The Noble Mage Behind the Rebirth

The author's writing skills are too strong... It's obvious that he is a master but not a master, but he is really strong at controlling the rhythm of the whole book so well. I hope he won't go too far in the future, otherwise the foreshadowing and details in the front will be a pity. The author's greatest advantage is that he weakens the player's sense of presence and balances the three key points of "the expansion of the world view", "the development of the main plot", and "the supplement of the main content by the side plots". He also uses some post-text explanations to supplement the worldview and make the whole world more real and concrete, which is something ordinary authors cannot do. But this also makes the rhythm of the whole novel difficult to control. And the entire book has been set in this main world. If the author continues to describe the "real world" or the "legendary world", the authenticity of the worldview will be damaged and the rhythm will be more difficult to control. I hope the author will clarify the writing content and theme By the way, Please do not let the players interfere too much with the main plot, otherwise the balance created by the author will be broken. The role of the players is to extend the world view, not to promote the main plot. Promoting the main plot should be the task of the protagonist or important character, otherwise the protagonist/important character's sense of existence will be reduced In any case, the author please maintain a good rhythm and advantage, come on (Please improve) By the way, it is too short

It's tied, but the local student gang who fully subscribed and had no money to reward shamelessly came to make a few comments without invitation. This is the first time I write a book review at Qidian. Please forgive me if it offends me (probably, there are no spoilers?): The first 40 or 50 chapters of this book are indeed slow to gain momentum and are a bit dull. Many chapters are just some settings, introductions to the background, etc., But it is a free chapter after all, so it is not a loss. But after I saw the plot of entering the academy, I slowly started to get addicted to it. I just opened it casually and took a look, but now I can't help but finish it in just a few days (it's only 510,000 words, so why don't you update it quickly!!!) After reading the first few dozen chapters, I kept saying that the main contradiction is the trend of the old and new aristocratic era, etc., And I always feel that the whole article is just like this. . . . Um. . . . It's a bit simple and ordinary, but after seeing the historical secret in more than 80 chapters that the moon was actually reversed, it made me feel better! ! I feel like the setting is very deep and I look forward to the follow-up expansion|ω•`) The title and introduction of this book are really too serious and comparative. . . . It's unremarkable. I almost missed this good book. The cover is also very ordinary (I don't even remember when I added this book to the bookshelf...) But! After actually opening it and looking at it! Dawei Tianlong! I can tell at a glance that you are not a serious person! This is an LSP that only reads countless books! Why can I see it? Of course it's because I am also an LSP (☆-v-) So why is the title and introduction of a book with such a naughty and bookish style so serious? (╯°Д°)╯┻━┻ Pigeon, your book title and introduction are really hard to attract. Hey, readers! If you can't change the title of the book, why don't you change the introduction? I have to complain about the protagonist's surname. I am so poisoned by the electromagnetic field that every time I see the protagonist's surname, I automatically pronounce it as Cavendish (-ι_- ) I never said how old I am, I just said that I haven't reached adulthood yet, and I don't know if the coming of age ceremony in this world is 2442, and the last time mentioned in the article is 2457, so the protagonist should be between 15 and 16 now. Is it so big? Although the protagonist is always Versailles, it is really interesting to read in the author's writing. Many plots make me feel secretly happy, and it is surprisingly immersive. This is indeed the result of the author's good plot development and successful character creation. The main character felt a little guilty towards the main character and compensated him for the dragon egg. I don't know why I was suddenly so excited by this plot. I started thinking about the day in the future when the Duke really wanted the main character to inherit the family business. The main character couldn't express it. I think my sister is quite suitable. I'm just an ordinary behind-the-scenes mage. I have seen a lot of people complain that the author always uses elegance to describe the protagonist, who is boring and coquettish. I have almost exhausted this word. Personally, I think it is okay, but if every time I write about the elegance of the protagonist, I can change it to one or two short descriptions of actions or expressions based on the plot. It would be better to use these descriptions to reflect the elegance of the protagonist instead of directly saying that he is elegant_(:3 ⌒ﾞ) . . . . I can't think of a specific description. Hahaha ,▔)ㄏ There are currently only 500,000 words, and there are not many supporting characters. The character creation of various supporting characters is not particularly rich and three-dimensional. However, each character is now relatively recognizable and basically has its own characteristics. For example, the Duke's father who is secretly narcissistic and uses his own books as famous quotes, there are The sister who forces Maomao to learn etiquette even if she doesn't want to use her brain, the second brother who once changed his gender and was played by tentacles, and the European emperor girl who sticks to Loli. They are not the kind of supporting characters that are very popular and flat. It can be seen that the author has put his heart into it. He should gradually enrich the images of various supporting characters in the future. In addition, I have a lot of senior sisters here! Look at how many roles she has! She has a mysterious background, and she must be a big shot! She is also a very independent and kind-hearted girl! They also exchanged love tokens (Da Wu)! Wouldn't it be a success to set up a welcome trap together! Although the protagonist is just craving for her fate feedback, Is it possible that I will be greedy for her body one day? ! ! Speaking of which, the special names of these months are really weird, but I really can't remember which month xx is, so it's very troublesome. Why not! Just use a special name when writing the month, and it's a win-win situation! In the end, there are basically only 10 points in each chapter! Some authors have more than 20 points! Do you want some coins? ! ! I saw that there was some talk about it, but I just finished it in a row, so I feel that although each chapter is really not too long, it's actually pretty good. Yes, but the author actually handles these aspects in a very detailed and appropriate way, and uses very concise language to describe it. (Personally, after all, I don't really want to see a series with many chapters, nothing new, and after reading it, I feel like I haven't seen anything at all, and it's just a boring game.) But that's it every day, if you follow up. It's really painful, but some plots are also necessary. It's impossible for every chapter to be so exciting. It's really easy to have a feeling of water (●—●) So, please give me more updates! !! Forget it, as long as this pigeon doesn't become a eunuch_(:* ｣∠)_ Hey, I actually have so many words in just bb and bb. If only I could be as good at writing papers (0 x 0)

