5. Technical significance. For example, promote technological innovation. 3D technology, "Avatar" is still a milestone. Especially for major European and American movies, the special effects teams do a really good job. In big movies, the light and shadow special effects are even more impressive. In Marvel Heroes, a lot of light and shadow special effects are used, which is very shocking. Basically the bones of a big movie. The technology is not perfect, but you can actually refer to the "X-Men" series. The technical level of the film is relatively low. 6. In fact, at this level of writing, we should start to become more professional and combine professional knowledge with foundation. This will not only improve the readability, but also improve the quality of the work. 7. In terms of recent writing techniques, we should gradually shift from a third-party perspective to writing a story, instead of writing a running account. Especially the description of the story scenes and the storytelling ability should be improved to give people a sense of the picture. At the same time, the characters drawn should be clear. One should try to write well so that the story comes alive. The above are some trivial suggestions.

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In this book, Judu spent hundreds of thousands of his parents' hard-earned money to send her to study for his childhood sweetheart, and finally ran away with someone else. It's awesome.

As for future reading of this book, I suggest you read Chapter 7 and then decide whether you want to continue reading. I have always believed that books are a medium that spreads the author's three views. As for what is written in Chapter 7, I feel that no adult, with a brain, or even a person with an average IQ can do such a thing as long as his three views are normal. Judging from the author's intention, it seems that he wants us readers to think that what the male protagonist is doing is right, that is, feeding it into our mouths. I am not saying that revenge must be avenged. Your male protagonist has an ordinary family and has spent at least 200,000 to support your girlfriend to study and become an actress. It's a good thing now that your ex-girlfriend got angry and kicked you, causing the original owner to die. Even if you don't ask for more compensation, you easily forgive her. What are you talking about the original owner's last wish? What are these three views? You are really a great saint. This kind of book should be appreciated by people with high spiritual realm like you. Ordinary people like me are not worthy of reading this book.

Give me an opinion. In urban film and television works, I think you can write about classic works. What is the difference between third-level, sixth-level and ninth-level works? Personally, my own perception and interpretation of the work. Have your own perspective. Through fragments and lenses, readers can write the spiritual points and convey the points of the play from the side. For example, when writing "The New White Snake", some descriptions are based on data and audience descriptions, which seems dry. If you bring in a clip, for example, a song, "Duqing", what's so good about it? How can you catch other people's feelings in one fell swoop? How can you clearly explain the cause and effect of things in one fell swoop? How is the role reflected in the play, where is the artistry, what is the current status of local opera, and what kind of impact will it have on local opera later. Wait, express your insights and comments, and the expanded content of this fragment will be very rich, layered and logical. For example, when writing "Bright Sword", some people focus on the influence of the drama, some focus on the subversion of Li Yunfei's image, some focus on the archetypes of war methods and outstanding criticisms, some focus on the difference with other "divine dramas", and some focus on the appeal. A classic work certainly does not have only one merit. I think the same play, with different perspectives, must have different focuses, and the richness of the show will also be different. Similarly, what you see in "The New White Snake" is the same as what I see, but the focus is definitely different. What I saw was that the white lady was loyal to her feelings, managed her family virtuously, and did not strive for fame and fortune. She simply fulfilled all the fantasies of a good wife and mother. Xu Xian is not without merit. The stubbornness of the scholar and the benevolence of the doctor, although he is indecisive, are indeed endearing in terms of benevolence. Xiaoqing looks naughty, but is loyal and hardworking, and is inseparable from many funny plots during this period. The brother-in-law is loyal and dedicated to his duties. At the same time, the transmission of previous traditional culture and the elaboration of the culture of gods and ghosts are carried out. There are many places for enlightenment. I hope that the above meager and immature suggestions can give the author a little inspiration.

A piece of advice for the author: The work should make use of strengths and avoid weaknesses. If you are not good at family ethics, just give it a brief introduction. Although there are flaws, the main body is coherent. You can write again after you have developed your skills. Don't force yourself into some areas that you are not familiar with. In addition, many dramas can be explored, and they can change from case-solving suspense to other suspense, such as the spy game "Insidious". "Infernal Affairs" undercover, "In the Name of the People" check, for example, historical dramas can be extended to the big dramas "Yongzheng Dynasty", "Iron Teeth Bronze Teeth Ji Xiaolan", "Liu Luoguo" I think some people are anti-Qing, but some themes are still advisable, anti-Qing, don't play palace battles like "The Legend of Zhen Huan". If not, the Bao Zheng series, "White Snake", "Dragon" and "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" are all grand. Large-scale mainstream themes, "Bright Sword", "Shunliu" and "My Group" Personally, I feel that classic dramas still have merit. It just depends on the expression skills, not whether others have written it. It can be used as a jump class to develop your writing skills first. If it doesn't collapse, the next book will be better. Many authors make the transition this way. For example, the leader of the kindergarten

Anyone who is over 10 years old would not think that writing a script would make him popular. . .

