Mastered Powers Are Game Concepts

It's too messy. It's originally well-written, but I insist on excluding some things. Maybe it's the author's specialty, but it makes us feel uncomfortable.

Hey, first of all, the concept and setting of this book are good, but it is too messy 😢, there are too many words about the system, and the main plot of the protagonist is not clear. So it's very messy. I suggest you change it.

I don't usually play games. Can you simplify it a bit? I don't understand it very well. Just be more straightforward.

The cheat setting is OK! The plot is probably okay too! ! ! But the writing is so fucking messy! ! It makes my brain hurt to watch! ! ! ! ! ㄟ(▔ ,▔)ㄏ

I wonder if the author can understand that there is a problem with his ability to express himself...

The setting is good and the plot is okay, as long as you can find the plot from a lot of settings

It's very messy, the plot is messy, the setting is messy,

There is so much nonsense that has nothing to do with the plot. Is the word count just water? I'm just a novel reader, so I don't need so much popular science. The plot ends as soon as the science is introduced! ! !

Author, sometimes you have too many settings. You can add some settings related to superpowers or the protagonist, but there are too many extra settings or knowledge when the protagonist does experiments and the like. It is a long paragraph, so I can write it briefly.

It's so messy. I saw my head was swollen and my writing was messy. There was a lot of nonsense and the meaning was unclear. I felt like I was just writing randomly. I wrote whatever came to my mind. I pieced it all together, and every word was poisonous.

Why is the Empire Wind and Cloud Volume so similar to the Daqian Wind and Cloud Volume in "Two or Three Things in the Dungeon"? The same four options, the same Qin Tianjian, super high talent, looking back at the beginning, they are 60% similar.

The setting is really good, but it's a pity that the writing is too rushed and messy, and some places are a bit weak. In short, my feeling is that if you want to see the setting, it's okay, and if you want to read the story, you can leave because the writing is too boring.

You are a third-rate duelist with a fourth-rate deck The president is so beautiful, I have decided to play cards in a new copy Also, DIY cards, the plot may be very biased

If you say my writing is messy, then let me talk about the outline. The year White Night Marvel was born, Conan began to be serialized, and the timeline of the world began to move towards a situation where things were constantly developing and changing, but the dates were confusing and difficult to understand. At the same time, it is not that time itself begins to become knotted and chaotic, but that countless parallel worlds begin to intersect. Conan actually tells stories about countless parallel worlds. Christmas n times a year just feels like a white night. Other parallel worlds intersect and then separate, and there is no time confusion. So only people who have no other timelines like Bai Ye and no parallel peers of the current world will feel that the world is chaotic. Then there is the first world Xuemo mainly talks about nothing, just the first bucket of bloody original capital and stable passage channels. So it must be the end of the world. I chose Xue Mo not only because I didn't want to write about the Resident Evil, but also because she is older and generally older. Gaochengfu, but that person is a right-winger, and the sun flower that is set to promote awakening will have a conflict plot, and the brain has lost its second creation base) ⇒ Introduce a wave of female-dominated survivor teams, let Bai Ye participate in a wave of management, and then add n to the harem , but it went astray again⇒ Then it was the brainwashing cell⇒ Return to Marvel⇒ Play games to accumulate information⇒ Find a reason to travel through the second world, strengthen a wave of the body, The main process is that Xianqin Tianjian is old enough to be beaten. Tianxia, then Shangdu, Liucheng, Xuehai, Jianyu, Gongcheng, Weichuan, Shujin pretending to be slapped in the face all the way, and then the four great masters of Kyoto and the old emperor commented, and so on. Although the writing is a little crooked now, it's not a big problem. It should not return at the speed of light. The third world is about self-cultivation. Go to a world where sub-professionals are mainly used to learn skills. Because Saeko and her mother gave her a luminous cooking label, she probably went to learn cooking skills. I haven't thought about the fourth world yet, let's find attendants or make equipment Probably like this first.

The writing is messy, and it feels like it's pieced together here and there, and one thing after another feels fragmented.

Did you write it using software? Piles of mess. .

The setting is good, but the plot is too confusing

Most of this novel is popular science, and it slipped away.

The author has already written a book that is confusing. There are a lot of popular science articles. Looking back, what is the title? Just build a relationship with the first dungeon, and then fill the Pacific Ocean like crazy

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To be honest, I have no idea what is being written. Erotic, dark, villain boss... Inexplicable