The scope of this book is too high... It is obvious that I have not reached the point where the ninth level is everywhere and the eighth level is not as good as a dog, but I am surrounded by power struggles among the forces that can stably cultivate the ninth level.       ，， Things started to be complicated and unrelated to each other, but then they gradually became entangled and connected everyone together. The various forces gradually began to influence the whole body. They were dragged into the whirlpool of desire together. No, or they were the whirlpool itself. No one can stop, and no one wants to stop, whether it is free birds (liberals) and towering mountains and rivers (precipitators), ancient city-states (revolutionaries) and new machines (revolutionaries), or even eternal rules (outside the sky?) Or the eternity of nature (cutting-edge power). Some are not binary oppositions, but it is difficult to achieve balance. The moving one crushes the standing one, and the standing one intercepts the moving one. The crushed one becomes the moving one, regardless of whether it is still intact. The one that is intercepted becomes the upright one, even if it becomes a cushion. And when there are enough wreckage, the naturally formed vortex will collapse naturally or stop due to the rules of force and then collapse. But it's not important, at least for those wreckage, it's not important... And the protagonist has a feeling of wanting to pull this ancient city-state and the mountains and rivers where it is rooted, as well as the birds within the territory, preferably while maintaining the ecological environment, and even wants to fish in troubled waters to master the power of machinery, and then draw nutrients from those wreckage to become an existence that cannot be shaken by rules and nature. My rating:6 {"TopicId":"587233067492507648","TopicName":"Weekly Divine Chapter Submission"}{"Topic Id":"776819114126802944","TopicName":"Praise this novel"}{"TopicId":"804728532092780544","TopicName":"The Book Famine Terminator"}

I finished reading it in one day and would like to briefly talk about this book. This book combines the elements of Reborn Player Alien, Cthulhu, DND and other elements. The plot writing is not bad. If I were to rate it, I would give it 7.5 Points. My own criterion is that it is above 6 points and 7 points. A score of 8 is worthy of a recommendation vote, a score of 8 is worthy of a full subscription, a score of 9 is worthy of a monthly vote for daily updates Comments below First, the Cuckoo Pigeon is short and weak, 2000 a day, a book with more than 200 chapters, three or four I finished reading it in just an hour, and I have to slowly wait for updates every day. The road to book maintenance is long Secondly, I read it over and over again. The protagonist is not only noble, but also has the best food and clothing. He can get up to level 7 or 8 by visiting the secret realm. I feel that the author is writing a stable and invincible flow. I feel that the player who comes to another world is the protagonist. You are the reborn protagonist who gives out rewards. The protagonist does not have as many supporting roles, which feels weird Thirdly, it can be seen that the author is still ambitious and has prepared the plot lines volume by volume. In this regard, I suggest that it is best to prepare common NPCs and not forget them every time new and old people appear. For example, the eighth-level guard of the protagonist, a special tool man, who does not say many ruthless words, will only appear in fights later. His name is invisible at other times. You can give him some attributes, more lines, and interact with the protagonist. It will be more interesting Finally, as a noble, it is different from those who traveled through time. The corrupt noble life will temper your will. You can write more about this aspect, how loyal and unyielding the protagonist is, sister, female swordsman, female mage, female knight, female elf, goddess, etc., They are not necessarily together, writing about ambiguity is also excellent 😃