Why are there still authors who write about ex-girlfriends? Whoever writes about ex-girlfriends is not scolded. Accepted

Have the authors of female channels come to write books on male channels? There are so many disgusting books.

The author really doesn't have those extras of thousands of years of culture. Journey to the West will be scolded when it is filmed. If he really doesn't have this background, why should the audience buy it? We should make some short plots with high ratings, such as being in school and chasing a murderer during the day. I really thought that any drama in the past would be popular now. The Legend of White Snake took advantage of the underdeveloped Internet at that time and the fresh themes. It's a hot commodity right now. Don't deny it, who watches musicals nowadays?

Oh hao

So far so good. The dramas I am writing now, including the dramas mentioned in the introduction, are all very good. Suggest some opinions that are not opinions. Write a few fewer lines in the lyrics. There is nothing to say about free now, but it will be less in the future. For a song, you only need to add two climax lines, and those who like it will automatically have the sound in their heads. Those who don't like it can just cross it, and those who are interested can just search it. How can I avoid being criticized by others. How nice! Plot, please don't let the protagonist act. Although I haven't written it yet, there are signs of it. There are many actors' articles to read if you act by yourself. It is not competitive and will become procrastinating... I would rather see the protagonist filming quickly. It's okay to be a director, and it's okay to sing. As long as the main line is filming and writing scripts, that's fine. Of course, when you have written millions of 😁 words, you can do whatever you want. Now, as long as you have a main line, it won't be a big problem for the sub-line author to write whatever he wants. As a family, if you don't agree, you are right. Please don't fight!

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This introduction is a bit outrageous, which made me lose the motivation to read further.

I feel speechless when I see that the protagonist doesn't want the two million. This is the money he deserves. Even if the protagonist doesn't need this little money in the future because of being a time traveler, it's understandable that he doesn't want the total of 100,000, but he should want the two million. Even five million is not much. The protagonist's mother is right that the protagonist is a coward.

The ex-girlfriend and 2 million thing is too poisonous, and the number of words is not so watery.

Do you write a book just for your own pleasure? We haven't even filmed the first part, so let's talk about the characters in the fourth part? Do you think this is better? In fact, he looks like a fool, pretending to be cool for the sake of showing off, trying hard to create an image of the protagonist being indifferent and pretending to be cool. Didn't you find that there is no difference after writing it? It would be better to say that I wrote this just to show my sage in front of others. The purpose is clear, and at least the logic is smooth! Moreover, the company's treatment and explanation of what it values ​​is not adequate at all. When you come up with such a good script, write a Spring Festival Gala song, and poach people from many sources, such a talented Penguin even has concerns. There is no improvement in treatment and other things, and you are trying hard to come up with an artistic conception that is not just for show. Then why are you copying these?

I'm convinced. It's obvious that I don't need to write about my ex-girlfriend. I'll write about an ex-girlfriend first. You should write the script well. I have to talk about how good your voice is. It's disgusting. Originally, my ex-girlfriend saw your comment and said that it would be gone after more than fifty chapters. Here comes another big poisonous point. Can't you change it? The subject matter is so good.

Good! The current progress of the plot is still fascinating!

Tell me, which old author's new vest is it?

I was convinced. A young man in his twenties was writing Journey to the West and Romance of the Three Kingdoms. . . . It looks so embarrassing. If you wait until you are forty or fifty years old to write these two books, it will be fine. You can write them when you are in your twenties. . . . .

Can Chang'an Twelve Hours compete with the young Bao Qingtian and the detective Di Renjie? After reading the title, I felt like vomiting

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According to the author's updates, the author became an apprentice of a book on February 8th and came to the conclusion that the author is a eunuch.

So boring. Another routine of getting dumped at the beginning. Might as well be a little new. Just like what his mother said, a melon that is forced is not sweet, but even if it is fed to pigs, it cannot be taken advantage of by others.