(๑• . •๑) I can't tell you what attracted me to this book. I have to say that maybe he is too slow for what I like to see. Books, good books. Judging from the name notes included behind almost every picture. The author wants to try his best to enrich this world. In terms of settings, it is almost perfect. Oh, by the way, the only drawback may be that the beginning is a bit messy (← for very few people) sp: Add a sentence in the middle, hope the author can add some refinement. Simply put, warm your brain slowly. To be honest, most of the online articles nowadays are obscene works by the authors. Pay attention to coolness. Quick. If the protagonist is awesome, just adjust the protagonist. The protagonist kills Mai, the protagonist is righteous, what happens to the protagonist and so on. That's it. By way of comparison, how many books now have leaflets filled in with supporting characters? Actually, what the author wrote is not a web article. It's a novel. I scrolled through the comments section, and some people said that the author was stupid and stuffed some things with unexpected plots. Too much foreshadowing. Puff. . . . For example, if you watch Douluo, the relationship between Xiao San and Xiao Wu is briefly mentioned. Delete other things that do not advance the plot. So can it still be called a novel? May not be appropriate. Put another way. Have you ever eaten instant noodles? , Is it fast and refreshing? However, if it is a delicacy, it will be cooked slowly and carefully. You will also savor it when you eat it. That's the difference. In short, so far, the author has written very well. I hope this world can flow out from the author's writing. Then it took shape in my mind. Then shine brightly. ↑ refers to the sense of penetration. Hope, gradually from slow to rapid.

Background setting of the Circle of Truth (only for Avis fools, referencing Marvel's Hydra): Purpose of the Circle of Truth: The ultimate power does not belong to this world. Everyone thinks that the Circle of Truth is the remnant of the Circle Council of the ancient Magic Kingdom. In fact, they are just forces that we supported in the Magic Kingdom era to cover up our existence. The Circle of Truth is older than you think. Beyond our world, ancient beings dwell beyond the stars. They are so powerful and terrifying. Every time they come, they bring darkness and death. The Circle of Truth was formed for the sole purpose of fighting them. The old civilization is destroyed, a new civilization is born, and the cycle starts over and over again. We come to realize that only the power of the Old Gods can defeat the Old Gods. We try to control their power, and then use this power to hunt them, and then become stronger. Whether it was the explosion of the floating city or the Speaker of the Federation of Iter, it was just our actions to hunt the old gods. Those ninth-level people you died were just incidental. There have been more than one ninth-level prophets in the history of the Circle of Truth. After studying the web of destiny, they came to the conclusion that no force can rule the world forever, and the old rulers will always be replaced by new ones. Therefore, the Circle of Truth will never be an overt ruler, but will influence the world secretly, and we will never put our eggs in the same basket. Whether it is the Gloria Empire, the St. Mecia Empire, the Magic Council, or the Ittel Federation; whether it is the nobles or the rebels. We are everywhere. As long as we observe it from different angles, we will find that - for example, the famous Olivendi family, the crown of the Howling Crystal Bird, looks like a ring when viewed from the bottom up. Cut off one head and two more will grow. No matter which force comes to the end, we are the only winners. As for why you prefer the Olivendi family? That's because the next leader of Circle of Truth has his foundation there, so we can't give him a mess. He is the brightest being among the stars, destined to rule everything! ! Fiona? ? ? No no no. It was just a cover, a cover to protect his brother Anvis Even during the day, the stars still existed, but they were obscured by the light of the sun. Did no one think of this layer? ? Fiona's powerful talent, bloodline, and destiny will make everyone subconsciously ignore the existence of her brother Anvis. No matter how pure and powerful Fiona's bloodline is, she is only at the legendary level, while Avis possesses the true "god" power comparable to the stars. Son of Destiny, haha, if the crystal bird does not live in this world, how can a god be manipulated by fate? (Anvis can use this statement to help Fiona attract firepower when necessary) Hail Hydra! ! ! !

I finally got the first placeｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

It's very interesting, and the further you go, the more interesting it gets. Very logical and interesting

The details are great, but I feel that the author has not grasped the focus well. I don't know whether you want to write about Harry Potter or A Song of Ice and Fire. Let's talk about campus, and the foreshadowing is very long. Let's talk about the power of family and country, and there is always ink around. The villain only has one or two lines in the foreshadowing, and there is no sense of epicness. The Cthulhu style is really difficult to grasp. If it is not written well, it will become abrupt, and if it is not crazy, it will not be Cthulhu.

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When the bookworm who has been a prostitute for so many years goes to Qidian. Com to pay for the genuine version for the first time, cheers for the author (›´ω`‹) Good luck with you

You are too perfunctory, copy and paste... Just make up the number of words, and the content is just that little

Since this post was created on June 2, 2023, I have watched the pigeons go from weekly to monthly updates. It was once thought that they would be given up, and then I actually saw the end of the day. It was really great

Does this ☝️ look like it?

The author I thought But the author in reality

Once a virtual game comes out, the global gaming industry will be completely wiped out. . Speechless. A game can be made of yarn. I play Xiaoxiaole and your League of Legends is having fun, but I'm too lazy to play.

Once upon a time, I was also a pigeon. Until one day, a group of people held up matches and shouted: "Burn it, burn it." They came to my shop with ferocious faces. They blew up my bookstore and set fire to books one after another with matches. They searched frantically, searching. Finally, when there was only one door left in my bookstore, they finally walked away crying and shouting about updates and depositing manuscripts. I realized how hurtful it is to be short and weak. But, does Pigeon really have no manuscripts? ๛ก(ｰ̀ωｰ́ก)

Hello author, I have copied your book on other platforms. The feedback from readers is very good, the popularity is very high, and there are a lot of payments. I plan to buy a new car at the end of the year. I hope you can update a few more pictures, so as not to affect my income or make my readers anxious. 🤝

There is a shortage of books. Can any book friends recommend any novels with protagonists like Anvis, the kind of gentle and elegant people who speak and behave calmly and appropriately (no funny words, no rhetoric, and no bad words, I've had enough of this kind of thing 😭)

Come and recommend this book to everyone. I am short of books and am looking for high-quality western fantasy novels. At the same time, I will give away my exquisite small bookshelf Jidao Demon, Soul of Negri, Summoning Nightmares, Japanese Weird Creation, My Healing Game, Noble Mage Behind the Rebirth, My Cell Prison, Pseudo Prince, Wizard World, Lanke Chess, First Seeker, Necromancer and Super Cemetery, Battle for Paradise, Pokemon: The Dark Giant, Late Night Bookstore, Time Travel Begins with Bandits, Invincible Loneliness, Swordsmanship in the Snow, Naming Technique of Night, The Natives of this World Are Super Fierce, Starting with the Golems (Updates are stopped now, but the first 290 chapters are still enough) There are still some that I have forgotten or deleted before, I hope you can recommend more books to me!

The person in the mirror is extremely elegant!

Pigeon group: 450631831

In fact, I don't understand the good thing about this kind of fourth natural disaster. You have no means to control them, and they can pass information at will. When the time comes, your secrets will be stolen. When they level up, can you withstand the attacks of players? It can only be said that raising a tiger is a danger. There are so many players in the world, and you can't control their destiny. You know the butterfly effect. Maybe a player will say a word and you will be targeted by a strong player. And you can't feel your destiny as a player, but can you feel that a strong player is targeting you? Have you never thought about such a big disadvantage? There are players everywhere, mysterious organizations, and student societies. It is too unequal to let the indigenous people play. A few of these players are real people and kill people at will. Wouldn't that be chaos? All I can say is don't underestimate the cruelty and chaos of players. Are you sure that your players will not betray you? I don't think so. They are not real people, so how can they always be guaranteed?

The newly promoted ninth-level prophecy mage—the man in the mirror (Anvis Olivierdi), the dark curtain behind the bright stars!

It's a good book, but the ending is too fast, so I skipped the outline.

It's a rare novel with rich details and characters. Fiona is so cute, a bit like Pandora Hearts' sister, so cute! It's just a pity that it ended in fast forward. I really hope the author can fix the problem

The water is getting more and more wet, and there is no need to fill in the holes. The front is as grinding as the back is. Direct and super fast completion

It's rare that I can pick up a book that I put away too slowly and read the finished book.

Suddenly I remembered that this book ended without the eunuch. It was not easy.

Gu Gu Jing, you really chose the right name. Forget it, Gu Gu is dead. I'm speechless =_=